The boy who wasn't meant to be

Just got the news
Doctors say there isn't long
That ill be gone soon
Was this intentional?
Maybe this world just wasn't for me
My life just wasn't meant to be

Don't feel sad
When you think of me
Just let me exist
As happy memories
Here for a while
But had to leave
The boy who wasn't meant to be

Hiding my fear
I don't want to scare you
I see the end now
Hold me close
Before I slip away
Im getting cold
Encased in shadows
Voices echoing in my head
Faces in the blur

Last ounze of strength
Whisper in your ear
Who knows
Maybe death isn't the end
And ill be on the other side
Waiting
To see you all once again

Hey first of all ist sounds really good, but evaluation would be easier if you told what kind of text you're presenting? Lyrics? Poem? ...

Greetz,
samdabam

thanks for the feedback, I intend it to be lyrics, but im not in a band or anything yet so at this stage its all just ideas that will probably need working with once I get round to making them into songs. I guess lyrics pretty much are poems untill they are sung and put to music

I love how emotional this is!! I love the catchphrase/title.
I think it would make a really good poem as well as lyrics

Thanks a lot, really appreciate the feedback