Nicely done JunjouLover! Per your request, here are a few suggestions
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me pregunta que ha sido de ti
they ask me what happened to you
me muero por tenerte entre mis brazos pero ya hasta tu huella perdi
I'm dying to have you in my arms but now I've even lost [all] trace of you
llorando estoy el peor de mis fracsasos no, no quiero ver sin ti el amanecer...
I'm crying, the worst of my mistakes no, I don't want to watch the sun rise without you...
Last edited by bedroomeyes; 10-05-2009 at 09:05 PM.
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