far gone

Thread: far gone

Tags: new writer, suicide
  1. Carpe dium said:

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    a song i wrote for my band awhile ago and the first serious one i made lemme now watya think

    im far too far gone
    for you to save
    just leave me here
    ill dig my own grave

    not coming back dear so unplug the telephone
    it'll be much easier if you let me die alone

    Pre-chorus:
    its time to let go
    of your reality
    ive found a new piece of mind so dont you worry about me

    Chorus:
    not running away ive just found a new outlook

    it seems
    life is much better when im not taking part in it
    they say
    life is a lesson and i think that ive learned well
    its time
    to say goodbye so ill bid the world farewell


    Verse:
    theres a divine war
    going on inside
    god's
    fighting the devil
    but i forgot to pick a side

    you tried so hard and so did i
    but i kept on fallling back and now im too far down that path

    Pre chorus

    Chrorus(x2)

    there was a bridge but i forgot it
    Last edited by Carpe dium; 02-20-2012 at 10:07 PM.
     
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    LyricsAngel said:

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    theres a divine war
    going on inside
    god's
    fighting the devil
    but i forgot to pick a side

    How in the world do these ideas pop into your head? The whole song is so sad but at the same time beautiful...and that is my favorite part
    [Today] is the *tomorrow* you worried about ~yesterday~.Live for the ♥next day♥, not the ◘day before◘.
     
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    Miki Digi said:

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    I dont know what to think of it. It's a little too sad and necro related for my taste; but it is very creative and I do like it.
    "I'm a ruler that wears a pair of boots with low heels; Why yes I am a lady King. Does this bother you?"
     
  4. Carpe dium said:

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    yea my band member had the guitar and wanted me to write a song about something to do with death so i chose what i thought would go through someones mind pre-suicide
     
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    nork said:

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    I agree with LyricsAngel

    "theres a divine war
    going on inside
    god's
    fighting the devil
    but i forgot to pick a side"

    Is such an awesome lyric
     
  6. Carpe dium said:

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    thanks bro