The Light Seeping Through The Cracks

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    SljSlj said:

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    THE LIGHT SEEPING THROUGH THE CRACKS

    Just like someone born into a prison cell
    You’ve no idea even of white and black
    In front of your eyes, there’s only gray
    There’s so much more going on than you can tell
    But your way of life only serves to set you back
    You’re too far beyond a sunny day
    So far that you think that that is hell
    The light seeping through the cracks
     
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    i think a little fix will be this

    "you have know idea, even of white and black"

    and "So far that you think that is hell" you added another "that"

    and i think that describe more than my song "Please rescues me" which prison related.
    Damning Reficul: Song is like singing from the light whilst the emotions can be so raw from the darkness.