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  1. WishinOnAStar
    WishinOnAStar
    here you can post songs your currently working on

    Here's my 17th song and its currently in progress :

    I was wishin on a star
    For the key to your heart
    Then when we were done
    I thought you were the one
    Then i see you with her
    I almost feel the hurt
    And then i remember
    but how could i forget
    The reason we had broken up:
    Because we only met

    thats all so far but ive been changing the lyrics around non stop your go!!
  2. WishinOnAStar
    WishinOnAStar
    can anyone guess where my username came from? lol
  3. amaryn
    amaryn
    oh, I did already on your wall and the thread where you asked for help. Now on my poetry thread there are on page 3 three short thoughts in shape of poetry on which Doug Denslowe has commented . He wants me to fix them together in a songshape. Two of the three have a title, one of them is "I remember". I posted them in blue print.
    I am now working on these, but suggestions are welcome.
    WishinOnAStar: you couldnot go into the jungle and leave your stereo at home,lol Too bad!
  4. WishinOnAStar
    WishinOnAStar
    lol nope not even that honestly my ipod goes where i go lol :P
  5. amaryn
    amaryn
    I've started writing "ipod in the jungle",
    a song dedicated to you( )
  6. amaryn
    amaryn
    and finished it It's on my poem thread
    I hope you like it -
    inspite of the tragic end
    (hehe, black humour,lol )
  7. Doug Denslowe
    Doug Denslowe
    Jiminy Cricket have something to do with your name,Star?
  8. amaryn
    amaryn
    I'm gonna try to fix 3 poems of mine into a entity, as Doug has proposed.
    Soon tell you more.
  9. Doug Denslowe
    Doug Denslowe
    Walking Shoes Blues (I'm still working on this,that's why I'm posting it here)The "Walk on Down"part is a big overture,the next line is sung solo.

    When I'm sick of
    T.V. News
    When I'm tired of
    Pills and booze

    Look in the corner
    For my shoes
    And walk,walk,walk away
    Them blues

    Walk on down
    Walk those blues away
    Walk on down
    Tomorrows another day
    Walk on down
    Everything will be all right
    Walk on down
    And get yourself some walking shoes

    When I'm tired of
    Paying those dues
    When Ive nothing left
    To lose

    I look in the corner
    For my shoes
    And walk,walk,walk away
    Them blues

    Walk on down
    Walk those blues away
    Walk on down
    Tomorrows another day
    Walk on down
    Eveything will be all right
    Walk on down
    And get yourself some walking shoes

    (well,that's what I've got for now,I've got the music worked out.I usually write the lyrics first,but this came together at the same time.)
  10. amaryn
    amaryn
    Hi, Doug!

    First. What means "playing those dues?"? Is it a expression used in USA?
    I'm not familiar with it.

    When reading these lyrics many a time it starts to swing in my head
    as a rather slow-motion blues .
    Remember "Count your little fingers"of Janis? or her "One good man"?
    That kind of rhythm is the one I'd like to use, inhaling the joy of leaving certain rusty habits behind.

    However, I can also hear it as a much faster blues rhythm.
    Which one have you chosen?

    The thought behind the song suits blues very well indeed, I think.
    The term "walk" being used as chosing "to do it your own way",
    typical for blues singers such as John Lee Hooker
    I'll wait to see what your final version will look like.
    Promising indeed!
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