PLEASE--i desperately need help

[cameronparkhurst]

PLEASE PLEASE help me transate this--

When the rain is blowing in your face
And the whole world is on your case
I would offer you a warm embrace
To make you feel my love

When evening shadows and the stars appear
And there is no one there to dry your tears
I could hold you for a million years
To make you feel my love

I know you haven't made your mind up yet
But I would never do you wrong
I've known it from the moment that we met
No doubt in my mind where you belong

I'd go hungry, I'd go black and blue
I'd go crawling down the avenue
There's nothing that I wouldn't do
To make you feel my love

The storms are raging on the rollin' sea
And on the highway of regret
The winds of change are blowing wild and free
You ain't seen nothing like me yet

I could make you happy, make your dreams come true
Nothing that I wouldn't do
Go to the ends of the earth for you
To make you feel my love

[wisalias]

Originally Posted by cameronparkhurst

PLEASE PLEASE help me transate this--

When the rain is blowing in your face // Yağmur yüzüne vurduğunda
And the whole world is on your case // ve tüm dünya senin meselen üzerindeyken
I would offer you a warm embrace // sana sıcak bir kucak sunardım
To make you feel my love // sana aşkımı hissettirmek için

When evening shadows and the stars appear // akşam yıldızları ve yıldızlar göründüğünde
And there is no one there to dry your tears // ve gözyaşlarını silecek kimse olmadığında
I could hold you for a million years // ben sana bir milyon yıl boyunca sarılırdım
To make you feel my love // sana aşkımı hissettirmek için

I know you haven't made your mind up yet // hala karar vermediğini biliyorum
But I would never do you wrong // ama sana asla yanlış yaptırmam
I've known it from the moment that we met // ilk tanıştığımız andan beri biliyorum bunu
No doubt in my mind where you belong // nereye ait olduğuna dair hiç şüphem yok

I'd go hungry, I'd go black and blue // aç kalırım, siyahlara mavilere giderim
I'd go crawling down the avenue // cadde boyu sürünürüm
There's nothing that I wouldn't do // yapmayacağım hiçbir şey yok
To make you feel my love // sana aşkımı hissettirmek için

The storms are raging on the rollin' sea // fırtınalar öfkeleniyor dalgalı denizin üzerinde
And on the highway of regret // pişmanlığın yolunda
The winds of change are blowing wild and free // değişim rüzgarları esiyor vahşi ve özgürce
You ain't seen nothing like me yet // daha benim gibi bir şey görmedin

I could make you happy, make your dreams come true // ben seni mutlu edebilirim, rüyalarını gerçek yapabilirim
Nothing that I wouldn't do // yapamayacağım şey yok
Go to the ends of the earth for you // senin dünyanın sonuna giderim
To make you feel my love // sana aşkımı hissettirmek için

ya biraz saçmaladığım yerler olabilir ama genel olarak bu şekilde... düzeltmelere açığım

[cameronparkhurst]

thank you

[sanalfikret]

gayet başarılı wisalias

[cameronparkhurst]

ya biraz saçmaladığım yerler olabilir ama genel olarak bu şekilde... düzeltmelere açığım ......gayet başarılı wisalias

i dont understand...i am sorry

[sanalfikret]

sorry cameron. wisalias says "i hope i've managed to make a good translation" and i replied "congradulations"

[cameronparkhurst]

its elizabeth---do you think you could please translate this? thank you if you can

Im finding my way back to sanity again
Though I dont really know what Im gonna do when I get there...
Take a breath and hold on tight
And spin around one more time
And gracefully fall back to the arms of grace

cause Im hanging on every word you say
And even if you dont wanna speak tonight
Thats alright, alright with me
cause I want nothing more
Than to sit outside heavens door
And listen to you breathing
Its where I wanna be, yeah
Where I wanna be...

Im looking past the shadows in my mind
Into the truth
and im trying to identify the voices in my head
God, I wish it were you
Let me feel one more time what it
Feels like to feel alive
And break these callouses off of me one more time

cause Im hanging on every word you say
And even if you dont wanna speak tonight
Thats alright, alright with me
cause I want nothing more than to sit outside your door
And listen to you breathing
Its where I wanna be, yeah-ah...

I dont want a thing from you
I bet youre tired of me
Waiting for the scraps to fall off
Of your table to the ground...
cause I just wanna be here now...

cause Im hanging on every word you say
And even if you dont wanna speak tonight
Thats alright, alright with me
cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heavens door
And listen to you breathing
Its where I wanna be, yeah...

cause Im hanging on every word you say
And even if you dont wanna speak tonight
Thats alright, alright with me
cause I want nothing more than to sit outside heavens door
And listen to you breathing
Its where I wanna be, yeah
Where I wanna be...
Where I wanna be...

[sanalfikret]

aklım başıma geri dönüyor
ama bilmiyorum ne işe yarayacak
derin bir nefes al ve sıkı tutun
bir takla daha at
ve zarifçe zerafetin kollarına yuvarlan

her kelimene takılıyorum
konuşmak istemesem bile
benim için problem değil
çünkü hiçbirşey istemiyorum
cennetin kapısının önüne oturup
senin nefesini dinlemekten başka
olmak istediğim yer burası
evet burası

aklımın gölgelerinden uzaklara bakıyorum
gerçeğe bakıyorum
aklımdaki sesleri tanımaya çalışıyorum
tanrım, keşke sen olsaydın
bir daha hisettmeme izin ver
canlılığın tadını
bu hissizliğimi kır

her kelimene takılıyorum
konuşmak istemesem bile
benim için problem değil
çünkü hiçbirşey istemiyorum
cennetin kapısının önüne oturup
senin nefesini dinlemekten başka
olmak istediğim yer burası
evet burası

senden hiçbirşey istemiyorum
eminim benden çok sıkıldın
masandan artıkların
yere düşmesini bekliyorum
çünkü şu anda sadece burda olmak istiyorum

her kelimene takılıyorum
konuşmak istemesem bile
benim için problem değil
çünkü hiçbirşey istemiyorum
cennetin kapısının önüne oturup
senin nefesini dinlemekten başka
olmak istediğim yer burası
evet burası



Ok liz, here's the deal... Tell us the artist and the name of the song everytime you want a translation, ok?

[lollipop]

sanalfikret:

that's: Lifehouse - Breathing http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=mKHKiqCxkqo another beautiful song.


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In general: Agreed. It would be better, if song name and artist is included in translation request

[sanalfikret]

Originally Posted by lollipop

sanalfikret:

that's: Lifehouse - Breathing http://uk.youtube.com/watch?v=mKHKiqCxkqo another beautiful song.


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In general: Agreed. It would be better, if song name and artist is included in translation request

thanks, miss loli... you roxorsmyboxors

btw, have you noticed, the song is directly addressing "god". not a beloved one, not anybody else, but god. very nice lyrics, and the love is not a human love, it's heavenly

[cameronparkhurst]

its called breathing by lifehouse (and its elizabeth ) i am sorry

and is it possible to include the english counter parts

the song is about a guy and a girl and they fought....(this is the story of my life right now) anyway....he is saying that he wants to spend eternity with her...that the love they have was made in heaven --that they were soulmates even though they fought..and he is waiting for her to speak...its beautiful song...

[sanalfikret]

Im looking past the shadows in my mind
Into the truth
and im trying to identify the voices in my head
God, I wish it were you
Let me feel one more time what it
Feels like to feel alive
And break these callouses off of me one more time


this whole paragraph is a plea to god "liz"

[cameronparkhurst]

actually when he says god I wish it were you--we say that in america--it does not literally mean GOD...it means i wish it were this special person...the song was written by the lead singer-- he went through kinda a hard time and its about this girl--they are all about this girl....

[sanalfikret]

what about sitting on the stairs to heaven and listening to you breathe?

[cameronparkhurst]

actually thats the most beautiful line in the song----when someone says they will wait outside heaven's door...in our culture ---there is a doorway to get into heaven...sometimes we call it the "pearly gates"----and not everyone is allowed into heaven...so he is saying that his love is so deep for her that he would sit outside the door of heaven--just to be close to her for all eternity---his love is eternal

when we say we just want to hear you breath--it means i just want to near you--we dont have to talk--we dont have to anything--just breathing...

its the most romantic line "cause I want nothing more
Than to sit outside heavens door
And listen to you breathing"

its very powerful