Jencarlos Canela - Un Nuevo Dia [check pls]

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    velvet_sky said:

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    Hola a todos! Puede alguien checkar la traducion que he hecho? Gracias!

    Siempre Hay Un Nuevo Día
    There is always a new day
    Siempre Hay Un Nuevo Día
    There is always a new day


    Hay días que todo son problemas
    There are days which are all filled with problems
    Que empiezan bien y terminan mal
    (days) which start good and end up bad
    La vida a diario te pone pruebas
    The everyday life gives you proofs for that
    Y no quieres ni despertar
    And you don’t even want to wake up
    Yo tengo para ti la receta
    I have the recipe for you
    Para encontrar la felicidad
    So that you can find the happiness
    Dios no te ahorca solo te aprieta
    The days don’t …., they only push you (???)
    Y hoy algo bueno va pasar
    And today something good is going to happen

    Hoy…
    today
    Porque hoy es un buen día (x2)
    Because today is a good day
    Hoy
    today…
    Siento que hoy es un buen día
    Because today is a good day
    Hoy…
    today
    Algo bueno va pasar
    Something good is going to happen
    Hoy...
    today
    Un nuevo día
    A new day
    Siempre…
    Always
    Hay un nuevo día
    There is a new day

    Tenemos que ser más positivos
    We should be more positive
    Por el amor dejarnos guiar
    Because the love let us drive (???)
    Escucha bien lo que yo te digo
    Listen carefully what I tell you
    Y no nunca dejes de amar
    And you will never stop loving

    Ten Fe que al fin todo pasara
    Have faith because at the end everything ends

    El final de una cosa es el comienzo de algo nuevo
    The end of something is the start of something new
    La oportunidad de volver a empezar
    The opportunity to start over new

    Siente el amor siente la pasión
    Feel the love, feel the passion
    Tose Proeski - The Hardest Thing --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zKRrADJ7j3E
    * Agapi mou gurna pisw, Mou Leipeis... :[
     
  2. momper said:

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    My suggestions. And don´t say "checkar", please.

    Siempre Hay Un Nuevo Día
    There is always a new day
    Siempre Hay Un Nuevo Día
    There is always a new day


    Hay días que todo son problemas
    There are days which are all filled with problems
    Que empiezan bien y terminan mal
    (days) which start good and end up bad
    La vida a diario te pone pruebas
    The everyday life gives you proofs for that
    Y no quieres ni despertar
    And you don’t even want to wake up
    Yo tengo para ti la receta
    I have the recipe for you
    Para encontrar la felicidad
    So that you can find the happiness
    Dios no te ahorca solo te aprieta
    God doesn´t hang you, He only tightens you (It refers to a Spanish [?] saying: "Dios aprieta, pero no ahoga")
    Y hoy algo bueno va pasar
    And today something good is going to happen

    Hoy…
    today
    Porque hoy es un buen día (x2)
    Because today is a good day
    Hoy
    today…
    Siento que hoy es un buen día
    I feel today is a good day
    Hoy…
    today
    Algo bueno va pasar
    Something good is going to happen
    Hoy...
    today
    Un nuevo día
    A new day
    Siempre…
    Always
    Hay un nuevo día
    There is a new day

    Tenemos que ser más positivos
    We should be more positive
    Por el amor dejarnos guiar
    (we should) let us guide by the love
    Escucha bien lo que yo te digo
    Listen carefully what I tell you
    Y no nunca dejes de amar
    And no, you never stop loving (I don´t know if my sentence is correct, but “nunca dejes de amar” functions as imperative)

    Ten Fe que al fin todo pasara
    Have faith because at the end everything ends

    El final de una cosa es el comienzo de algo nuevo
    The end of something is the start of something new
    La oportunidad de volver a empezar
    The opportunity to start over new

    Siente el amor siente la pasión
    Feel the love, feel the passion
    Last edited by momper; 08-06-2011 at 04:07 AM.
     
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    velvet_sky said:

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    Thanks for the corrections!

    Isn't there such a word in Spanish, 'checar'? .. or how can you say check it please? My dictionary says it's right? lol
    Tose Proeski - The Hardest Thing --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zKRrADJ7j3E
    * Agapi mou gurna pisw, Mou Leipeis... :[
     
  4. momper said:

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    In Spain it doesn´t use "checkar". I think is better "revisar" (or, more colloquial, "echar un vistazo").
     
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    velvet_sky said:

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    oh, ok I will remember that thank you once again for helping me with the Spanish!
    Tose Proeski - The Hardest Thing --> http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zKRrADJ7j3E
    * Agapi mou gurna pisw, Mou Leipeis... :[