Two quick song fragments Eng --> NL Please :)

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    superstar_eylul said:

    Smile Two quick song fragments Eng --> NL Please :)

    Please can someone translate these two song fragments to Dutch for me please?
    Can the translation be made to sound as young/trendy as possible, if that's ok, please Thanks you so much in advance!!

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    Like I'm losing with my wings in orbit
    Try my best to make the moment awesome
    If you remember not to tread with caution
    I'll make your body speak in full distortion

    I can't sleep at night, I fear death's warning
    I keep afloat by holding tide so cautious
    Somebody dragged me here, I'm trapped with wild horses
    And now I'm losing and my heart is nauseous
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    I was walking, was living, my melody was acapella
    There wass a beat I was missing - No tune, or a scale that I could play
    The sound in the distance [was] no orchestra playing together
    Like a boat out to sea, the silence was too deafening!

    Everything was the same, one color was just like the others
    An assembly routine, my memories were all black and white
    Till I stopped over-thinking [and] decided to draw back the curtains
    And I cleared all the cobwebs and began to let in the light
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    Molotova said:

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    Like I'm losing with my wings in orbit
    Alsof ik verlies met ronddraaiende vleugels (U can't really say this in Dutch, it sounds really strange)
    Try my best to make the moment awesome
    Probeer mijn beste moment super te maken
    If you remember not to tread with caution
    Als je eraan denkt om niet behoedzaam te stappen
    I'll make your body speak in full distortion
    Ik zal je lichaam laten spreken in volle vervorming (U can't really say this either, it just doesn't sound right and there's no other way to translate it)

    I can't sleep at night, I fear death's warning
    's Nachts kan ik niet slapen, ik vrees de waarschuwing van de dood
    I keep afloat by holding tide so cautious
    Ik blijf stuurloos door het tij zo voorzichtig te houden (U can't really say this, sounds strange again)
    Somebody dragged me here, I'm trapped with wild horses
    Iemand heeft me hier gesleurd, ik zit vast met wilde paarden
    And now I'm losing and my heart is nauseous
    En nu verlies ik en mijn hart is misselijk
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    I was walking, was living, my melody was acapella
    Ik wandelde, leefde, mijn melodie was acapella
    There wass a beat I was missing - No tune, or a scale that I could play
    Er was een ritme dat ik miste - Geen toon, of een schaal dat ik kon spelen
    The sound in the distance [was] no orchestra playing together
    Het geluid in de verte was geen orkest dat samen speelde
    Like a boat out to sea, the silence was too deafening!
    Zoals een boot die uitvaart op zee, de stilte was te verdovend !

    Everything was the same, one color was just like the others
    Alles was hetzelfde, één kleur was net zoals de anderen
    An assembly routine, my memories were all black and white
    Een bijeenkomstige routine, mijn gedachten waren zwart en wit
    Till I stopped over-thinking [and] decided to draw back the curtains
    Tot ik stopte me te bedenken en besloot de gordijnen terug te trekken
    And I cleared all the cobwebs and began to let in the light
    En ik maakte alle spinnenwebben schoon en begon het licht binnen te laten ...



    I'm sorry that the first rhyme didn't really work out, it sounds real nice in English though ...
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    Molotova said:

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    Vayyy, Hay es axchie ? My husband is from Kanaker, Yerevan. Maybe we can help each other out from time to time, I speak fluently Dutch, and if you speak Hayeren it would be awesome !
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