To Mr Insane

I was writing some extra verses for another song someone posted, and I got carried away and wrote a whole song. Here it is:

To Mr Insane,
I fell for you blindly, deeply, so carefree
I wanted you to catch me but you held me, restrained me
I can't breath

You lead me into darkness so I couldn’t see
Unaware of the hold that you had on me
Now I see

You’re a monster
An evil that you have to see to believe
You’re not magic
But you’ve got tricks up your sleeve
You prey on the vulnerable who’ve just lost a fight
And you hold them and tell them, girl it’ll be alright
Then you say it was love at the very sight
They say your right
So you take over their life and watch their spirit die
That’s what you did to me, so goodbye
To Mr Insane
Love from Jane

You want me to be your bird in a cage
Don't you know I have a brain and can walk away?
I'll walk away, leave today, I won't play
anymore

I want you to know that the decision i've made
is the result of your hunger for power and your games
Love from Jane

You’re a monster
An evil that you have to see to believe
You’re not magic
But you’ve got tricks up your sleeve
You prey on the vulnerable who’ve just lost a fight
And you hold them and tell them, girl it’ll be alright
Then you say it was love at the very sight
They say your right
So you take over their life and watch their spirit die
That’s what you did to me, so goodbye
To Mr Insane
Love from Jane

If you’re reading this letter I’ll be out on the highway
I’ve decided I’m never coming back
I’m off to do every single thing my way
I want you to know that the decision i've made
is the result of your hunger for power and your games
Love from Jane

lol **** sorry i didnt know you had a mr insane to sorry so sorry:s i posted one up yester called dear mr insane check it out

who's is better?

Yours, Tracy. no offense

"I want you to know that the decision i've made
is the result of your hunger for power and your games"

I love this part great song =]

Originally Posted by LEGION

"I want you to know that the decision i've made
is the result of your hunger for power and your games"

I love this part great song =]

thanks! me too. that's why I decided to put it twice