Hey everybody!

I`m up to go to the studio with my band in order to record a new song. the lyrics are written so we can get started ^^Unfortunatelly we´re not native speakers, so it would be really helpful if you may want to comment on the language aswell, or if you can spot any mistakes - tell me!

here are the lyrics, thanks a lot for your help


We're gonna remain as we are
No matter how hard you try to form us
You can't hide a star
Or tell a flower to change it's color
No way you can ever try
Cause we don't see why
We should drift away
Now listen to what we say

[Chorus:]
Tell me why
I should change my hair
Don't know who
Is allowed to care
Tell me why
I should change a thing
And I say no no no
We'll never stop to flow

We're gonna do as we feel
No matter if you like or dislike
You can't stop the rain
Or keep a heart from beating
No way you can ever fight
Cause we know we are right
In what we do
And now it's up to you

[Repeat chorus]

Why she stands there in time
I can love her some day
Tell me why she, leave me here!
I can't breathe anymore
Dady had the head...hang high
Tell me why, tell me why