Goodbye

Okay, so my song is missing the first part of the first verse and the first part of the second verse so its not complete. So I was wondering if i could get some ideas.

[verse 1]
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2..........
3...........

It started out great but then suddenly you changed
Backed me into a corner and I was chained
No escape

[chorus]
It's the truth, can't you see?
I just want to be free
Leave me be

'Cause I
Never wanted to cry
So I'll say goodbye

[verse 2]
1........
2..........
3.........

How can you say it's wrong when it's the same?
Why run around and play this silly game?
It's a waste

[chorus]

When I'm playing it on the guitar it goes, G , F, C repeated through the whole song with a capo on the 3rd fret.

Your opinions and suggestions are appreciated.

I started writing a couple of verses, but then I got some other ideas, and i'm know gonna write a whole song inspired by this one, using some of what you wrote. I'll post it when i'm done.

Here it is: I think i'm calling it 'To Mr Insane' and I ended up writing a totally original song.

To Mr Insane,
I fell for you blindly, deeply, so carefree
I wanted you to catch me but you held me, restrained me
I can't breath

You lead me into darkness so I couldn’t see
Unaware of the hold that you had on me
Now I see

You’re a monster
An evil that you have to see to believe
You’re not magic
But you’ve got tricks up your sleeve
You prey on the vulnerable who’ve just lost a fight
And you hold them and tell them, girl it’ll be alright
Then you say it was love at the very sight
They say your right
So you take over their life and watch their spirit die
That’s what you did to me, so goodbye
To Mr Insane
Love from Jane

You want me to be your bird in a cage
Don't you know I have a brain and can walk away?
I'll walk away, leave today, I won't play
anymore

I want you to know that the decision i've made
is the result of your hunger for power and your games
Love from Jane

You’re a monster
An evil that you have to see to believe
You’re not magic
But you’ve got tricks up your sleeve
You prey on the vulnerable who’ve just lost a fight
And you hold them and tell them, girl it’ll be alright
Then you say it was love at the very sight
They say your right
So you take over their life and watch their spirit die
That’s what you did to me, so goodbye
To Mr Insane
Love from Jane

If you’re reading this letter I’ll be out on the highway
I’ve decided I’m never coming back
I’m off to do every single thing my way
I want you to know that the decision i've made
is the result of your hunger for power and your games
Love from Jane