RAP LYRICS, please read and tell me what you think.

its alright
i
take it all back, everything i spelt, everything i said,
shuda just kept it
in my head,
shuda just let
you tread
across my head
like a tightrope walker, on a thread,

you seduced me,
with your induced confused reality
you happy?
no ones hear to help me,
you shelfed me,
with your selfish
blasphemy,
now i know what its like to feel this,
helplessness.
your not selfless
your self-less,
yah guessed this?
hell is this.
you felt it,
feelin it?
reelin in this
feeling,
kneeling your healing
to this feeling,
ive been in,
the same situation
your in
the repitition
of this drillin
feelin.
im feelin em,
theyre pain,
in the end we're all the same,
out to name,
and claim
every brain,
in this fame game.
tame and mainge
every name
that came
our way,
its okay,
i shoulda not said,
any word that crept
into my ****ing head,
keep my mouth shut,
but then again, how does it feel, that you ****ed
yourself up?
huh?
answer that- ****,
trust
me, i ll give up,
tell me the answer,and il shutup
why dont you just
let up,
ill tell you a secret of mine,
so we're walking down the same line?
we'll be walking at the same time,
hinds aligned,
minds assigned to each crime,
tell me your line,
i spilt mine,
but your so life
dozed,
that i suppose
you loathed
then froze
and closed,
yourself off from all those
acts of emotion,
whats all the commotion,
was it something i said?
too rawr, your heads bled?
**** it
i take it all back, everything i spilt, everything i said,
i take it back, and i'll hurl it at your head,
with more force,
i got no remorse.
ill tear your
world apart,
like you've torn
mine so far.
sorry,
truth come out finally,
im not yours,
never will be,
im no ones,
cant you ****ing see,
i dont even belong to me,
i disconect my mouth from my head,
my brain and my mine are ****ing seperated,
you dont know what goes on up here,
i dont cry tears
all feel real fears.
ive lost all consiousness,
i think its best
i take it al back everything, i spilt, everything i said,
shoulda just kept it
in my head
get a drip,
sit it
next to the hospital bed,
i bet
your glad im not dead,
here to rest
and highly medicated
you were in my head
before i hesitated,
you did your bit,
i couldnt succeed in it,
how does it feel, to **** yourself up,
then try to blame it on me,
i cant believe
you tried to make me see
a side of sympathy
to your reality.
are you happyy,
the way you have me?.
you suceeded
in this laboratory,
you got a hold of me,
with everything you told me
you sold me,
and used everything i said,to your advantage,
used everything i said,to manage
a bandage,
**** your superiiorty, you got none,
**** off ****
your not even fun,
hun,
the most fun,
i had with you, was when you pushed me over, and spun
my head,
started to run
after me seeing ''**** your dead,
i hope you run, you little ****er,
take it back, everything you spilt, everything you said,
shuda kept
that ****, right up in your head,
your too rawr,
you cut me deep, my head
is starting to bleed,
everything you said,
i stopping me from seeing clearly,
hear me,
run you ****er,
please.'',
i can see, you never liked me,
i never liked you,
i was protending too,
i was protending, this ***** isnt real,
i dont know how to feel,
and i tried to spiel
a feel of the real me,
but i just watched you squirm and squeel,
***** cant handle the real deal,
im made out of steal,
so forget everything i did
everything i spilt
everything i said,
that **** should be kept,
up in my head.

I really like it, it realates to me and this dumb *** boy that used me. i should have seen it but i didnt becuase i liked the attention i was getting, and he fed alot of **** to be that i believed.

This is ridiculous.
Why are the lines written in sets of 3 or 4 words?

This is completely un-rappable, no flow whatsoever.
I tried to read the first four lines and just failed so I gave up.

As for the content, I cant comment because I didn't red it.
But judging by the previous comment it's good so well done.

I agree with Jeff, shxt is un-rappable !
And I took the time to read the whole enchilada, it ain't good at all ...