Fairy Tales

Here's some lyrics I've written recently, kinda sums up my feelings right now but hey, makes good lyrics soemtimes I think

(Verse 1)
So you're gone, that's the end
Our hearts have come undone
but while you're moving to the warmer skies
I can't see the sun

The train has gone, the boats have left
And once again I'm on my own
It's too late to shine a light
The will to win this fight has gone

It's a tough mountain to climb
at least now you're not beside me
But I can take those steps cause the view from the top is what I want to see

(chorus)
Ever since you left, my mind's began to run
The stars have gone and the darkest clouds have won
But I'm listening to the sounds in the wind and the rain
Hoping one day I might hear your voice again

(Verse 2)
The gushing wind never sleeps
and all I can hear is the sound of the raindrops
Thinking back, what was the point?
All this heartbreak simply has to stop

My tears add to the rivers
and the flood of feeling washes along
Oh why? you were my darling
Oh, I wish you've never gone

It's a tough mountain to climb
at least now you're not beside me
But I can take those steps cause the view from the top is what I want to see

(Chorus)
Ever since you left, my mind's began to run
The stars have gone and the darkest clouds have won
But I'm listening to the sounds in the wind and the rain
Hoping one day I might hear your voice again

I do believe in fairy tales, happy ever after
but what about those day I feel like I was made to suffer

Ever since you left, my mind's began to run
The stars have gone and the darkest clouds have won
But I'm listening to the sounds in the wind and the rain
Hoping one day I might hear your voice again
Hoping one day I might hear your voice again

Critique please thank you, be as honest as you want

It's good, but if you wish he hadn't gone, then why does it say 'at least now you're not beside me'?

I don't think you've gotten the right meaning of the lyrics:

It's a tough mountain to climb at least now you're not beside me

kinda meaning, things are tougher now that you have left.