A chorus I just wrote, can anyone help me with the verses?

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    LyricsAngel said:

    Default A chorus I just wrote, can anyone help me with the verses?

    A crazy need of change is screaming
    It’s slowly growing on the inside
    It feels like I'm just dreaming
    I can't explain it all to you tonight...
    “It’s not right!” I yell, but you don’t have to be fair
    No matter what I say you’re still gonna dare
    But I can't understand this concept of "me and you"
     
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    alexmarkmylyrics said:

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    It's hard to suggest verses without knowing much about the song. It sounds like a relationship song though so...

    If you think of the chorus as a 'summing up' of how you are feeling, then the verses could be events or things that have been said that make you feel this way.

    A good example of this is one of Avril Lavignes first singles 'complicated'.

    The chorus is a big shout moaning about things getting complicated whereas the verses are all examples of how things are getting that way.

    Then later on you can have a bridge which might reveal something else.

    For example,

    There might be a big change coming but you're going to try stick it out

    or

    You're about to give up

    or

    Recognition that you're slowly understanding the concept of me and you - you can also add sarcasm here

    Anyway hope that helps.

    Alex
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    Thank you for your help, I will try to finish the song later
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    If you can tell us some more about what the situation your writing about is, I'll write some verses.