rap written in 5 min

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  1. mjw1781 said:

    Smile rap written in 5 min

    I cheat in poker
    Im evil than the joker
    I pound them with my fist
    I dissapear in the mist
    They dont no how to feeL
    When i come for the kill
    They said my gun was of the meter
    gues what it was a 9mm
    Ive had a gun
    It was so fun
    They try to run
    When they wake up from their dream
    They dont no ere thyve been
    But i dont give a **** about what they say
    Because this is their last day
    Last edited by mjw1781; 10-11-2010 at 02:14 AM.
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    Steve0 said:

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    thats the mat white dude
  3. 020Jeffs said:

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    Simple rhyme scheme.
    No interesting theme or any point to relate to.
    No message, no feeling, no flow.
    Nothing new, nothing clever.