Hey guys, I need some help.

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  1. cptovaltine said:

    Default Hey guys, I need some help.

    Hi, I'm trying to write this song in Italian, and I have this small problem...I can't speak it. So I was wondering if someone can translate this into Italian in the most poetic song like way possible? If so that would be wonderful!

    Verse 1:
    With love and its intensity,
    With truth and the light,
    When stars apear overhead,
    Without you what will I become?

    Verse 2:
    Standing lost and cold I wait,
    Through storm and darkness
    How will I survive?
    My thoughts run to you.

    Bridge:
    In the scilence I hear you,
    Calling to me,
    And my heart fills with life,
    Turning from my pain
    I run to you,
    My love, with you I'm alive, for you I'll love.

    Chorus:
    I will search forever,
    With you I will learn to love,
    I am amazed by your simplicity,
    Here in my heart your with me.

    Verse 3:
    Wandering through time and sand,
    Void of thought and peace of mind,
    I look into the heavens and I see your smile.

    Thanks guys, this would be great, also feel free to change some words if it helps with the flow in Italian.
    Last edited by cptovaltine; 08-10-2010 at 08:45 PM. Reason: Spelling errors
     
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    Ligeia said:

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    Verse 1:
    With love and its intensity,/ con l'amore e la sua forza
    With truth and the light,/ con la verità e la luce
    When stars apear overhead,/ quando le stelle brillano,
    Without you what will I become?/ senza te che sarà di me?

    Verse 2:
    Standing lost and cold I wait,/ Perso e freddo aspetto
    Through storm and darkness/ attraverso tempeste e oscurità
    How will I survive?/ come sopravviverò?
    My thoughts run to you./ i miei pensieri volano a te

    Bridge:
    In the scilence I hear you,/ nel silenzio ti sento
    Calling to me,/ chiamarmi
    And my heart fills with life,/ il mio cuore si riempie di vita
    Turning from my pain/ fuggendo dal mio dolore
    I run to you,/ corro da te
    My love, with you I'm alive, for you I'll love./ amore, con te sono vivo, per te amo

    Chorus:
    I will search forever,/ cercherò per sempre
    With you I will learn to love,/ con te imparerò ad amare
    I am amazed by your simplicity,/ la tua semplicità mi meraviglia/stupisce
    Here in my heart your with me./ nel mio cuore sei con me

    Verse 3:
    Wandering through time and sand,/ vagando attraverso tempo e sabbie
    Void of thought and peace of mind,/ senza pensieri nè pace
    I look into the heavens and I see your smile/ guardo in paradiso e vedo il tuo sorriso
    "-Please tell me you're going to appeal to my humanity..."
    "-Actually, I'm planning to threaten you."

    "Well, if you'll excuse me, I have work to do. Evil plots don't just make themselves, you know!"
     
  3. cptovaltine said:

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    Thank you very very much. If I need anymore help is it ok to post in this thread?