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• Well written. It could actually lend itself to at...

  Thread: "Come Wormwood" (Life's No Fairy Tale) (7 Replies, 8,028 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Well written. It could actually lend itself to at least two distinctive musical genres (metal and country. heck, you could invent the country-metal genre with it if someone else hasn't done that...

• The basic music concept

  Thread: Circus Sinister (3 Replies, 2,493 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  This is just a basic concept of the music so far. I was going to use an organ but it sounded better with Celeste, Timpani, and Cowbell.
  
  https://youtu.be/SOI_YQ87DO8

• Yeah, that is the tone. It was inspired by a...

  Thread: Circus Sinister (3 Replies, 2,493 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Yeah, that is the tone. It was inspired by a creepypasta called Deadwoods Circus. I agree about the organ. I can hear it as well. A playful yet sinister two beats per measure undertone as well, like...

• A touching and sad song. I can almost hear a soft...

  Thread: remains (2 Replies, 2,310 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  A touching and sad song. I can almost hear a soft guitar (plucked not strummed) in the background.

• An excellent song. I really love the bridge.

  Thread: Will I Ever Make It (7 Replies, 4,692 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  An excellent song. I really love the bridge.

• Circus Sinister

  Thread: Circus Sinister (3 Replies, 2,493 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Circus Sinister
  
  VERSE 1:
  Can you hear the music?
  It’s all around you?
  Can you hear the music
  As it surrounds you?
  
  The calliope’s playing as loud as it can
  With the help of the drums of the...

• Lol. He's actually a really cool guy who writes...

  Thread: Gimme Stephen King (2 Replies, 3,236 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Lol. He's actually a really cool guy who writes some of the best (and strangest) horror novels and short stories.
  The lyrics are an homage to his writings, referencing several of the wonderful and...

• Gimme Stephen King

  Thread: Gimme Stephen King (2 Replies, 3,236 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  This is a song I wrote which was inspired by my love for reading a good Stephen King story...
  
  Gimme Stephen King
  Verse 1
  Randall’s got a handle on the end of the world
  He’s driving all the...

• Clearly might be a good title.

  Thread: Clearly (8/31/14) (1 Replies, 2,138 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Clearly might be a good title.

• Willow Creek

  Thread: Willow Creek (1 Replies, 2,194 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Willow Creek
  
  Chorus:
  Gonna take the midnight train to Willow Creek
  In a pair of faded jeans with boots on my feet
  Buy a little vacant home in the middle of the street
  And start a brand new...

• Sugarpop Tease

  Thread: Abigail and Leon (2 Replies, 3,485 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Filled in the hook and a new chorus and renamed the song Sugarpop Tease
  
  
  Verse One:
  Abigail Anderson
  Star of the day
  Caught a boy’s attention
  And turned away
  
  Laughing as she ran

• Excellent song. I love the twist. It counters the...

  Thread: "Ray of Sunshine" (6 Replies, 2,518 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Excellent song. I love the twist. It counters the first verse nicely. Very wel written

• Abigail and Leon

  Thread: Abigail and Leon (2 Replies, 3,485 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Abigail Anderson
  Star of the day
  Caught a boy’s attention
  And turned away
  
  Laughing as she ran
  Trying to catch a star
  Trading love for fame
  And for a fancy car

• Battle of the Little Screen

  Thread: Battle of the Little Screen (1 Replies, 2,885 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Battle of the Little Screen
  
  Verse 1 (Duet):
  There is a battle that will never end
  A conflict that cannot be won.
  A war in a theater that’s ever-changing
  Arms and combatants rearranging.
  ...

• It all comes down to that, doesn't it. A lifetime...

  Thread: Planet Of Death (2 Replies, 802 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  It all comes down to that, doesn't it. A lifetime of grand achievements. Of scrimping and saving for a rainy day. And in the end there is nothing left of us and the only purchase that matters is our...

• A wonderful protest song that really makes the...

  Thread: 'Befallen Our Hero' (3 Replies, 1,005 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  A wonderful protest song that really makes the listener think.

• I must be very hard for you to write. It sounds...

  Thread: Beginning of a new song... Don't know the title yet. (6 Replies, 1,581 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  I must be very hard for you to write. It sounds like you've been rather badly hurt. As for the title, when you are finished you'll find it in the words that reach deepest into your soul.

• Lemming soldiers.. oh how very true. Uncle Sam...

  Thread: "Truly Alone?" (4 Replies, 1,172 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Lemming soldiers.. oh how very true. Uncle Sam says jump into a lake of fire and they don't even question the insanity of it.
  In a way, even civilians are lemmings. The younger generation needs to...

• The Redheads and the Virtuous Butler

  Thread: The Redheads and the Virtuous Butler (3 Replies, 1,080 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  (think of an old madrigal or similar style)
  
  
  The maiden maid was a wondrous maid
  With hair of violet red
  At night alone she dreamed she'd take
  The butler to her bed
  
  A trip-fall maiden was...

• Each stanza of this song contributes well to the...

  Thread: Nothing New (6 Replies, 2,342 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Each stanza of this song contributes well to the overall message. There is pain, and regret here along with a touch of remembered anger as the singer, while moving on as best as possible, is still...

• It makes me think of what might have been...

  Thread: Burton St. (4 Replies, 1,201 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  It makes me think of what might have been accomplished if the Beatles sat down with David Bowie and produced a number one hit. It has the flavor, mainly, of "I am the Walrus" with a little sprinkle...

• Actually produced this recently with a really...

  Thread: PlayTime (9 Replies, 1,857 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Actually produced this recently with a really good musician from Germany called Howie. It's on cocompose if you want to hear it.

• Let me know when this becomes available as a...

  Thread: Mild Winter (2 Replies, 1,039 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Let me know when this becomes available as a full-on song with guitar and vocals. I would love to hear it sung.

• Heavy Metal Hell

  Thread: Heavy Metal Hell (3 Replies, 1,539 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Heavy Metal Hell
  
  Starvin’ for the body
  Drinkin’ from the soul
  Heavy Metal
  Rock n’ Roll
  
  Feedin’ muses to hungry demons
  Oh the mystical taste of their souls

• No real inn as such, but I've wanted to visit...

  Thread: Anthurium Paradise Mile (3 Replies, 4,087 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  No real inn as such, but I've wanted to visit Mauritius for some time now. It sounds (and looks) like a beautiful place.

• Maybe all these things are true. And maybe they...

  Thread: Maybe (6 Replies, 4,834 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Maybe all these things are true. And maybe they only matter if you want them too. But as to this being a well-written poem? There are no maybes about that. It definitely is.

• Anthurium Paradise Mile

  Thread: Anthurium Paradise Mile (3 Replies, 4,087 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Anthurium Paradise Mile
  
  The inn called Anthurium Paradise Mile
  Up in Lafayette Pointe, Mauritius Isle
  Is guaranteed to make you smile
  If only for a little white.
  
  The owner with hair of like...

• Comics may or may not cause crime. But religion...

  Thread: (Homage to) Foul Play (5 Replies, 1,916 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Comics may or may not cause crime. But religion DEFINITELY causes WAR! I think that maybe all the comic book writers should get together and sue to ban religion. (LOL!)

• The good songs are about happy people. The great...

  Thread: Fed Up (1 Replies, 917 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  The good songs are about happy people. The great songs are about people who are completely ticked off about something. Excellent lyrics.

• Danger Zone Love

  Thread: Danger Zone Love (4 Replies, 2,401 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Danger Zone Love
  
  verse 1
  In her little cardboard house
  She hears the welders welding all night long
  Shivering under a blanket
  She cannot sleep.
  
  verse 2
  In his home of brick and steel

• Not entirely mine, as stated. It is in homage to...

  Thread: (Homage to) Foul Play (5 Replies, 1,916 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Not entirely mine, as stated. It is in homage to an episode of an old EC Comics. the story is worth a look. This song is dedicated to those who wrote it, in the same way as songs about Bilbo Baggins...

• I don't worship money. I sacrifice it on the...

  Thread: Money (9 Replies, 2,004 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  I don't worship money. I sacrifice it on the altar of the Gods of Commerce. On the other hand. I adore great songs like this one.

• I can hear a slow and somber guitar as the lyrics...

  Thread: Nothingtown (5 Replies, 1,238 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  I can hear a slow and somber guitar as the lyrics begin. I can hear the music swell as the tale is told, and then ebb as the singer's fate is revealed.

• Awesome lyrics. Can just hear that guitar,...

  Thread: Legend Of Bret Maverick (3 Replies, 1,351 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Awesome lyrics. Can just hear that guitar, pickin' in the verses and strummin' the chorus.

• (Homage to) Foul Play

  Thread: (Homage to) Foul Play (5 Replies, 1,916 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  This song is dedicated to the writers, inkers, and readers of EC Comics.
  Warning: pretty gruesome at the end.
  
  (Music style: country)
  
  FOUL PLAY (in homage to EC Comics)
  
  verse 1:
  There on...

• Lenny Bruce died way too soon. If he and others...

  Thread: The Easy Excuse (25 Replies, 9,329 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Lenny Bruce died way too soon. If he and others of his ilk were alive today to see the wreck that political correctness (Politically co-wrecked? (that's gotta be a book title, it's too cool for...

• (slow and romantic) "Something Stupid," Frank...

  Thread: Need romantic lyrics (16 Replies, 44,541 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  (slow and romantic)
  "Something Stupid," Frank Sinatra
  "Eres Tu" (english version) Ray Conniff, Jr
  
  (Medium Pace)
  "Sexy Eyes" Dr. Hook (and the Medicine Show)
  "I Can't Put My Finger On It"...

• Spirit Mystery

  Thread: Spirit Mystery (0 Replies, 2,418 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  I looked for God inside the mirror
  But what did I see?
  A demon with the kindest eyes
  was staring back at me.
  
  'twas not the God of humankind
  With fists aloft to pound
  Whatever they say that He...

• It might be a California-based band called Laguna.

  Thread: ''California'' song... (3 Replies, 1,667 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  It might be a California-based band called Laguna.

• Shivery

  Thread: Shivery (2 Replies, 3,685 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Shivery
  
  Closed and locked, the heart of Bryce
  Fragile treasure encased in ice
  
  A silver key of things unfelt
  May cause the coldest ice to melt
  
  Calculations replace dreams
  As does tech the...

• I once thought I'd found Jesus in my local...

  Thread: Thank You (39 Replies, 15,143 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  I once thought I'd found Jesus in my local church. But all I had truly found were self-righteous fools. I looked for him the Bible, and found only words tainted by man's inability to truly comprehend...

• Socrates would be proud.

  Thread: Free thought (1 Replies, 3,255 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Socrates would be proud.

• Lynch

  Thread: Lynch (1 Replies, 2,941 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Lynch
  
  In the flashing of the star that shines
  Between the forest's densest leaves
  Twinkling in pale dark pools
  As something sings a mystery
  
  Halfway up the man-made pinnacle
  In a cave of...

• The only really successful recasting of the Fonz...

  Thread: Poem: Excessive Transfer (6 Replies, 4,075 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  The only really successful recasting of the Fonz was Snoopy as Joe Cool. And you're right about Max. Max could survive more than ten minutes with Bryce Lynch without having a major meltdown.

• Without Max to tell us the updated meaning of...

  Thread: Poem: Excessive Transfer (6 Replies, 4,075 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Without Max to tell us the updated meaning of cool, we'd have to continue relying on the Fonz.

• I'm really glad you liked it. I still can't...

  Thread: Poem: Excessive Transfer (6 Replies, 4,075 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  I'm really glad you liked it. I still can't believe I dared to write it. It was inspired by the Dream Thieves episode of Max Headroom and the Excessive Machine scene from Barbarella. (it was Bryce...

• Poem: Excessive Transfer

  Thread: Poem: Excessive Transfer (6 Replies, 4,075 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  A sweet sonata heard by she
  Then through bizarre technology
  Transferred to the mind of he
  Into his virginal body
  
  Every note in sharp staccato
  Every hum in sweet vibrato
  Tech of deadly sweet...

• Remember when being publicized as promiscuous was...

  Thread: Uncle Sam Scam (22 Replies, 10,840 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  Remember when being publicized as promiscuous was a bad thing? Or when rewards were only given out for actually winning? It's not so much as a scam as it is a theft. Those who reward the losers for...

• A very good song about a very good answer. And...

  Thread: Long As I Can Get To The Stage (2 Replies, 1,285 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  A very good song about a very good answer. And it's a true answer, too. Whether its the stage of the theater or the stage of life.

• Hey, Droog

  Thread: Hey, Droog (1 Replies, 1,917 Views) by ElegantButler

  
  

  HEY DROOG
  
  Sitting in the old MB
  You and he, and they and me
  
  Tats on rats
  Flash on trash
  Mesh on flesh
  He on she
  Hey, droog, is that all it's ever gonna be?