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Thread: Break Me (7 Replies, 1,861 Views) by fender4string
Sewn Up- I noticed the same thing when I was re-reading it today. I'll think about it and try and tweak it.
Thanks, Tracy!
Thread: Break Me (7 Replies, 1,861 Views) by fender4string
Yep this is my first finished song. I've written bits and pieces here and there over the past few years but have never committed to writing. I was in a band where the lead singer wrote all the...
Thread: Hollywood Hills and Spotlights - just finished this song, hope ya'll like it (3 Replies, 1,807 Views) by fender4string
Great writing. It reads to me like a person trying to get away from their past which is a very interesting topic.
My two favorite parts of your song are:
I like to take the back roads
Though...
Thread: Fake (3 Replies, 935 Views) by fender4string
I really like this. It's very "real." This type of honest writing really allows the reader/listener to feel the emotion. Great writing.
Thread: Is Something Wrong? A James Bond song (2 Replies, 1,572 Views) by fender4string
Really, really like the song man. It's amazing how much more meaningful and powerful lyrics become once you throw that melody in there. Your song has a certain epicness. Nicely done.
Thread: Within The Mirror (8 Replies, 1,858 Views) by fender4string
Very nice. I like the message and the way that its written.
The following really stood out to me as powerful writing:
Fuel the hate, kill the love,
Bury me with the lie.
We, the unwilling,...
Thread: Break Me (7 Replies, 1,861 Views) by fender4string
Here it is finally finished! This is the first song I've ever written in whole and I'm very proud of how it turned out. Please feel free to comment, good or bad, as I would love the feedback.
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Thread: Which guitar is best for beginners? (8 Replies, 17,853 Views) by fender4string
I wouldn't say there is an "easiest" guitar. If you're good on one guitar then you'll be good on another. What it really comes down is the tone of the guitar.
Depending on what style of music...
Thread: Bass players, unite! But seriously if you play bass please help (15 Replies, 27,037 Views) by fender4string
Learn some Chili Peppers stuff. The great thing about Flea is that his lines are sick and many are accessible to the average bassist.
I would also recommend learning stuff by Coheed and Cambria. ...
Thread: World's best drummer! (44 Replies, 66,201 Views) by fender4string
Thank you :)
I'd also agree with Neil Peart and Mike Portnoy.
Travis Barker is overrated IMO (even though I do loves me some Blink :P)
Thread: is it hard 2 learn guitar? (25 Replies, 47,647 Views) by fender4string
Here's my advice to you.
Learn some basic theory. You should at least know the major, minor, pentatonic, and blues scales.
Set up a practice routine. Work on things like dexterity, finger...
Thread: Break Me (7 Replies, 1,861 Views) by fender4string
This is the first time I've ever posted a song for others to review. I've been a bassist for about 9 years now and have recently started writing songs. I wanted some feedback on my first real...