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Am un cantec de Directia 5...mersi anticipat!

"Azi pot spera"
"Today I can hope"

Aud o voce de copil
I hear a child's voice
Imi spune c-ar vrea sa ma vada
He tells me he'd like to "vada"
Cum pot lumea sa o schimb dintr-o data
How can people change all of a sudden?
Imi da curaj sa reusesc
It gives me the courage to succeed
Cand ma priveste simte parca
When he looks at me, he seems to feel(?)
Lumea intreaga am cucerit dintr-o joaca.
I conquered the whole world in a joke

Refren:
Azi am gasit o noua cale
Today I looked for a new path
Spre un vis nesfarsit
Towards an endless dream
Azi pot spera
Today I can hope
Ca intotdeauna in viata mea va lumina.
That my life will shine forever

Asculta tot ce vreau sa-i spun
He listens to all I want to tell him
Si simt ca ar vrea sa-nteleaga
& I feel that he'd like to know
Stiu ca cel mai mult ar vrea sa ma creada
I know that he wants to believe me most/that what he wants most is to believe me(?)
Imi da curaj sa reusesc
It gives me the courage to succeed
Cand ma priveste simte parca
When he looks at me, he seems to feel(?)
Lumea intreaga am cucerit dintr-o joaca.
I conquered the whole world in a joke

Here you are:

Imi spune c-ar vrea sa ma vada
He tells me he'd like to see me

Cum pot lumea sa o schimb dintr-o data
How can I change the world at once?

Cand ma priveste simte parca
When he looks at me, he seems to feel-- it's ok

Azi am gasit o noua cale
Today I found a new path

Ca intotdeauna in viata mea va lumina.
That in my life he will shine forever (probably the child is the subject of the verb)


Si simt ca ar vrea sa-nteleaga
& I feel that he'd like to understand

Stiu ca cel mai mult ar vrea sa ma creada
I know that what he wants most is to believe me --this is the correct equivalent

Imi da curaj sa reusesc
He gives me the courage to succeed (I believe the subject is the child, therefore he, not it)

Mersi!