Can someone translate my poem to spanish

[muffin1217]

pleases help me put my poem in spanish thanks alot and im a girl telling this to a guy if that helps


who has your heart? I want it to beat for me.
who has your love? I want you to love me.
who has your eyes? I want you to see how much you mean to me.
who has your hands? I want you to feel for me how i feel for you.
who has your mouth? I want to be the only one you kiss and tell " I love you".
who has your hunger? I want you to starve for me
who has your brain? I want you to think of me all day until your head hurts.
who has your life? I want you to live for me
who has your future? Say me because I want you In mines

[igrec]

¿quién tiene su corazón? Quiero que ello golpee para mí.
¿quién tiene su amor? Quiero que usted me ame.
¿quién tiene sus ojos? Quiero que usted vea cuánto usted me quiere decir.
¿quién tiene sus manos? Quiero que usted sienta para mí como siento para usted.
¿quién tiene su boca? Quiero ser el único que usted besa y dice que "le amo".
¿quién tiene su hambre? Quiero que usted me anhele
¿quién tiene su cerebro? Quiero que usted piense en mí todo el día hasta sus daños principales.
¿quién tiene su vida? Quiero que usted viva para mí
¿quién tiene su futuro? Dígame porque le quiero En minas

[muffin1217]

thank u

[Lady_A]

Quien tiene tu corazon? Quiero que lata para mi.
Quien tiene tu amor? Quiero que me ames.
Quien tiene tus ojos? Quiero que veas lo mucho que significas para mi.
Quien tiene tus manos? Quiero que sientas para mi lo mismo que yo siento para ti.
Quien tiene tu boca? Quiero ser la unica que beses y alla cual dises "Te quiero"
Quien tienes tu hambre? Quiero que te mueras de hambre para mi.
Quien tiene tu cerebro? Quiero que pienses en mi todo el dia hasta que te duela la cabeza.
Quien tiene tu vida? Quiero que vivas para mi.
Quien tiene tu futuro? Di que yo, porque yo si te quiero en el mio.


Can a native speaker please correct my translation? It's just an exercise for me.

[xiurell]

This is my try

who has your heart? I want it to beat for me.
¿quién tiene tu corazón? Quiero que lata por mí
who has your love? I want you to love me.
¿quién tiene tu amor? Quiero que me quieras
who has your eyes? I want you to see how much you mean to me.
¿quién tiene tus ojos? Quiero que veas lo mucho que significas para mí
who has your hands? I want you to feel for me how i feel for you.
¿quién tiene tus manos? Quiero que sientas por mí lo que you siento por ti
who has your mouth? I want to be the only one you kiss and tell " I love you".
¿quién tiene tu boca? Quiero ser el único al que besas y dices 'te quiero'
who has your hunger? I want you to starve for me
¿quién tiene tu hambre? Quiero que estés hambrienta de mí
who has your brain? I want you to think of me all day until your head hurts.
¿quién tiene tu mente? Quiero que pienses en mí todo el día hasta que te duela la cabeza
who has your life? I want you to live for me
¿quién tiene tu vida? Quiero que vivas para mí
who has your future? Say me because I want you In mines
¿quién tiene tu futuro? Dímelo porque te quiero en el mío

[Wendy Rochelle]

Can someone please translate this poem into Spanish? It's for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day.

My Sweetest Valentine

I've always known you existed,
somewhere in this huge lonely world.
You were always in my dreams and visions.
I knew the warmth of your touch,
way before we ever even met.

Many years came and went
my hopes grew less and less.
Yet I still dreams of finding you one day,
a fantasy that would never die.
Your beautiful image always filled my mind,
each and every day of my life.

Amazingly, one day it all happened.
The warm-hearted eyes of a perfect stranger,
brought instant gratitude,
as two once lonely hearts came home.

Everytime we approach eachother your soft lips caress mine.
And with these sweet kisses,
my heart warms and my body trembles.
I am at great peace knowing you're mine.

We are truely soul mates,
our energies forever entertwined.
It is our destiny to be together,
I love you,
My one and ONLY Valentine.

[xiurell]

Originally Posted by Wendy Rochelle

Can someone please translate this poem into Spanish? It's for my boyfriend for Valentine's Day.

My Sweetest Valentine
Mi más dulce Valentín

I've always known you existed,
somewhere in this huge lonely world.
You were always in my dreams and visions.
I knew the warmth of your touch,
way before we ever even met.

siempre supe que existías
en algún lugar de este gran mundo
siempre estabas en mis sueños y visiones
conocía el calor de tus caricias

Many years came and went
my hopes grew less and less.
Yet I still dreams of finding you one day,
a fantasy that would never die.
Your beautiful image always filled my mind,
each and every day of my life.

llegaron y se fueron muchos años
mis esperanzas eran cada vez más pequeñas
aunque seguía soñando con encontrarte un día
una fantasía que nunca moriría
tu hermosa imagen siempre estaba en mi mente
en todos y cada uno de mis días

Amazingly, one day it all happened.
The warm-hearted eyes of a perfect stranger,
brought instant gratitude,
as two once lonely hearts came home.

Sorprendentemente, todo ocurrió un día
los ojos afectuosos de un completo extraño
trajo una gratitud instantánea
como si volvieran a casa esos corazones solitarios

Everytime we approach eachother your soft lips caress mine.
And with these sweet kisses,
my heart warms and my body trembles.
I am at great peace knowing you're mine.

cuando nos aproximábamos el uno al otro tus suaves labios acariciaban los mios
y con estos dulces besos
calentaban my corazón y hacían temblar a mi cuerpo
siento una gran paz al saber que eres mio

We are truely soul mates,
our energies forever entertwined.
It is our destiny to be together,
I love you,
My one and ONLY Valentine.

somos realmente almas gemelas
nuestras energías siempre se entrelazarán
es nuestro destino el estar juntos
te quiero
mi solo y único Valentín

A very romantic poem. Congratulations

[Wendy Rochelle]

Thank you tons for translating my poem! I really appreciate it. I'm glad you thought it was a very nice poem. I wrote it in class (while the teacher was teaching hehe) Anyhow, I am new to this site, so maybe I'll be writing more...Thanks again, and I hope you are well and enjoying life in Spain. I dream of going there someday.
~Wendy

[xiurell]

you're welcome

I live in The Balearic Islands (Mallorca). You would love it. I hope someday you could visit us. See you around here

Pepe

[Wendy Rochelle]

I was wondering....I know in different spanish countries, one word could mean different things for each country. Like a word in spanish (Mexico) could mean something else in El Salvador. Was the translation you gave me the same in all spanish countries? Or will certain words mean different things to people depending on the country they are from? MY bf is Salvadorian, so I wanna make sure it will make sense to him.
Thanks,
Wendy

[xiurell]

Originally Posted by Wendy Rochelle

I was wondering....I know in different spanish countries, one word could mean different things for each country. Like a word in spanish (Mexico) could mean something else in El Salvador. Was the translation you gave me the same in all spanish countries? Or will certain words mean different things to people depending on the country they are from? MY bf is Salvadorian, so I wanna make sure it will make sense to him.
Thanks,
Wendy

I think so , I've been checking my translation. All the words used are perfectly understandable in all Spanish speaker countries. Just the accent is different so he won't have any problem to understand.

Greetings

[Wendy Rochelle]

Ok cool! I'm glad he will be able to understand my poem lol! So what's it like where you live?