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  Thread: July by Drake (Cover) FEEDBACK? (7 Replies, 3,527 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

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• It isn't bad for a POEM. I wouldn't consider it a...

  Thread: Tell me what ya think of this one?? (5 Replies, 1,929 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  It isn't bad for a POEM. I wouldn't consider it a rap though.

• This sounds like a poem but this is a lil better...

  Thread: Tell me what ya think of this one?? (5 Replies, 1,929 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  This sounds like a poem but this is a lil better than your other stuff. Still ****. Just âtd better than ****.

• Why are you rapping bro? Youre pissing me off...

  Thread: whos got beer (2 Replies, 1,936 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Why are you rapping bro? Youre pissing me off because youre spamming the goddamn forum with this ****. Im sorry but if you arent gettin the feedback and the view count youve hope for, then its...

• Once again, this is terrible. Only. My. Opinion...

  Thread: more lyrics tell me what ya think (3 Replies, 1,534 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Once again, this is terrible. Only. My. Opinion though. Sorry I hurt ya feelings. But that is what I think of these "lyrics".

• To be honest, this is terrible. Thats like some...

  Thread: Young Boi (1 Replies, 1,578 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  To be honest, this is terrible. Thats like some lil wayne ****.

• Poll: Good point, M! This ***** needs to learn that...

  Thread: Should I Trashh Or Keep This Verse Ihn My Rapp , HELP ! (6 Replies, 3,897 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Good point, M! This ***** needs to learn that just because you like someone's lyrics doesn't mean you can just take them and put them in your rap! WITHOUT ASKING FOR PERMISSION BEFORE DOING SO. wack...

• Yo! Thanks fir the feedback man! I personally...

  Thread: Quick 16 to Positive balance by Immortal Technique! (3 Replies, 2,289 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo! Thanks fir the feedback man! I personally like your version! "She's messin with my mind/ playin' with my emotions..." LOL ican see dr.phil sayin that ****! Love it :) i hope a lot more people...

• Oh and if youre reading the 16, go kinda fast but...

  Thread: Quick 16 to Positive balance by Immortal Technique! (3 Replies, 2,289 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Oh and if youre reading the 16, go kinda fast but with the beat on this part:
  But trust me when I tell you/
  Your **** is minimal; call it*decimal/
  I murder beats so bad that it's criminal/
  Beats...

• Quick 16 to Positive balance by Immortal Technique!

  Thread: Quick 16 to Positive balance by Immortal Technique! (3 Replies, 2,289 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo! Nameless here! And I hope you like my quick 16 bars for this beat!
  Here's tge Instrumental: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=79R5MLHo0L8
  
  Hello, my name is Nameless/
  And I'm a pretty big...

• Well next time, try ASKING FOR PERMISSION before...

  Thread: My First Whole Rap , Comment Plz ! (10 Replies, 3,905 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Well next time, try ASKING FOR PERMISSION before you use sOmeone else's lines :)

• Poll: Im telling you bro, im not tryin to accuse you of...

  Thread: Should I Trashh Or Keep This Verse Ihn My Rapp , HELP ! (6 Replies, 3,897 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Im telling you bro, im not tryin to accuse you of anythin but your lyrics sound VERY familiar to me..

• Yo, thank you for your feedback! Um, I do listen...

  Thread: July by Drake (Cover) FEEDBACK? (7 Replies, 3,527 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo, thank you for your feedback! Um, I do listen to A LOT of Drake so thats probably why it sounds Drake- like and its his song in the first place lol.

• Dude, I swear, some of the lines in verse 1...

  Thread: My First Whole Rap , Comment Plz ! (10 Replies, 3,905 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Dude, I swear, some of the lines in verse 1 sounds REALLY REALY familiar.

• FINISHED LYRICS! (Or at least almost-finished) ...

  Thread: July by Drake (Cover) FEEDBACK? (7 Replies, 3,527 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  FINISHED LYRICS! (Or at least almost-finished)
  
  ** * * * * * * * * * * * July** * * * * * * * * * * **
  My vision impaired by love/
  But I ain't about to finish last/
  Love got me chasing it/
  But...

• Thanks bro! There's still more to come :) but I...

  Thread: July by Drake (Cover) FEEDBACK? (7 Replies, 3,527 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Thanks bro! There's still more to come :) but I appreciate the feedback!

• See, things like that you should really let...

  Thread: my long waited return (4 Replies, 2,409 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  See, things like that you should really let people know from the start or else they'll think you're either homeschooled or plain ignorant but I apologize if I offended you. And okay, now I know that...

• It's T H R O N E, friend. And it's T R I P P E D....

  Thread: my long waited return (4 Replies, 2,409 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  It's T H R O N E, friend. And it's T R I P P E D. And it is I've not iv. It's C I T Y not citie. And what does muture mean? Never seen the word. In my opinion, it is always good to look over what...

• July by Drake (Cover) FEEDBACK?

  Thread: July by Drake (Cover) FEEDBACK? (7 Replies, 3,527 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  My vision impaired by love/
  But I ain't about to finish last/
  Love got me chasing it/
  But Lust got me within its*grasp/
  Youre thinkin' if this gonna be the last date/
  While I'm tryna make the...

• To be COMPLETELY honest, I'd rather listen to...

  Thread: First Rap, Please give feedback (2 Replies, 2,131 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  To be COMPLETELY honest, I'd rather listen to that 12 year old's first rap about being a pilot then you, mate. Oh and, it's P O U R not poor. But hey, if all of our first raps are amazing then we'd...

• I see you Skin ;) get all them good compliments!

  Thread: New song ...Homicide... Feedback Please... (10 Replies, 5,055 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  I see you Skin ;) get all them good compliments!

• Zarex, dude. I thought that I was the only one...

  Thread: Official Battle Thread. (363 Replies, 86,373 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Zarex, dude. I thought that I was the only one that had to give explainations to my lines and or verses! Lol

• Im currently listening to The Point of No Return...

  Thread: What song are you currently listening to ? (49 Replies, 15,451 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Im currently listening to The Point of No Return by Immortal Technique, my favorite rapper.
  
  
  http://m.youtube.com/index?desktop_uri=%2F&gl=US#/watch?v=Igt-jW4e8ts
  
  Tell me if this links works...

• To be honest, iatenemo, your first rap is about...

  Thread: my first rap, what do you think?" slight laguage" (1 Replies, 1,638 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  To be honest, iatenemo, your first rap is about as good as that 12 year old's. Its rather childish and pretty default. Like, there's nothing special about it, man. Im sorry, I dont mean anything by...

• Yo, what up thread! This is going @ those whom...

  Thread: Official Battle Thread. (363 Replies, 86,373 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo, what up thread! This is going @ those whom are going against Skin ;)
  
  Ay, i spit great flows like a water dispenser/
  You bxtches aint about your rhyme/
  Aint about yo grind like a rock in a...

• Updated verses! ** * * * * * * * *Diabolical...

  Thread: Hello and Help! (6 Replies, 2,535 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Updated verses!
  ** * * * * * * * *Diabolical
  Tougher than titanium/
  Deadly like uranium/
  Lyrical bullets/
  Penetrating em/ending em/
  You n!gg@s old/
  Crushed, Canned, Recycled Aluminium/
  Pen...

• Yo Skin! Ive been writing about the same thing!...

  Thread: new song called Gangsta!!! Please leave feed back. (14 Replies, 4,482 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo Skin! Ive been writing about the same thing! But yo, Keep up the good work! Maybe we can make a collab one day, man

• Yo Kate! Well done! I suggest that you should try...

  Thread: It Turns - Need A Rapper To Look At This - HELP!! (11 Replies, 3,555 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo Kate! Well done! I suggest that you should try using bars. For example:
  
  They tell us to look forward/
  But I cant help looking back/
  
  This makes the verse(s) easier to read :)

• Yo, this definitely needs for feedback. It has...

  Thread: New song ...Homicide... Feedback Please... (10 Replies, 5,055 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yo, this definitely needs for feedback. It has great structure and is very well worded, Skin.

• To be honest Ben, I think your rap is rather...

  Thread: I'm 12 and world, this is my rap (3 Replies, 1,961 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  To be honest Ben, I think your rap is rather childish but I cant blame you since youre only 12. But hey, keep in writing! Im no lyrical genius myself but I think that at your age, youre better off...

• I agree with Skin. Youre very talented, Molotova!...

  Thread: Verbal Needs (11 Replies, 3,821 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  I agree with Skin. Youre very talented, Molotova! Just like you and Skin, im also new to ATL. Maybe you could give me some feedback on my first piece posted in the forum under Hello and Help! ? :)

• Updated verse! Tougher than titanium/ Deadly...

  Thread: Hello and Help! (6 Replies, 2,535 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Updated verse!
  
  Tougher than titanium/
  Deadly like uranium/
  Lyrical bullets/
  Penetrating em/ending em/
  Pen packed/ready to attack/
  Ending your act/
  Like the Warsaw Pact/
  You will decinerate/

• Hey, thank you for the tip man. Im working on...

  Thread: Hello and Help! (6 Replies, 2,535 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Hey, thank you for the tip man. Im working on rewriting and stamping my lines as i go! Ill post the updated version in a bit! Once again, i appreciate your compliments and your help!

• Yeah, I know its broken but im still working on...

  Thread: Hello and Help! (6 Replies, 2,535 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Yeah, I know its broken but im still working on it, help? :))

• Hey,

  Thread: Hey, (0 Replies, 1,434 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Hey, im 16 and i just started writing a month ago and this is what I have so far! Tips?
  Tougher than titanium,
  Deadly like uranium,
  Lyrical bullets,
  Penetrating em, ending em
  (Need connector...

• Hello and Help!

  Thread: Hello and Help! (6 Replies, 2,535 Views) by Namel3ss

  
  

  Hey, what up yall. Im new to te forum. So if i posted this in the wrong thread just tell me! Ok, so i need your help! I cant think of a way to connect my verses together! This is what i have so far!...