Can someone correct my translation please

Hi

I've translated tu no tienes alma for my site alejandrosanz4englishspeakers but I'm worried that I haven't done it well. It's a really sensitive song and I don't want to get it wrong. The portion I'm worried about is this;

Mira, no inventes
Look, don't invent
Pasa la gente
People pass
Pasan las cosas
Things pass
Pasan tan rapidamente
They pass so quickly

Tu no tienes cara de abandonar la batalla
you don't have face to abandon the battle
Y como tienes cara, como puedes dejar de mirarnos a los ojos
And how is it you have face, how can you stop looking into our eyes
Como si no pasara nada
As if nothing would happen

Seguire inventando
I'll go on inventing
Sin pararme en los detalles
Without stopping in the details

If anyone can help me out with this I would really appreciate it.

Thanks

look, don't make (things) up
people go by
things go by
they go by so rapidly

you don't look as if you would abandon the battle
and how do you have the nerve, how can you stop looking us in the eyes
as if nothing was happening

i will go on making (things) up
without stopping in the details


well, by and large your translation was ok
i just made some corrections but if someone else thinks there is a better translation he is welcome to give it a shot.

xxx

Thanks! I like your translation much better - I'm going to change it now!

glad i could help
you are welcome
xxx