Thoughts Like Mental Poison

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    SljSlj said:

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    This one is obviously about mental anguish, which is something that many people suffer from, including myself, on a daily basis. It's very repetitive and cliche, but is in no way a bad lyric. I hope you have as much fun reading it as I did writing it.
    Lastly, I'd just like to thank you for the support and positivity I've recieved on this forum, I really, REALLY appreciate it.

    THOUGHTS LIKE MENTAL POISON

    And the border between insanity and reality fades

    Can't tell if this is oxygen I'm breathing
    Don't know if I believe what I'm seeing
    My mind keeps playing games with me
    Paranoid, I mustn't let this persist
    Gotta get a grip while I'm still sure I exist

    I'm losing it
    Losing all I've tried to maintain
    I'm feeling it
    Feeling the world slip away

    And the border between insanity and reality fades
    All I see is black in a million different shades
    My brain thinks it better than me
    It conjures these thoughts like mental poison

    They tell me it's all in my head
    Of course its true, everything they've said
    But what is it exactly?
    Feels like a demon to me
    It would be better if nothing real
    Oh...

    I'm losing it
    I'm losing all I've tried to maintain
    I'm feeling it
    Feeling the world slip away

    And the border between insanity and reality fades
    All I see is black in a million different shades
    My brain thinks it's better than me
    It conjures these thoughts like mental poison

    Color falls out the lines that once held my soul
    And insanity has taken it's toll
    I'm so ****ing scared
    I want to get off this hellride
    I wish I could see something beyond suicide

    I'm losing it
    I'm losing this battle again
    I'm feeling it
    I'm feeling my life slip away

    And the border between insanity and reality fades
    The border fades
    The border fades
    Fades to nothing

    And the border between insanity and reality fades
    All I see is black in a million different shades
    My brain thinks it's better than me
    It conjures these thoughts like mental poison
    My thoughts are ****ing poison
    Last edited by SljSlj; 08-25-2010 at 02:24 AM.
     
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    I thought that was cool, I really like the lines
    "Color falls out the lines that once held my soul" and
    "All I see is black in a million different shades"
     
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    SljSlj said:

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    Thank you so much. I'm very glad you like it.
     
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    Miki Digi said:

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    Quote Originally Posted by nork View Post
    I thought that was cool, I really like the lines
    "Color falls out the lines that once held my soul" and
    "All I see is black in a million different shades"
    Same, these lyrics are uber creative. Keep it up~
    "I'm a ruler that wears a pair of boots with low heels; Why yes I am a lady King. Does this bother you?"
     
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    Quote Originally Posted by Miki Digi View Post
    Same, these lyrics are uber creative. Keep it up~
    Really? "Creative", huh? I consider this to be a more prosaic lyric than most of my others, but maybe I'm wrong.