First rap made only 15 yrs old its about me and my girl friend

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  1. rapperindamakin said:

    Post First rap made only 15 yrs old its about me and my girl friend

    tell me what you think,

    I feel like when i bend over backwards for you all you do is laugh
    cause that aint good enough, you expect me to bend myself in half, till i snap
    Dont think i'm loyal, all i do is rap
    ill do this **** till i nap or maybe even till i collapse
    cause im the ****
    the greatest kit
    and ill stay this way until my flame becomes unlit.

    You think that rapping is a waste
    ill still do it cause its what i love next to your face
    this relationship is like csi and your my case
    i try helping but you run away and i must chase
    so dont act like you are trying to embrace
    the fact that i still love you and my kiss you must taste
    but you wont cause i cant afford any damn toothpaste

    For all you people out there who think a fifteen year old cant write about the one
    the ones that think im not old enough and am to young
    my mother left me and my dad shot himself with a gun
    now its only me and her trying to have fun
    shes 17 and im 15 thank god we aint having a son
    my life is so ****ed rite now it should be done
    but shes holding me back calling me hun
    so next time you see a teenager thinking they get it easy and they have everyone
    tell that to me and her, all we get for a meal each day is a bun

    i never thought a person like me could do all this
    without complaining or screaming about the one he will miss
    wich is his dad who tought him everything including how to piss
    **** if i couldnt of aimed i would always miss
    the toilet seat that i wish we even had
    i saved my money for this coin that says number 1 dad
    im glad i bought this instead of something bad
    i guess ill bring it to his grave and try not to get sad.

    so now youve heard the story of my life
    its all about the one i want to make my wife
    so why dont you tell me how i did and how it made you feel
    hmm maybe if i get money off this i can buy myself a descent meal.


    please tell me if i have any potential
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    SljSlj said:

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    Cool. I'm not a rapper or even a fan of rap on any level, but I dig this. Best of luck to you and your girl. I hope you continue to write 'cause I'd like to read more from you.

    Would you mind commenting on one of mine? I've got a few up on this forum. Thanks.
  3. ThE bEsT said:

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    you have potential.. check out some of my raps if you want im alright.........
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    SljSlj said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by ThE bEsT View Post
    you have potential.. check out some of my raps if you want im alright.........
    But I thought you were the best?
  5. ThE bEsT said:

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    i just couldnt think of another name....