dear, mr insane

hey there my name's blake, mr. insane
i dont know if you remember but i called you again and again
why havent you answered me are you sad or in pain?
i see you standing out my window right there in the rain

are you mad terrified and pissed?
why do you even care why do you give a ****?
these people must be making you mad these stupid cridicts
im really trying to help you so dont do anything stupid kid

i really dont want you to hurt yourself and loose ur mind
you just have to realize that nothing is easy and soon you will find
that not everyones life involves being rich and sane
most have its up and downs and make you feel the pain

your life will have a climax point where its all good
and you'll have every lady wanting at your wood
but for now on you have to suffer all this **** in the hood
and go through how every other hard core rapper would

so i sit here writing this letter to the greatest, me
i wonder why the **** i call myself mr. insane is that healthy?

plz tell me what you think and how i could have changed the end because it sucks

This song lacks progression and seems very self-serving. It has potential, but it just seems like your lyric is stuck within itself... I don't know if that makes sense to you, but I don't know how else to say it.
Please keep it up, I really want to see how your writing will evolve over time.