help !!!!

hey guys can someone help me to correct this lyrics please

thanks in advance

ebru gundes//yalan

Yalnızlık kolay değil anladım//i understood that lonliness is not easy
Yüreğim yangınlarda geri dön//my heart is on fire,come back
Tükendi bitti artık bedenim //now my body is exhausted ,it ended
Ayrılık ölümden daha zor//separation is harder than death
Tükendi bitti artık bedenim //now my body is exhausted ,it ended
Ayrılık ölümden daha zor//separation is harder than death

Kırık dökük bir sal gibi battım ha batacağım
i swom like a broken dowdy float ha i'll swim
Mahşer günü günahına inan kefil olacağım
i will be a bail for your sins in jugement day
Dönmeyeceksen söyle ateşinle yanacağım
tell me if you won't come, i will burn with your flames
Yandığım ateşlerde sevdan gibi yalan yalan
i burnt in the fire , your love is like a lie lie
Dönmeyeceksen söyle ateşinle yanacağım
tell me if you won't come, i will burn with your flames
Yandığım ateşlerde sevdan gibi yalan yalan
i burnt in the fire , your love is like a lie lie

yalan yalan yalan yalan yalan yalan
a lie ,a lie a lie
sevdan aşkın yalan yalan
your love your passion is a lie
yalan yalan yalan yalan yalan yalan
a lie ,a lie a lie
sevdan aşkın yalan yalan
your love your passion is a lie

Originally Posted by larosa

hey guys can someone help me to correct this lyrics please

thanks in advance

no, dear, i can't, 'cause you did it perfectly. i only have a couple of comments (not correction)

Tükendi bitti artık bedenim
now my body is exhausted ,it ended

here bitti is used for emphasis otherwise it's redundant. your translation is correct, but we understand it as exhausted completely or exhausted to the end, if there's such an expression in english.

Yandığım ateşlerde sevdan gibi yalan yalan
i burnt in the fire , your love is like a lie lie

here the original is misspelled (looked at a couple of lyrics sites. the same mistake): de must be a separate word meaning too. this changes the meaning to: the fires that burn me is a lie too like your love

i know it's way too late that sounds rediculous,but thanks a million

you're welcome. and no problem, i was away for a long time too