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• This is very well-written.

  Thread: Love In Blue (3 Replies, 12,152 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  This is very well-written.

• Lessons

  Thread: Lessons (0 Replies, 22,759 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  (I've been out of the writing scene for a while, so I'm trying to get some ideas out of my mind and onto paper.)
  
  I am not writing you to say hello, I am not here to ask about your day.
  I am not...

• When You Fall in Love With a Girl Who Can't Love You Back (SLAM piece)

  Thread: When You Fall in Love With a Girl Who Can't Love You Back (SLAM piece) (0 Replies, 28,381 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I didn’t care that I had a boyfriend.
  I didn’t care that we had just met.
  She was everything I’d ever wanted,
  I just hadn’t known it yet.
  
  When you fall in love with a girl who can’t love you...

• We can only have so much luggage with us, and in...

  Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,105 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  We can only have so much luggage with us, and in bags, or i would have brought it with me. I literally had no way to get it to campus unfortunately. I did pick up a ukulele and have tinkered with it...

• Your encouraging words always melt my heart!...

  Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,105 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Your encouraging words always melt my heart! Thank you so much for your kindness. I'm currently traveling (long story) so I don't have my guitar, but it's definitely a priority when I get home!

• Ooh this is so fantastic! Good to hear from ya...

  Thread: Too Good Looking (For Your Own Good) (8 Replies, 5,704 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Ooh this is so fantastic! Good to hear from ya buddy :D
  "A million dollar body
  With a ten cent brain"
  REALLY packs a punch. I love it!

• Metaphors

  Thread: Metaphors (1 Replies, 20,013 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  You tell me that you love metaphors.
  Your arms are castle walls, protective and looming,
  Letting nothing escape.
  Your lips are lava, leaving a trail of hot liquid
  At my jawline where you kiss....

• Welcome! And nice to meet you :)

  Thread: Little High Little Low! (3 Replies, 11,235 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Welcome! And nice to meet you :)

• These 4 lines really struck me. "Four walls and...

  Thread: Song lyrics - I'll welcome your review! (5 Replies, 26,771 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  These 4 lines really struck me.
  "Four walls and a roof might build a home,
  But that means nothing when you feel alone.
  Pent up envy spreads through your bones,
  You wish you were made of stone."

• Thank you

  Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,105 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thank you <3

• Always good to hear your latest. Keep rockin!

  Thread: "This Is Not A Note" (6 Replies, 3,031 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Always good to hear your latest. Keep rockin!

• Brother (SLAM piece) 7/27/15

  Thread: Brother (SLAM piece) 7/27/15 (0 Replies, 10,476 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  You share my blood, and my mother,
  I call you brother
  But I never thought I would call you a monster.
  Like the shadows that creep on my walls at night,
  Waiting for the right time snatch me from...

• Laura (SLAM poetry piece)

  Thread: Laura (SLAM poetry piece) (6 Replies, 28,105 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  You say that you have to leave.
  I physically hear those words as they sear through my eardrums,
  Ricocheting like bullets off of a concrete wall,
  But my mind cannot wrap around the fact that
  You...

• Thank you

  Thread: Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece) (4 Replies, 8,490 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thank you <3

• Thank you, my friend! It's been an insanely busy...

  Thread: Loved You Too Much (4/27/15) (4 Replies, 2,734 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thank you, my friend! It's been an insanely busy couple of months, but I'm glad to be writing SOMETHING again. Working on a bit of SLAM poetry currently to try and shake things up :D It's good to be...

• Wow. Thank you so much for the incredible...

  Thread: Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece) (4 Replies, 8,490 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Wow. Thank you so much for the incredible feedback! It's much appreciated. :)

• Thanks Jim, love hearing your feedback!

  Thread: Loved You Too Much (4/27/15) (4 Replies, 2,734 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thanks Jim, love hearing your feedback!

• Loved You Too Much (4/27/15)

  Thread: Loved You Too Much (4/27/15) (4 Replies, 2,734 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Day in, day out, this 9-5 work
  Has got me feeling down.
  Same 4 walls, same stale coffee,
  Head keeps spinning round.
  
  I was so wrapped up in an idea,
  That I lost track of what was real.
  When my...

• Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece)

  Thread: Bare Legs (SLAM poetry piece) (4 Replies, 8,490 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  When your bare legs grazed mine beneath the sheets I felt butterflies
  In between my thighs as you awoke sounds of ecstasy from deep within me.
  I watched you watch me, drinking in the image of my...

• HA! Another classic. Loving it.

  Thread: I Sure Can Pick Em (1 Replies, 2,278 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  HA! Another classic. Loving it.

• I haven't seen you around here before, maybe I'm...

  Thread: In A Moment (2 Replies, 3,818 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I haven't seen you around here before, maybe I'm just late to the party!
  Anyway, nice work. It's refreshing to read new work of talented individuals.
  What really stuck out to me was:
  But by the...

• It makes me so sad to see because there are some...

  Thread: Letting Go (5/14/10) (3 Replies, 2,676 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  It makes me so sad to see because there are some incredible writers here who deserve sooo much more credit for what they do! It's good to see you around though. I always love hearing from you.

• I struggled with that line a bit! I wanted to...

  Thread: Take My Hand (12/8/14) (4 Replies, 2,742 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I struggled with that line a bit! I wanted to keep the same format, but it just didn't work as well as I'd hoped. Perhaps I'll try to find something more appealing!

• There is some really great imagery in this piece.

  Thread: Stained (3 Replies, 3,169 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  There is some really great imagery in this piece.

• Welcomeeee :)

  Thread: Hello from the Midwest! (2 Replies, 6,644 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Welcomeeee :)

• Welcome to both of you! :)

  Thread: Hello Newbie from Bangladesh. (3 Replies, 6,385 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Welcome to both of you! :)

• Holy $@#& this is good stuff. Would definitely...

  Thread: Cognition (4 Replies, 1,754 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Holy $@#& this is good stuff. Would definitely love to see you more often around here!

• This is so, so wonderful.

  Thread: All Roads Lead To You (3 Replies, 2,542 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  This is so, so wonderful.

• Thanks a ton, Jim! That means a lot :)

  Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,605 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thanks a ton, Jim! That means a lot :)

• Thanks!

  Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,605 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thanks!

• Dear Friend (1/1/15)

  Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,605 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  **First writing of the new year, dedicated to a very close friend of mine.
  
  Dear friend, your eyes are clouded,
  You do not foresee the consequences
  Of the words you are shouting.
  
  I cannot...

• You guys are awesome. I can see both sides of...

  Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,819 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  You guys are awesome.
  I can see both sides of where you're coming from. Maybe I'll go back and add a verse to hint at a bit of background without giving too much away, that sounds like a fair...

• Thank you both! :)

  Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,819 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Thank you both! :)

• Wow. This is really powerful.

  Thread: Own Worst Enemy (4 Replies, 2,708 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Wow. This is really powerful.

• I can see this song making millions, Jim!

  Thread: Friend Of The Family (3 Replies, 1,759 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I can see this song making millions, Jim!

• Prison Cell (12/29/14)

  Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,819 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Locked in this prison, these 4 walls my hell,
  Clawing at the sheets, questioning myself.
  I must escape, get me out of this mess,
  I’ll do what it takes, except confess.
  
  The words you were yet to...

• Letting Go (5/14/10)

  Thread: Letting Go (5/14/10) (3 Replies, 2,676 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I've held on, for just a little too long,
  And now I read it on your face,
  That you need your space.
  You're drifting away to let me know,
  That its time for me to let you go.
  
  Letting go, letting...

• I think it makes more sense that way, yes, but I...

  Thread: Take My Hand (12/8/14) (4 Replies, 2,742 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I think it makes more sense that way, yes, but I kinda like the rhyme too :P

• Take My Hand (12/8/14)

  Thread: Take My Hand (12/8/14) (4 Replies, 2,742 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  When dreams become nightmares
  Like night becomes day
  When promises fall apart
  I’ll be the first to say
  
  Take my hand, though it’s tough right now,
  Through trials and tribulation,
  We’ll figure...

• Jim, I guess she's your ex for a reason then! ...

  Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,414 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Jim, I guess she's your ex for a reason then!
  
  JJCory, thank you so much! Good to hear from you :)

• WOW! Two of my favorite people :) Thank you SO...

  Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,414 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  WOW! Two of my favorite people :) Thank you SO much!

• Feedback anyone?

  Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,414 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Feedback anyone?

• I definitely agree! :D

  Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,565 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I definitely agree! :D

• I was thinking around the same! Three Days Grace...

  Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,565 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I was thinking around the same! Three Days Grace and Rise Against came to mind!

• This might be my favorite piece of yours, Jim.

  Thread: Sitting In A Bar In Downtown Nashville (2 Replies, 2,239 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  This might be my favorite piece of yours, Jim.

• I can totally see it!

  Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,565 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I can totally see it!

• Love this! What genre are you thinking?

  Thread: forever (14 Replies, 4,565 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Love this! What genre are you thinking?

• this definitely deserves more praise. what a gem!

  Thread: Sin Eater (4 Replies, 1,828 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  this definitely deserves more praise. what a gem!

• I love the idea of it. And I understand the...

  Thread: break (4 Replies, 1,421 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  I love the idea of it. And I understand the concept. Hmm...I'm not sure how to explain it haha.
  For instance,
  "I look up to light
  And all I see is surrounded by darkness"
  doesn't exactly make...

• Enough (11/18/14)

  Thread: Enough (11/18/14) (7 Replies, 2,414 Views) by Kerri Faye Yates

  
  

  Walk in slamming the door,
  Another day your heart grows colder.
  I take the words you hit me with,
  As if I deserve every punch.
  
  Where flames once danced around us,
  Now lie ashes.
  The fire died...