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The Love That Never Dies
Thread: The Love That Never Dies (0 Replies, 4,138 Views) by cashpapa
[Verse 1]
They all are weepin side by side
They wont let go of that veil no not tonight
Lookin for lightnin right in the dark
Someone tell them that inside them theres a spark
Not into... -
Take me Away
Thread: Take me Away (1 Replies, 2,811 Views) by cashpapa
[Chorus]
Take me away
To another place
A totally different space
Take me away -
Give me the Pleasure
Thread: Give me the Pleasure (0 Replies, 2,405 Views) by cashpapa
This is a song I'm working on.Tell me what you think.
[Verse 1]
Well,I don't read intentions
And this girl is no exception
Left me track her for inspection
She has got me go
Can't leave her all... -
Call You Back(newer version)
Thread: Call You Back(newer version) (0 Replies, 2,660 Views) by cashpapa
This is a break-up song that I'm working on.Feedback is quite appreciated.
[Verse 1]
I'll be after you in just a minute
I'm on somethin' new,without a limit
Sent too many texts and they are... -
Call You Back
Thread: Call You Back (0 Replies, 2,922 Views) by cashpapa
This is a break-up song that I'm working on.Feedback is quite appreciated.
[Verse 1]
I'll be after you in just a minute
I'm on somethin' new,without a limit
Sent too many texts and they are... -
really fits to be a poem.
Thread: Passion (1 Replies, 6,558 Views) by cashpapa
really fits to be a poem.
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great one .
Thread: Would like some thoughts on this verse I'm working on (1 Replies, 2,188 Views) by cashpapa
great one .
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Nice chorus, but the repetition of if you're...
Thread: Life As We Know It (1 Replies, 8,916 Views) by cashpapa
Nice chorus, but the repetition of if you're becomes boring, so work on it.
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I really liked the fifth and sixth line. nice job.
Thread: I'm not a rapper, I was bored... (2 Replies, 35,242 Views) by cashpapa
I really liked the fifth and sixth line. nice job.
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I liked the chorus. good job.
Thread: Karaoke Singers (1 Replies, 1,710 Views) by cashpapa
I liked the chorus. good job.
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nice one, but it fits a poem rather than a song.
Thread: I love everything about her (4 Replies, 2,636 Views) by cashpapa
nice one, but it fits a poem rather than a song.
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All Over You
Thread: All Over You (0 Replies, 1,842 Views) by cashpapa
[Part 1]
New page, white and plain
Soon I’ll be turnin’ one again
Old days, past mistakes
Burnin’ like a fire wave
Roll that stone, pull it strong
I’ll be under your control
Chase me down,... -
The Maze (a newer version)
Thread: The Maze (a newer version) (1 Replies, 1,932 Views) by cashpapa
[Part 1]
Slow dont let your temper blow
Just keep that voice low
Were gonna make it
I just got the call
And its a little wrong
She said shes had enough
The tone is playing
It never gets old... -
All Over You
Thread: All Over You (0 Replies, 1,850 Views) by cashpapa
All Over You
[Part 1]
New page, white and plain
Soon I’ll be turning one again
Old days, past mistakes
Burning like a fire wave
Roll that stone, pull it strong
I’ll be under your control... -
Very nice lyrics for a poem, really creates a...
Thread: I Dreamed I Was Playing Poker With Merle Haggard (2 Replies, 2,509 Views) by cashpapa
Very nice lyrics for a poem, really creates a medieval ambience.
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loveshot( a newer version)
Thread: loveshot( a newer version) (0 Replies, 2,709 Views) by cashpapa
LOVESHOT
[Part 1]
It only strikes me when I’m mutterin
Right when the mornin birds are flutterin
With words so loud that glass be shatterin
(With words)
With words I shouldn’t say
With words I... -
I like the rhythm of this. You can feel there is...
Thread: Numbered (2 Replies, 1,699 Views) by cashpapa
I like the rhythm of this. You can feel there is a melody just by reading it once.
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The maze
Thread: The maze (0 Replies, 1,353 Views) by cashpapa
THE MAZE
[Part 1]
Slow, don’t let your temper blow
Just keep that voice low
She’s gonna make it
I just got the call
And it’s a burning coal
She said she fell in love
The tone is ringing
It... -
Wiser
Thread: Wiser (0 Replies, 1,925 Views) by cashpapa
WISER
[Part 1]
Inside the room there’s I and me
Yet I could fly with ecstasy
So soon my love is gonna flee
Close the door before you leave
My status is sad emoji
Pleasure in the tragedy... -
You aint dumb, do not be timid, that's usually my...
Thread: Loveshot (2 Replies, 1,969 Views) by cashpapa
You aint dumb, do not be timid, that's usually my thing. Thanks for your reply, I really heed the comments of the browsers.
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Loveshot
Thread: Loveshot (2 Replies, 1,969 Views) by cashpapa
[Part 1]
I’m mutterin
Oh like a mornin bird I’m flutterin
With words so loud that glass be shatterin
With words
With words I shouldn’t say
With words I shouldn’t play
I’m wanderin
Just like...