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yeah i just posted some new sets recently too. i...
Thread: Terror Inside (2 Replies, 2,434 Views) by theUsed13
yeah i just posted some new sets recently too. i liked it, it wasnt too complicated and the point was easily understood. chorus was my fav. part
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Jess
Thread: Jess (0 Replies, 1,172 Views) by theUsed13
song i wrote about a friend of mine.
someday we'll change the world
re shape the face of the earth
its people like you that change lives
people like you, that could save lives
you make it... -
Caged
Thread: Caged (0 Replies, 1,057 Views) by theUsed13
well i took a break from writing for a while.. so i just picked it back up. what do you think?
locked inside my cage everyday
theres no doors, no windows i guess ill stay
when your locked inside... -
Listen Up
Thread: Listen Up (1 Replies, 1,985 Views) by theUsed13
i think im almost done
my tanks on empty everyone
thats what you heard from me
is it what, your gonna believe
[chorus]
well what he says its gotta be true
same old stuff, nothing new
thats... -
In Me
Thread: In Me (0 Replies, 1,864 Views) by theUsed13
i took a break from writing for a lil while working more on righting bass lines. but the other night i wrote four songs so im posting them all.
In Me
i dont see the things you do
i dont here... -
yeah.. i agree ^
Thread: Song Lyrics (6 Replies, 5,559 Views) by theUsed13
yeah.. i agree ^
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Breakdown
Thread: Breakdown (1 Replies, 2,164 Views) by theUsed13
what did i do to deserve you
when i didnt do anything wrong
where were you, then?
why is it i cant do,
anything unless you tell me to
its getting on my nerves, now
[chorus]
i think im... -
Alright
Thread: Alright (2 Replies, 2,382 Views) by theUsed13
pretty much a rough draft that i just thought of.
i dont know if i wanna be with you
im not sure if i get what to do
guess im nervous at the thought of,
doing it all, alright
are you... -
it was good but i was thinkin it was a little...
Thread: Lone Star (4 Replies, 3,080 Views) by theUsed13
it was good but i was thinkin it was a little short. maybe repeat the chorus again, or write another verse. over all i liked it tho.
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Living
Thread: Living (2 Replies, 2,518 Views) by theUsed13
short one, but it gets the point across. just wrote it in about 5 minutes so its a rough draft
i cant believe you had to leave like that
i asked if, you could stay and chat
you told me you, were... -
yeah i dont like chris brown at all, i hate rap...
Thread: Phat Lyrics (7 Replies, 8,787 Views) by theUsed13
yeah i dont like chris brown at all, i hate rap entirely so i can diss him all i want. and we dont want ur damn chris brown lyrics up here, those are for different forums and different sites these...
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good song, i liked it. dont worry about stuff...
Thread: Scream & Burn (3 Replies, 2,191 Views) by theUsed13
good song, i liked it. dont worry about stuff being too, "dark." it just shows more aggression and emotion and it comes out better.
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it was OK, some suggestions; finish thoughts dont...
Thread: Heres Some a My Rhymes (6 Replies, 2,047 Views) by theUsed13
it was OK, some suggestions; finish thoughts dont just end them, also crew...
'by ya stupid crew,
i yell "dont come back or i beat yo crew to!" '
u dont have to say crew again there, you can... -
i completely agree with Sewn Up, you just had to...
Thread: Phat Lyrics (7 Replies, 8,787 Views) by theUsed13
i completely agree with Sewn Up, you just had to say all that right... especially when you didn't have your own stuff to back it up... just leave the site if your gonna be like that, we dont wanna...
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Clear Up
Thread: Clear Up (2 Replies, 2,332 Views) by theUsed13
jumps around a LOT, first verse and chorus are relli fast, then everything slows down but the chorus is still fast. if you read it the way its suppose to be read it sounds kool.. otherwise just look...
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Point Blank
Thread: Point Blank (2 Replies, 3,034 Views) by theUsed13
oh nothing new... just a song about some chick, tell me wut you think.
at point blank, im staring down
down the barrel of,
none of the above
after considering
things i thought you would say... -
Out Cold
Thread: Out Cold (1 Replies, 2,391 Views) by theUsed13
more recent song. kind of deep, lots of profanity but i edited it, (yes i slipped an F bomb in there :-o) not a life story... so dont go feeling sorry for me lol.
sit back, wait to fall... -
haha yep, not wut u might think tho... its more...
Thread: Sight (2 Replies, 2,561 Views) by theUsed13
haha yep, not wut u might think tho... its more towards the left than bush.
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Sight
Thread: Sight (2 Replies, 2,561 Views) by theUsed13
one of my older songs, pretty short as well. it does start off with the chorus, just so no one gets confused.
[chorus]
hold me back this is not a dream
what happend to our world so free
are... -
wow i liked it a lot. the first verse relli...
Thread: Paranoia (2 Replies, 2,240 Views) by theUsed13
wow i liked it a lot. the first verse relli grabbbed me right away. also, thanks for the comments u left on mine. im into a lot of music.. lots of emo stuff like the starting line, thursday, and the...
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Dark and Gray
Thread: Dark and Gray (1 Replies, 2,491 Views) by theUsed13
days are dark, and gray
but i dont care what they say
i dont know why its over, so fast
but will you remember this time
im angry but im fine
i never fixed your problems
im sorry in the end
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Painkillers
Thread: Painkillers (1 Replies, 2,248 Views) by theUsed13
second song ive ever written. pretty slow, reads how its written with the pauses in between line breaks
I ask,
nothing more from you when you're gone
you have shown me all i need to know
one... -
Worthless
Thread: Worthless (1 Replies, 2,165 Views) by theUsed13
here are some lyrics i just wrote recently, rate on a scale 1-10, 10 being highest. thanks
I don't know where I seem to be
I fit in, but that isnt me
i want to be different, and i want to be...