Have a title for this song?

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  1. LyricsAngel's Avatar

    LyricsAngel said:

    Talking Have a title for this song?

    I just wrote this really quick, that's why it's written how it's written, with no rhyme or anything. Not all songs have to rhyme, right? I don't even have a title for it, not yet at least. The first verse just popped into my head while I was messing around with my guitar, and also i don't think the chorus is any good

    how come we are exactly where we started?
    i thought we’ve gotten really far
    i guess you were running in circles, and i was chasing after you
    it’s not my fault, i didn’t know the road
    and i still don’t know where it leads, you shouldn’t have

    -Chorus-
    told me there’s a shining light at the end of the tunnel
    when you knew the tunnel doesn’t even have an end
    i was afraid i could lose you in the dark i’ve seen there
    cause you weren’t patient enough to wait, you were always ahead
    now looking back on it i know what fear can do

    i say i want to change but you don’t believe me
    i don’t blame you, neither do i
    i guess i was trying to fool everyone, especially myself
    it’s hard to change in a blink of an eye
    cause i don’t know how to begin, i shouldn’t have

    -Chorus-
    believed there’s no shining light at the end of the tunnel
    when i was aware that you would’ve been there for me
    i was afraid i could lose you in the dark i’ve seen there
    cause you weren’t patient enough to wait, you were always ahead
    now looking back on it i know what fear can do

    -Bridge-
    just leave it behind, it’s easy for you to say
    cause you don’t have to do it
    if you want me to fall, at least be there to catch me
    cause we both know that last time around you

    -Chorus-
    told me there’s a shining light at the end of the tunnel
    when you knew the tunnel doesn’t even have an end
    i was afraid i could lose you in the dark i’ve seen there
    cause you weren’t patient enough to wait, you were always ahead
    now looking back on it remember when you
    …..
    told me there’s a shining light at the end of the tunnel
    when you knew the tunnel doesn’t even have an end
    i was afraid i could lose you in the dark i’ve seen there
    cause you weren’t patient enough to wait, you were always ahead
    now looking back on it i know what fear can do
     
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    karlsanada10 said:

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    I don't want to lose you...

    Leaving me behind...

    Hmmm...can't think of anything.
     
  3. nyvega002 said:

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    I would go with Unending Circle, Endless Tunnel, or Hopeless Wish
     
  4. LyricsAngel's Avatar

    LyricsAngel said:

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    Thank you very much nyvega002 & karlsanada10
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Jeez Angel, it's almost scary that you can write so much stuff that I can get so personally involved in. This is really really great! And I love the wrap-around style.

    I like Endless Tunnel too. Or Tunnel of Dark ... a twist on the cliché "tunnel of light".
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    Tunnel of Dark sounds amazing...
    And by the way, I'm really glad that you like my songs and it's great that they're relatable, but I wish people wouldn't have to go through these situations...
     
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    Tracy-Turnblad said:

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    Rad song, reminds me of Miley Cyrus' song Full Circles
     
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    MoonRide*r* said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by LyricsAngel View Post
    Tunnel of Dark sounds amazing...
    And by the way, I'm really glad that you like my songs and it's great that they're relatable, but I wish people wouldn't have to go through these situations...
    Glad you like my suggestion
    and omg yes, if people just didn't have to go through stuff like this ... what a sweet dream ...
    There is no glamour in sudden death, and nobody ever wins a war.
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    SiLvEr_MooN said:

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    "you shouldn’t have told me there’s a shining light at the end of the tunnel
    when you knew the tunnel doesn’t even have an end"

    I liked the chorus, especially that above sentence.

    What about "Vicious Circle"? (I know it sounds more like a title of a scientific article )

    PS: I have been looking for a signature for a while, can I use the sentence I mentioned? (please don't ask me to pay for copyrights )
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    Vicious Circle, that's a good idea....
    And yes, you can use whatever you want for your signature, I'm really glad actually
     
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    SiLvEr_MooN said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by LyricsAngel View Post
    Vicious Circle, that's a good idea....
    And yes, you can use whatever you want for your signature, I'm really glad actually
    Ok, thanks. Look at my signature now!
    Last edited by SiLvEr_MooN; 07-07-2010 at 08:53 AM.
    I'm listening to >>> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zFD8ZF8svzw
     
  12. carina<3 said:

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    I like the suggestion "Tunnel Of Dark" .
    But 'Underground' would be good too , don't you think? I mean, it fits the situation more than the song, but whatever....
     
  13. Mr. Mist said:

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    Kepela maybe???

    It means standing on the opposite side of the river.
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    The meaning of life is to live it, because we oly get one chance to do it.
     
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    Sewn Up said:

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    I would say something like "Reflections Of Consequence" solely for what is said in the last line of the chorus.
    Have you ever seen blood in the moonlight? It appears quite black. Have you ever seen spiders crawling on the graves?