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Thread: Official Battlerap Thread ...(read rules before posting). (25 Replies, 8,206 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Figure i'd get back in the game and lay waste to some names
I was put in this heated battle just to stomp out the flames
SBU disses me, 'suicidal thoughts' like Biggie
Im about to smoke a fag and...
Thread: Honesty (55 Replies, 13,335 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Can i use this if i reference you, i have a song instrumental that i think would fit it perfectly
Thread: Spit a verse! Quick Idea (5 Replies, 3,056 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
This is something i thought of while listening to a song called Worldwide Choppers by Tech N9ne. One the song he has a verse from each lyrcist on the track. On the song he features big names like...
Thread: New song, needs a title (0 Replies, 2,220 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
[Verse 1]
I was raised in CV6, a socially deprived place
Just the attraction of the area, im sick of and i hate
Longford and Foleshill, such tarnished places
With all these kids being raised...
Thread: LETS KICK THIS OFF: *Freestyle Cypher Thread* (diss the man above you) (69 Replies, 192,437 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Nice comeback, but your a little whack to think i'd turn my back
When i could run through SBU like Usain Bolt on a track
I respect your skills, but see im a man who goes for kills
Straight up...
Thread: LETS KICK THIS OFF: *Freestyle Cypher Thread* (diss the man above you) (69 Replies, 192,437 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I could dis this guy but i think his rap says enough
He sucks, is this guy really thinking hes tough
*****, that isn't a rhyme, its the start of a book
I read it through once, wasn't worth the...
Thread: Beazy - Combat (INSTRUMENTAL TRACK INCLUDED) Tips Appreciated (5 Replies, 1,946 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I liked it but half of this was from your previous post mainstream (i think)
Thread: Anyone and everyone battle me. (10 Replies, 3,066 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I've been gone awhile, so its time to regain my name
By spitting bars that fry any emcee's brain
Tre coming at me thinking he's fly, but im a swatter
His rap skill is visible, so i wont need a...
Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 72,984 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I rip rappers so bad lyrically, it aint even funny
Im the definition of overkill in the dictionary
Spit fire through the wire like im speaking incendiary
You made a mistake, coming here to battle...
Thread: Just a few short ryhmes, Feedback please! (2 Replies, 1,197 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I was given in class a few topics to write about, so tell me what you think
-Abortion-
They say every life is a unique creation
So why do many suffer premature annihilation
Whether its cus of...
Thread: Lowkey - Terrorist (0 Replies, 1,527 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
So, We must ask ourselves, What is the dictionary definition of "Terrorism"?
The systematic use of terror especially as a means of coercion
But what is terror?
According to the dictionary I hold...
Thread: Jump in (44 Replies, 7,017 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I dont really see where your going with this
I could eat alhpabet soup and *hit out better lyrics
I've noticed reading this that all your raps are sinical
Best not bring that forawrd to Saybers...
Thread: My mates ryhmes, give feedback please (1 Replies, 1,223 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
The ethnic morals of today kinda get me sad
Alcaholic consumption with kids addicted to smoking fags
So many young girls envy attention, we now call em slags
Look at society - tell me the state...
Thread: My new song -Impact (2 Replies, 1,345 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
bump. really want this to get feedback
Thread: My new song -Impact (2 Replies, 1,345 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
This is my new song Impact which is about the war.
Sk'ndeep gave me permission to use one of his verses, so credit to sk'n for the first verse
[Hook]
Another bullet fired, Another body hits the...
Thread: Spacebar vs SK'N Deep (23 Replies, 3,847 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
You both came really hard this battle
Sk'n, i was hoping you could pull off a verse like your last as i felt your flow was lacking a little. However i think you had more creativity in your lyrics...
Thread: A question about the tournament (4 Replies, 1,377 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Seeing as Karma and Space have disappeared (i think, al their posts have been deleted or removed)
What are the line-ups for next round? Just interested :D
Thread: Juneyah vs. Sk'n Deep (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (34 Replies, 4,004 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
This has got to be one of the best battles so far, so here goes my vote
Zarex, you came with some sick wordplay and some nice multi's.
Sk'n however gets my vote as his drop was just amazing. The...
Thread: Karma vs. Molo (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (41 Replies, 6,253 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
How were the votes bias? "lol @ saber voting against meh cus i whooped his *** destroyed his pride
ruined his diginity in our first battle". Trust me, i have nothing against you. I just generally...
Thread: Juneyah vs. Sk'n Deep (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (34 Replies, 4,004 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Wow sk'n you really came through on this one, Zarex is gonna have to drop something amazing to counter this
Thread: Karma vs. Molo (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (41 Replies, 6,253 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Umm.....Spacebar kinda explained everything so
I think Karma and Molo both had immense wordplay, Karma came stronger with the disses but overall i preferred Molotova's
Clear enough for you?
Thread: Spacebar vs. SBU (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (11 Replies, 2,145 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
SBU came with some creative lines but slightly lacked wordplay
Space had some insane wordplay and some nice disses
Good battle guys, my vote goes to Space
Btw im not too good at explaining so...
Thread: Cash vs. Space (ROUND 1) (32 Replies, 3,883 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
both came out hard but i have to go with Cash, i enjoyed his more
Thread: Topic Rhyming (94 Replies, 17,452 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Lifes about living every second like its your last
Hanging out with freinds, chilling and having a blast
Some of us learn lessons like we were born in class
And others just go though it too fast
...
Thread: Saber vs. Karma (ROUND 1) (12 Replies, 2,666 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
good battle man, the right person won
Thread: Saber vs. Karma (ROUND 1) (12 Replies, 2,666 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
They say karma's a *****, but im prepared for this
If what comes around goes around im expecting a diss
Im an ametaur, but im hot enough to blow the thermometer
Bars tight like leather, i should...
Thread: Saber vs. Karma (ROUND 1) (12 Replies, 2,666 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
check in
Thread: SBU vs. Steve (ROUND 1) (41 Replies, 7,096 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
No-one writes like you? Songs with a story? Most of the songs on here have a backstory, its not our fault you cant pick up on it
Thread: Your Emcee Names (8 Replies, 2,280 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Mines Sayber and its made from the initials of the people that rap with me, and i think it sounds pretty cool
Thread: I need lyric help? (1 Replies, 1,799 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Its decent but try to mix between ryhming patterns as if every 2 lines ryhme it can be repetitive
Thread: Tre vs. Molotova (ROUND 1) (19 Replies, 4,829 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Tre and Molotova you both posted amazing peices and it is near impossible to choose for me.
But im going to give Molotova a vote, good ryhmes guys nd gals
Thread: Let's Have a Battle Tournament (53 Replies, 5,903 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Can people still join? If so put me down
Thread: SBU vs. Steve (ROUND 1) (41 Replies, 7,096 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Allow me as i havnt heard SBU before so this wont be one-sided. You were good but SBU murdered you
Thread: Daydream (0 Replies, 1,523 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I posted this but it didnt get any feedback so im going to try again
[Verse 1]
I never got any credit, all I was given was hate and doubt,
I hate my life, now I’m up in a daydream just phasing...
Thread: Boy Next Door (9 Replies, 2,716 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Again, another brilliant set of lyrics from you
The ryhmes go together perfectly and the lyrics are just amazing
Thread: First Rap, Please give feedback (2 Replies, 1,555 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I dont like it personally, it seems like you havn't thought of a flow, but just put some ryhming words together
Thread: Dreamer " Audio" Sk'nDeep 2011 (4 Replies, 1,781 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
have to admit i really liked it, Are you planning on recording all of the songs you wrote?
Thread: Daydream -New ra (0 Replies, 1,184 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I posted this on another site and it didnt get too many views so ill try it here.
I never got any credit, all I was given was hate and doubt,
I hate my life, now I’m up in a daydream just...
Thread: I need inspiration, please help (4 Replies, 2,064 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I find its best to write about your state of mind, if your angry for example, vent your anger into your lyrics
Thread: Taste of your own medication Preview (0 Replies, 1,292 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
As you know i posted some lyrics earlier this week. I've gotten around to recording the first verse and the chorus so feedback would be great
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9Et-hrnaNoA
Thread: Need someone to help finish thsi (0 Replies, 1,162 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I started writing and i have the first verse done but im stucjk on making a chorus for it.
*sigh* yea...I'm sitting in my chair, Thinking that life isn't fair.
Asking myself where the hell are...
Thread: It Turns - Need A Rapper To Look At This - HELP!! (11 Replies, 2,653 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Its unusual for a lyricist to do rap, its even more unusual for them to put out something like this on their first try. Sure it could be improved, but all raps can
Personally i like it
Thread: A rap i wrote for a school perfirmance (3 Replies, 1,475 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Thats pretty cool!
How did it go?
Thread: New Song Dreamer Feed Back Please... (16 Replies, 4,045 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I wish I had a big enough band aid to rehabilitate the worlds fate.
Stop all this hostility and hate.
hate is man made, and man will always make mistakes.
as the world rotates ,more problems...
Thread: Can someone write these lyrics? (11 Replies, 2,590 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I recently got into the music industry, nothing too big. Im only 16 so...can be hard
Me and my group wanted to start rapping/singing about subjects that people can relate to. We've made 2 songs so...
Thread: A rap i wrote for a school perfirmance (3 Replies, 1,475 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Bit of a backstory. Basically one person is a bully and the entire rap is about two boys having a conversation about her. The different verses will be put on at different times of her life throughout...
Thread: Can someone write these lyrics? (11 Replies, 2,590 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
0.0 im actually speechless
Both of the lyrics were amazing and im more than thankful for the help. Building on what Sk'nDeep said, i was surprised that anyone would help. Then when i seen failedson...
Thread: Battlefield (1 Replies, 1,977 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Ok this was my first attempt at a rap verse based on war
Advice on how to improve would be good
Guns at the ready
Armed to the teeth
Fighting for a tommorow
That they may never see
Lost on...
Thread: Can someone write these lyrics? (11 Replies, 2,590 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
Srry if this is the wrong forum feel free to move it
I need someone to write a song about someone who is always judged and tries to turn their back on the people judging them...if that made sense
Thread: Fire and Ice (7 Replies, 3,124 Views) by Saybers Lyricals
I have to admit this is really good, the words were peiced together perfectly