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• Thanks, I wrote it about my hate for my little...

  Thread: Life Debt (2 Replies, 3,299 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Thanks, I wrote it about my hate for my little brother after he has tried to kill me, I'm 15 so it makes writing stuff like this alot easier. I would have added another verse but that in my mind...

• Life Debt

  Thread: Life Debt (2 Replies, 3,299 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  I'm thinking a deppressing key like D flat to be sung by a male. I haven't quite thought of a part for backing vocals. I was thinking along the lines of Organ. Elec. Guitar, Bass and Drums
  
  
  Don't...

• Honnest opinion, things in there need to change,...

  Thread: Coming out of the dark (1 Replies, 1,506 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Honnest opinion, things in there need to change, I couldn't keep a view of it in my head, I found it difficult to follow

• Loving someone like you

  Thread: Loving someone like you (0 Replies, 1,354 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  This is the chorus from my song Loving someone like you, It is for female lead and female backing (indicated with brackets
  
  Chorus
  I never wanted to lose somebody
  (somebody)
  I never...

• Wow, pretty darn good, the final line seems a bit...

  Thread: Thirst For Life (12 Replies, 2,833 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Wow, pretty darn good, the final line seems a bit out of place.I personally think this would work well as a rap in places. But this is your best so far. Keep up the good work man. :)

• Wow... Feeling some big angst there

  Thread: just a "off the top of my head" - er should i expand? (3 Replies, 1,682 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Wow... Feeling some big angst there

• Quick question. How long have you been writing...

  Thread: New song in the making plz read (3 Replies, 1,405 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Quick question. How long have you been writing songs? It could be improved. Not meaning to put you down my friend

• Don't wanna cry anymore.

  Thread: Don't wanna cry anymore. (0 Replies, 2,771 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  I've missed you,
  Ever since you left me,
  I have always missed you,
  Ever since you took my heart away, but
  I dont wanna cry anymore,
  I don't want you to die anymore-e
  
  On the dreadful day,
  you...

• Revealing the secrets

  Thread: Revealing the secrets (0 Replies, 4,406 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Hey you guys. I'm pianist/lyricist for a new band called throwing conspiracies. I need someone to write a song about revealing secrets. Please. You will get acknowledged

• WOW. Great first song. Lines are a good length, I...

  Thread: Seek Some Hope (1 Replies, 1,789 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  WOW. Great first song. Lines are a good length, I can make sense of it and you included your genre and the guitar overdrive your using

• It's good. I tried to read it as a song and had...

  Thread: Down with me- Please review.. (4 Replies, 1,794 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  It's good. I tried to read it as a song and had difficulties. But the line lengths are not to long and not too short. Good job but can be improved

• Poll: My last will and testament (it's not yet completed (it'll be done tonight))

  Thread: My last will and testament (it's not yet completed (it'll be done tonight)) (0 Replies, 1,456 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  This song maybe the last
  but it aint the first
  with all this stress i may burst
  BAM
  
  This song could be my last will,
  and testament
  my last time to say what i wanna say
  If it don't get heard...

• what date is this friday?

  Thread: I need lyrics..!!!!.!!! (3 Replies, 1,555 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  what date is this friday?

• Loved you all my life

  Thread: Loved you all my life (1 Replies, 5,205 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  A song about how i'm feeling and its my second only
  
  
  i feel like writing a song,
  all about my life,
  the ups
  the downs
  the times you made me,
  well,
  me.

• All i can say is wow, This is really quite good...

  Thread: Heaven or Hell (4 Replies, 2,360 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  All i can say is wow,
  This is really quite good you should record some music for the background

• Hi I know I am still in High school but yes it...

  Thread: Your heaven is my hell(rate plz) (5 Replies, 2,394 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Hi I know I am still in High school but yes it does seem a bit short maybe if you add some more verses it might make it a bit well... longer

• Not the full or the best but here is some of it:...

  Thread: Coralie Clément - Bientôt (1 Replies, 6,474 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Not the full or the best but here is some of it:
  Coralie Clement - Soon
  So of our love
  There remained nothing
  So of our love fol
  We were orphan
  J' will always wait
  J' will wait for...

• That is actually rather good. Do you mind if I...

  Thread: Rap Song I Wrote called the truth. feedback (4 Replies, 2,196 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  That is actually rather good. Do you mind if I take your lyrics and put them onto my album?

• First let me get this clear, this is my FIRST...

  Thread: Rate My Song - The Proclamation (4 Replies, 1,606 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  First let me get this clear, this is my FIRST song. Also it is as you said about people making things worse and this is meant to be read more like rap.

• Who inspires you?

  Thread: I hate you! (3 Replies, 3,390 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  Who inspires you?

• Rate My Song - The Proclamation

  Thread: Rate My Song - The Proclamation (4 Replies, 1,606 Views) by Aidanr14

  
  

  BEFORE YOU READ THIS IS MY FIRST SONG AND IS MEANT TO BE SUNG LIKE RAP
  
  
  
  This is the proclamation,
  Of a nation,
  Destroyed by mitigations,
  By the nations,
  From up above,
  Looking at you love...