Bhula denge tumko sanam

Who can correct me plss.

Naa jee sake yaha, naa mar sake yaha
No life remain here,no death remain here
Hasne kee bat chhodo, naa ro sake yaha
The jokes disappear,no (ro) remain here
Toh jaye ham kaha
Where we should go

Yeh dard kee aahe juda huyee rahe
This pain of separation,it continue
Bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire
I will forget you slowly,slowly
Mohabbat ke sare sitam dhire dhire
The wounds of love will heal slowly,slowly
Abhee naz hai tute dil ko wafa pe
Now the loyalty of my heart is broken
Ke tutenge sare bharam dhire dhire
That will broke all the illusions slowly,slowly
Bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire
I will forget you slowly,slowly


Dil meraa chahe ke sine se dil mai nikal ke phaink du
The desire of my heart is to remove the heart from my chest and throw it
Bedard iss berehem ko hawa me uchhal ke phaink du
This pain of "berehem" throw my love away
Dhoka diya mujhko dhoka diya, dil ne mere haye yeh kya kiya
Destroyed me,destroyed,what does my heart to you?
Dil meraa chahe ke sine se dil mai nikal ke phaink du
The desire of my heart is to remove the heart from my chest and throw it
Lamho se hare bujhe nazare
From lost moments unseen
Abb toh sahenge yeh gham dhire dhire
Now that will (sahenge) this unluckiness/problem slowly,slowly
Bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire
I will forget you slowly,slowly


Tanha akele me yado ke mele me tum gaye chhod ke
I am all alone,(me yado ke mele),cause you leave me
Wado kee rasmo ko, chahat kee kasmo ko tum gaye todke
The promise that (rasmo ko).the desire that (kasmo ko),you broke them
Ghadiya sitamgar katatee nahee, ulfat ke manzar se hatatee nahee
(ghadiya sitamgar) don't pass,(ulfat ke manzar se),don't leave
Tanha akele me yado ke mele me tum gaye chhod ke
I am all alone,(me yado ke mele),cause you leave me
Kahan bhee jau tumhe hee pau
Where to go now you are my only destination
Rukenge humare kadam dhire dhire
I will stop walking slowly,slowly


How is teh right of writing this words?

Rasmo ko -- रसमो को ??
Kasmo ko -- कसनो को ??
Sahenge -- साहीनगे ??
Couldn't translate them whit google

Naa jee sake yaha, naa mar sake yaha
Neither I could live here nor I could die here

Hasne kee bat chhodo, naa ro sake yaha
Let go laughing I couldn't even cry here

Toh jaye ham kaha

Where should I go

Yeh dard kee aahe juda huyee rahe
These Sighs of pain..our ways were separated

Bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire
I will forget you slowly,slowly (Bravo )

Mohabbat ke sare sitam dhire dhire
The wounds of love will heal slowly,slowly (almost correct)
But a more appropriate will be
And (i will forget) all the atrocities of love slowly slowly

Abhee naz hai tute dil ko wafa pe
Just now my pride on my love has shattered

Ke tutenge sare bharam dhire dhire
all the illusions will break too slowly,slowly (WOW NNA!! I am really impressed)
Bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire
I will forget you slowly,slowly


Dil meraa chahe ke sine se dil mai nikal ke phaink du
The desire of my heart is to remove the heart from my chest and throw it (WOW 100% correct)
Bedard iss berehem ko hawa me uchhal ke phaink du
I wish to toss away this ruthless and cruel heart.
Dhoka diya mujhko dhoka diya, dil ne mere haye yeh kya kiya
Betrayed Me, Betrayed Me, Oh! What my heart has done.
Dil meraa chahe ke sine se dil mai nikal ke phaink du
The desire of my heart is to remove the heart from my chest and throw it
Lamho se hare bujhe nazare
The moments defeated me all lovely sights are gone or no more
Abb toh sahenge yeh gham dhire dhire
Now I will have to bear this grief slowly,slowly
Bhula denge tumko sanam dhire dhire
I will forget you slowly,slowly


Tanha akele me yado ke mele me tum gaye chhod ke
You deserted me and left me in a fair of memories.
He means only memories are left

Wado kee rasmo ko, chahat kee kasmo ko tum gaye todke
The promise of (love) traditions .and the vows or oaths of love,you broke them
Ghadiya sitamgar katatee nahee, ulfat ke manzar se hatatee nahee
Itis so difficult to pass, it is difficult to forget love times
You deserted me and left me in a fair of memories.

Kahan bhee jau tumhe hee pau
Wherever I go I find you.
Rukenge humare kadam dhire dhire
I will stop walking slowly,slowly (almost correct)
but more appropriate will be
These feet will stop, slowly slowly

But all in all In I would say BRILLIANT attempt...did U do it all by yourself?

Rasmo ko -- रसमो को
Kasmo ko -- कसमों को
Sahenge -- सहेंगे

I didn't do it all alone i get some help form google translator :P (i use it just for words,not sentence)

Hmm strange S (for me)