Correct me if I'm wrong

[ShyRose]

I really love Mustafa Ceceli's song "unutamam" so i decided to try and translate it to english. However, there are a few bits I'm not really sure about so can someone check it out pleaseeeeeeeeee thanks!! xXx

Unutmadım unutamam I didn't forget, I won't forget
Kara sevdam merak etme my black love, don't worry,
Yaşamaksa yaşadım lakin if you don't survive/live, I survived/lived but
Canımın çoğu kaldı sende my life's child stayed with you (i think that's like "my innocence died with you" kinda thing. if that makes sense )

Pişman mıyım asla Do i regret? Never
Güzelleştim yasla ShyRose is not sureeeeeee. something about beautiful tears
Sevmedim mi sevdim evet Did I not love? yes I loved
Senden sonra ihtirasla something about passion after you (???)

Ama benim ciğerim yanar but my cigarette is burning
Ten oyalanır can kanar something about skin and life :S
İki gözüm iki çeşme two eyes, two taps (u know like sink taps... that's quite a good line... )
Haberin yok içerime içerime akar … you have no idea that my insides are leaking...

[Volcano1985]

http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/tu...ation-pls.html

[silent_enigma]

Originally Posted by ShyRose

Unutmadım unutamam I didn't forget, I won't forget

ok its possible

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Kara sevdam merak etme my black love, don't worry,

no way "kara sevda" is totally not "black love" its "blind love"

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Yaşamaksa yaşadım lakin if you don't survive/live, I survived/lived but

u got it wrong it is "if it's living, I lived but"

Originally Posted by ShyRose

Canımın çoğu kaldı sende my life's child stayed with you

i think again u get something wrong "child" means kid actually so the true translation may be "most of my life is left on you"

Originally Posted by ShyRose

Pişman mıyım asla Do i regret? Never

well make it noun. am i regretful, never

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Güzelleştim yasla

"yas" means "mourn" i get beautiful as i mourn

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Sevmedim mi sevdim evet Did I not love? yes I loved

perfect

Originally Posted by ShyRose

Senden sonra ihtirasla something about passion after you (???)

after you with passion it was simple but i see u get the aproximate meaning

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Ama benim ciğerim yanar but my cigarette is burning

hahaha that is "ciğer" not "cigar". ciger means lungs and heart

Originally Posted by ShyRose

Ten oyalanır can kanar something about skin and life :S

yes it is "my skin is gettin busy with others i fake my life"

Originally Posted by ShyRose

İki gözüm iki çeşme two eyes, two taps (u know like sink taps... that's quite a good line... )

I'm crying madly..you don't have heard will be better but still not the exact

Originally Posted by ShyRose

Haberin yok içerime içerime akar … you have no idea that my insides are leaking...

tears flow to my inside will be a better translation