Hi,
VivaPalestina requested you to me, she said your good at rapping and well can you review mine and help me out a bit? im up for postive comments as well as negative comments either or motivates me more. if you decided to help me thank you for your time! (: the site is below
http://www.allthelyrics.com/forum/lyrics-review/98790-rap-lyrics-comments-please-new-of-6th-10-10-a.html