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• Now the "cold days" are blowing in fast.

  Thread: Symphony of a Cold Day. (5 Replies, 44,647 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Now the "cold days" are blowing in fast.

• Amaryn got to it before me:the bit with the...

  Thread: Cristene (20 Replies, 12,384 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Amaryn got to it before me:the bit with the "purse-nurse" rhyme. Short, conscise & incisive...a copious flow.
  
  (Now about the suicidal fiance, that's fictitious, i hope?)

• "The tree of hope dropped its leaves"...very...

  Thread: Cold Hands (5 Replies, 1,925 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  "The tree of hope dropped its leaves"...very strong imagery, the spring of hope is just around the corner.

• Thank you Dougg...thought it was fitting to mark...

  Thread: Symphony of a Cold Day. (5 Replies, 44,647 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Thank you Dougg...thought it was fitting to mark my return to ATL(never left totally though). Merry Christmas(also to your Marley-loving sister) ;)

• Symphony of a Cold Day.

  Thread: Symphony of a Cold Day. (5 Replies, 44,647 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  At the height of our madness
  we cavorted on
  and believed everything
  said between us
  In youthful fantasy
  and a radiation of warmth
  we spoke vain things
  and believed each other...
  Nothing could...

• Hmmm ;)

  Thread: Maybe (6 Replies, 5,098 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Hmmm ;)

• Sigh of relief for you...Very vivid, i'll agree....

  Thread: Murder (3 Replies, 3,929 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Sigh of relief for you...Very vivid, i'll agree. (May God keep you & lil' sister) :)

• "I find solace in words" too....I think you do...

  Thread: Fire, caress me (2 Replies, 3,512 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  "I find solace in words" too....I think you do more in the elements because of your use of imagery.
  
  I'll come back for a 'deuxieme lecture' (I'm yet to wrap my head round the elemental metaphors...

• I like the way this winds down to the last line,...

  Thread: Oblivion (1 Replies, 3,212 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I like the way this winds down to the last line, words well-woven.

• The Greek text, I find beautiful. (Now if only I...

  Thread: Ἡ Κλοπή (The Theft) (2 Replies, 3,231 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  The Greek text, I find beautiful. (Now if only I cld read it) :(

• You have painted a "perfect picture" well-phrased.

  Thread: If.. (3 Replies, 3,509 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  You have painted a "perfect picture" well-phrased.

• Hi, was going through back pages & happened on...

  Thread: Lost (4 Replies, 5,344 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Hi, was going through back pages & happened on this, sorry if this dredges up your pain again.
  
  This comes to me as a song. I feel your pain, please live on & do those things your friend wld have...

• Very original, which pains me to ask if you lost...

  Thread: Murder (3 Replies, 3,929 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Very original, which pains me to ask if you lost someone in an homicide...I know that feel of holding on to the traces of the departed, the hope of shared speech et al....Painful.
  
  The pain rings...

• Really "intense".

  Thread: Nostalgia Intense (1 Replies, 3,497 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Really "intense".

• "If this is love we feel"... why the doubt?

  Thread: Make me a promise (1 Replies, 3,851 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  "If this is love we feel"... why the doubt?

• I'm fascinated by island countries generally,...

  Thread: Anthurium Paradise Mile (3 Replies, 4,558 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I'm fascinated by island countries generally, esp. the ones in the Pacific. I'd always felt their castaway nature would preserve beauty(i'm also aware it's easier to see oddities in such places,...

• Can't name it, can't claim it, can't fake it...

  Thread: For You (9 Replies, 6,256 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Can't name it, can't claim it, can't fake it...

• I particularly love "To turn the heart, embrace...

  Thread: Lynch (1 Replies, 3,197 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I particularly love "To turn the heart, embrace the frost"....
  
  ElegantButler may not have intended it, but there's something evocative of love-making in these lines, somewhere...can't pin it down.

• Nice Elizabethan touch....though I don't...

  Thread: Shivery (2 Replies, 3,881 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Nice Elizabethan touch....though I don't understand the title, is it the coldness of Bryce's heart that sends them shivers?

• "I hurt with pain i couldn't feel"....i...

  Thread: Without Warning (4 Replies, 1,580 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  "I hurt with pain i couldn't feel"....i understand, 'cos this line made me feel kinda numb.

• Perhaps there's a real inn you had in mind when...

  Thread: Anthurium Paradise Mile (3 Replies, 4,558 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Perhaps there's a real inn you had in mind when you wrote this?

• The Great Dougg enjoying his puns...

  Thread: Maybe (6 Replies, 5,098 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  The Great Dougg enjoying his puns...

• Katie, i love this for its originality....right...

  Thread: Maybe (6 Replies, 5,098 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Katie, i love this for its originality....right from the 1st line, you sounded like the last line...i could somehow figure out where it was all leading. Genuine train of thought.

• Your words are so simple, yet one can feel the...

  Thread: I have survived again (5 Replies, 30,143 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Your words are so simple, yet one can feel the rumble of a story within a story. Hmm, this feels deep.

• To walk under these blossoms....

  Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 77,515 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  To walk under these blossoms....

• I totally agree with Dougg...about the plaques,...

  Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 77,515 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I totally agree with Dougg...about the plaques, mugs & frames. ;)

• "Just a grin, my only friend."

  Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 77,515 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  "Just a grin, my only friend."

• This gotta make you ponder the unknown....

  Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 77,515 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  This gotta make you ponder the unknown....

• Got to do something with these words!

  Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 77,515 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Got to do something with these words!

• Love love this.

  Thread: amaryn poetry and pics 2013 (318 Replies, 77,515 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Love love this.

• Enjoying all these... the words, the lines, the...

  Thread: Thank You (39 Replies, 15,571 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Enjoying all these... the words, the lines, the food(or thoughts & talk of it) , of course all carried on the" Tray of Honesty". ;)

• I found many sections of this piece...

  Thread: Thank You (39 Replies, 15,571 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I found many sections of this piece powerful...Right from the attention-grabbing opener till the very thankful end.
  
  I'll be back to read some more, it's worth it.
  
  "My spiritual GPS" will...

• Now all i need is a great drummer -voila! I'll...

  Thread: Up The Mountains. (15 Replies, 5,314 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Now all i need is a great drummer -voila! I'll go platinum.(hopefully0 ;)

• Doug & Jess alllllllllllllll the way! ;)

  Thread: Wild West Jess (36 Replies, 8,602 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Doug & Jess alllllllllllllll the way! ;)

• Doug & Jess alllllllllllllll the way! ;)

  Thread: Wild West Jess (36 Replies, 11,413 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Doug & Jess alllllllllllllll the way! ;)

• Drumming is not as easy as it looks, & more often...

  Thread: Up The Mountains. (15 Replies, 5,314 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Drumming is not as easy as it looks, & more often than not, the drummer makes the band.

• Well said, Wild Jess. ;)

  Thread: Never Say Never (35 Replies, 10,532 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Well said, Wild Jess. ;)

• Hi Matt, is it the villanelle form you find...

  Thread: Villanelle 5: Sweatville. (8 Replies, 4,465 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Hi Matt, is it the villanelle form you find "disgusting" or the contents of the poem?

• Great work...is it personal? I think you also...

  Thread: Forgiveness (6 Replies, 1,789 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Great work...is it personal?
  
  I think you also have a nagging suspicion this should appear under poetry.
  
  I like your username, caught my eye. ;)

• Are people too frightened to comment? (Pun...

  Thread: Villanelle 5: Sweatville. (8 Replies, 4,465 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Are people too frightened to comment?
  (Pun unintended.)

• Unfolding story...

  Thread: Post-war Letter (7 Replies, 4,284 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Unfolding story...

• I sure want to learn to play one or two...

  Thread: Up The Mountains. (15 Replies, 5,314 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I sure want to learn to play one or two instruments... very interested

• Be careful of all those poetry hawks.

  Thread: The Lost Note (4 Replies, 3,796 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Be careful of all those poetry hawks.

• Sure, you may like someone & still not understand...

  Thread: Cathedral Timelines (8 Replies, 4,181 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Sure, you may like someone & still not understand them. ;)

• Oh! I get the whole picture now having read...

  Thread: Never Say Never (35 Replies, 10,532 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Oh! I get the whole picture now having read Jessie's comments, should have known better than to ask THAT question. ;)
  
  Poetry can always help you out, direct, veiled or cryptic, you can still...

• I wonder about the "rest" you left out. (I...

  Thread: Women From The Past (3 Replies, 1,888 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  I wonder about the "rest" you left out.
  
  (I guess most times you write from experience, that's why you always sound so real.)
  
  lol@ Amaryn.
  
  Hey Jim! I've encountered the word "boobs" in about...

• Now, this is something. I love the whole idea...

  Thread: Selling Poverty (2 Replies, 1,459 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Now, this is something.
  
  I love the whole idea running through, what's more , it's so true.
  
  Wish i could sell poverty to get rich too ;)
  
  "She stole my wallet"
  You tell her that in Vegas. :)

• Love,love love Shania Twain! Great work, love...

  Thread: Sexpot (6 Replies, 2,134 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Love,love love Shania Twain!
  
  Great work, love the brisk pace(&thanks for avoiding bombshell archetypes like Marilyn Monroe)
  As an aside, you're not taking Viagra, are you?
  
  C'est la vie!;)

• Nice job, much love for the 1st verse esp. "and...

  Thread: Fade Away (9 Replies, 3,524 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Nice job, much love for the 1st verse esp. "and open roads don't really have a path"
  
  It's thought-provoking.

• Nice beginnings...pls make me understand, is it a...

  Thread: What about these lyrics? It's not a lot but maybe you guys could give some feedback? (10 Replies, 2,158 Views) by curiosity_kills_the_cat

  
  

  Nice beginnings...pls make me understand, is it a 'love-over' song or 'on-off-torrid-love' song?