a freestyle i used against someone tell me what you think about it

make sure you tell me what you think good or bad
its not all freestyle i added some on

yo you talk about the game like your in it
but writting forums on the internet doesnt mean ****
you talk about the hood like you been hit
so ill show you what its like with this gun kit

now i aint saying im in the game either man
but im a hell lot closer then this little fan
and ill kill you with these rhymes like i know i can

you talk about this rap **** like its unfamiliar
but when all it hits me man there nothin realer

man and im the only true rapper out here
im the spitter that everybody in rap fears
cause alot of yall are still sounding like last year
the game needs change and im the mother ****ing cash-ere
nickles for my thoughts
dimes in my bed
quarters for the cushion
dollars in my head

take my versus to serious you hate me
cause im the one who paints a vivid picture no hd.


i want more so if anyone could help it would be great plz tell me what you think good or bad!!!!!

I don't know if it's because great minds think alike or something else, but those are Drake's lyrics

lol ya bro i know the bottom part is not the top i wanted to see what people say