Poisoned

I wrote this song about insanity and loosing it on a bad trip, let me know what you think

The poison placed under my tongue
Breathing slow, keeping calm
Sitting, waiting
Unaware of the gravity of what I've just done
Suddenly things start to shift
It's taking hold now
Heartbeat rising to a crescendo
Im loosing control now
Reality crushed
Because delusion weighs heavy
Sinking me ever deeper
For this I wasn't ready

Racing through my veins
Hurricane forces unleashed
More than I can possibly bare
Free falling through bottomless despair

Bubbling, bleeding, bouncing balls
Bounce my brains all over the walls
Stuck in a loop
Stuck in a loop
Stuck in a loop

Crying out to God now
Take me away from here
This place I don't want to be
Take this all away from me
These things humans aren't supposed to see
But he turns a deaf ear
He cannot reach me here
I've sunk too deep
To the place where even angels fear

Bubbling, bleeding, bouncing balls
Bounce my brains all over the walls
Stuck in a loop
Stuck in a loop
Stuck in a loop

I must escape this place I've found
Trapped in insanities breeding ground
The demons all laughing at me
Now their unlocked
With freedom to roam
They run amok

Bubbling, bleeding, bouncing balls
Bounce my brains all over the walls
Stuck in a loop
Stuck in a loop
Stuck in a loop

[QUOTE=nork;767748]

Crying out to God now
Take me away from here
This place I don't want to be
Take this all away from me
These things humans aren't supposed to see
But he turns a deaf ear
He cannot reach me here
I've sunk too deep
To the place where even angels fear

[QUOTE=nork;767748]

loved this part bro pretty mean song

and also i think you should the words "their now unlocked"
into "now their unlocked"

[QUOTE=Carpe dium;768112][QUOTE=nork;767748]

Crying out to God now
Take me away from here
This place I don't want to be
Take this all away from me
These things humans aren't supposed to see
But he turns a deaf ear
He cannot reach me here
I've sunk too deep
To the place where even angels fear

Originally Posted by nork

loved this part bro pretty mean song

and also i think you should the words "their now unlocked"
into "now their unlocked"

Thanks a lot, yeah I think "now their unlocked" makes a bit more sense