Entra en mi vida- Sin Bandera (attempt at translating)

I figure i can improve my spanish by translating songs
PLEASE FEEL FREE TO FIX ANY MISTAKES!!!

gracias

Buenas noches,
Mucho gusto,
Eras una chica mas.
Después de cinco minutos ya eras alguien especial.
Sin hablarme,
Sin tocarme,
Algo dentro se encendió.
En tus ojos se hacia tarde y me olvidaba del reloj.

Good night
i like it a lot
you were a good girl....?
After 5 minutes, you were already someone special
without talking to me
without touching me
something lit up inside
i am lost in your eyes and i forgot my watch.....?


Estos días a tu lado me enseñaron que en verdad
No hay tiempo determinado para comenzar a amar.
Siento algo tan profundo que no tiene explicación,
No hay razón ni lógica en mi corazón.

Those days at you side taught me that in reality
there isn't definite time to begin to love
i feel something very profounf and it doesnt have an explination
there isnt reason nor logic in my heart

Coro

Entra en mi vida,
Te abro la puerta.
Se que en tus brazos ya no habrá noches desiertas.
Entra en mi vida,
Yo te lo ruego.
Te comencé por extrañar,
Pero empecé a necesitarte de luego.

enter in my life
i open the door for you
i know that in your arms there will not be any more deserted nights
enter in my live
i ask you
i started to strange you....???????
but i began to need you later

Buenas noches,
Mucho gusto,
Ya no existe nadie mas.
Después de este tiempo juntos,
No puedo volver atrás.
Tu me hablaste,
Me tocaste y te volviste mi ilusión.
Quiero que seas dueña de mi corazón.

good night
i like it alot
now no one greater exists
after this time together
i dont want to go back
you spoke to me
you touched me and returned my illusion
i want you to be the owner of my heart

Entra en mis horas,
Sálvame ahora,
Abre tus brazos fuerte y déjame entrar.

enter in my hours
save me now
open your strong arms and let me enter

Coro

Good job! Very few mistakes.

Originally Posted by baja jawn

Buenas noches,
Mucho gusto,
Eras una chica mas.
Después de cinco minutos ya eras alguien especial.
Sin hablarme,
Sin tocarme,
Algo dentro se encendió.
En tus ojos se hacia tarde y me olvidaba del reloj.

Good evening*
Nice to meet you
you were (just) one more girl
After 5 minutes, you were already someone special
without talking to me
without touching me
something lit up inside
It was getting late in your eyes & I forgot about the clock.


Estos días a tu lado me enseñaron que en verdad
No hay tiempo determinado para comenzar a amar.
Siento algo tan profundo que no tiene explicación,
No hay razón ni lógica en mi corazón.

These days at you side taught me that in reality
there isn't definite time to begin to love
i feel something so profound and it doesnt have an explanation
there isnt reason nor logic in my heart

Coro

Entra en mi vida,
Te abro la puerta.
Se que en tus brazos ya no habrá noches desiertas.
Entra en mi vida,
Yo te lo ruego.
Te comencé por extrañar,
Pero empecé a necesitarte de luego.

enter in my life
i open the door for you
i know that in your arms there will not be any more deserted nights
enter in my live
i ask you/I beg of you
I started off with missing you,
but i began to need you later

Buenas noches,
Mucho gusto,
Ya no existe nadie mas.
Después de este tiempo juntos,
No puedo volver atrás.
Tu me hablaste,
Me tocaste y te volviste mi ilusión.
Quiero que seas dueña de mi corazón.

good evening*
Nice to meet you
No one else exists anymore
after this time together
i can't go back
you spoke to me
you touched me and you became my illusion
i want you to be the owner of my heart

Entra en mis horas,
Sálvame ahora,
Abre tus brazos fuerte y déjame entrar.

enter in my hours
save me now
open your arms strongly and let me enter

Coro

*I think "good evening" makes more sense in English, since "good night" is used when someone is leaving. "Good evening" is more like a greeting.

ENTER MY LIFE

Good evening, nice meeting you, you were another chick
after five minutes you were already somebody special.
Without talking to me, without touching me, something lit up inside
it was getting late in your eyes and I forgot the watch.
These days by your side taught me that there's trully no time to start loving.
I feel something so deep that has no explanation, there's no reason or logic in my heart.
Enter my life, I open the door for you,
I know that in your arms there will be no more lonely nights.
Enter my life, I beg you, I started by missing you,
but then I started needing you.
Good evening, nice meeting you, there's nobody else anymore.
After this time together I cannot go back.
You talked to me, you touched me and you became my ilusion
I want you to be the owner of my heart.
Enter my life, I open the door for you,
I know that in your arms there will be no more lonely nights.
Enter my hours, save me now, open you arms wide and let me in.
Enter my life, I open the door for you,
I know that in your arms there will be no more lonely nights.
Enter my life, I beg you, I started by missing you, but then I started needing you.
I started by missing you, but then I started needing you...