She's Not Me (finished version)

She’s Not Me
-Verse 1-
I have you but you do not have me
You have a me who isn’t even the real me
But when I look in the mirror I see her face
She looks like me but on the inside she’s just like you
She pushed me aside to take my place
It’s funny how it’s you and not me who told her to

-Chorus-
I’m not her and she has to understand she’s not me
I never really wanted her to be
Wait, you don’t care what I want as long as it’s good for you
But what if I don’t live to please you?
You can’t turn me into someone I don’t want to be
Cause I’m not her and you have to understand she’s not me

-Verse 2-
I’m a liar but you know you are too
You have no rights to change a life you don’t go trough
But it’s easy to talk while you sit there and watch
If you should walk in my shoes you’d fall from the first step
But her role’s nothing more than a blotch
It’s funny how it’s me and not you who left so fast

-Chorus-
Cause I’m not her and she has to understand she’s not me
I never really wanted her to be
Wait, you don’t care what I want as long as it’s good for you
But what if I don’t live to please you?
You can’t turn me into someone I don’t want to be
Cause I’m not her and you have to understand she’s not me

-Bridge-
I’m not her.
I have to be
And at times I wish I were
I tried to, but I’m not.
I’m just me.

-Chorus-
I’m not her but the problem’s that I’m no longer me
You never really wanted me to be
Wait, I don’t care what you want as long as neither do you
Don’t you know that I don’t leave to please you?
You can’t turn me into someone I don’t want to be
Cause I’m not her and soon enough I’m going to be me

Pretty good tobehonest, but I think there's to many
be, and me's in there.
Good though

I like the way you captured your emotion so perfectly for this song!! The overall tone was good. But maybe you could try to incorperate some more rhyme and differentiated your word choice? Overall, very good.

(starred reveiw

Angel, I can relate that at some parts of the relationship but the only thing i didn't do is that retry the relationship twice and break up again because i know if i go into the relationship again for all i know i would not be myself period. but in your case i understand how that person's perspective that want a girl who is this and that which not a good thing if you not meant to be that type of girl if she not you and i totally agree. I had an ex gf who was like that boy as well. the best person for you is the person who accept everything of you of course and very flexible in ways too. i think i said too much O.o but i guess it how i feel from your song. lol

Haha, I gave him the song *evil laugh*
You should've seen his face...he was like "***? this is for me" and I was like "yupperz" Priceless...

Anyway, thank you for the comments.I know it's too repetitive, but whatever...I'm gonna leave it that way because it's very personal.

hmm well was it personal because of pride? then i'm shameful of myself... =_=