My first poem.

We are part of a tree
We are the roots intertwined
I hope never to be set free
And to stay forever combined.

I can feel you against me
And for this feeling I thrive
Because when I feel it
I feel so alive

We go on and on
Around the tree forever
Always intertwined
In this loving endeavor.

Oh wow, this is gorgeous. I loved it

Very interesting concept there mate. All in all, fantastic!

Wonderful I'm amazed and it's your first? Wow, this is amazing mate