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Trina Marie said:
08-12-2013 04:48 AM
Venomonology_ I Just be stopping by..
I didn't want you to be thinking???
I ran like hell.and had to cry
Just so you know, I came with blows,
Don't got a fro, in your freak show_
"Dude" ... I can't understand....
Some the sh!t you try'n say,
Are you straight from Mars... maybe Pluto?
but anyways__
What ever planet????
You be comin from,
Do you have a spaceship?
Own a laser or a gun?
Cause if you do?>>>>>>>>
I could really give a Fuk!!!
I'll just shove it up your azz_
And watch you pucker up_
Don't refer to me as a Couger ,
I don't run around and say "MEOW"
I am nothing but a lady!!!!!!!!
Now get on your knees, "Bit cH"...and Bow!!!!!
Don't beam me up like Scotty,
Your confusing like a Clown_
Gotta Get off what your taking.....
Life's too short_
Here on Earth_Or in your Town!!!
So when you accomplish that and your ready for some fun,
Give this Bit Ch a Holla!!!! Don't forget I'm number one!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_________________
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RickeyJoe said:
02-27-2013 01:23 AM
You really think that SBU is better than me?
That's foolish.
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ROBBMACK said:
10-22-2012 09:40 AM
Ah Mannnnn.... I just read it,.. I should pull an edit but ima dead it.. it wanted out, I let it.. fuk it, its threaded....
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ROBBMACK said:
10-22-2012 09:32 AM
Thanks for the input V... Yeah it probably was kinda bland... Regret some of now ..But I am literally still faded I guess I was unable to be very clever, the damn letters on my phone are still jumpin off my phone at me.....
Sux too cuz smooth viciously raped that one...
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_SBU said:
10-13-2012 01:10 PM
Yeah, it requires quite a lot of knowledge of the series lore. and with that piece, some Norse to catch the Loki references. Other ones are probably better starting points.
genII so far: http://www.wattpad.com/user/TheHoldersOfficial
My pieces there so far are: The Holder of Nurture, ..of Inspiration, ..of Tidings, ..of Menagerie, ..of Mischief.
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_SBU said:
10-13-2012 11:50 AM
Hey man. Yeah I've not been around much recently, I've been temporarily busying myself with contributing to a writing project other than lyrics. (genII reboot of The Holders series). I've checked some of your recent lyrics here and they're all superb. They were already strong when last I was here, so its encouraging to that they continue to improve beyond that.
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smoothtung said:
10-12-2012 11:02 AM
Thanks man, and I did I felt it too. Though the harsh lines - no disrespect or hate
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smoothtung said:
10-12-2012 07:15 AM
You can throw down now bud I already lost feel of my last drop
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amaryn said:
10-11-2012 12:11 PM
Great
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ROBBMACK said:
10-10-2012 11:27 PM
Haven't checked yet but I have a feeling u snapped at me
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