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• @ir1 - I'd be interested. my email is in the...

  Thread: Goodbye Rap Lyrics Forum (6 Replies, 4,776 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  @ir1 - I'd be interested. my email is in the other thread so hit me up with that, see what we can do.
  
  as far as ATL... I'm lookin like a chinese gymnast how I got parts of my body crossed that...

• last quick key

  Thread: last quick key (0 Replies, 2,331 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  site's goin down like eyes at cleavage or bad jokes
  thanked folks, fam bro's, up in smoke like a fast toke
  damn though, only been here what feels like a flash, wrotes
  rippin thru threads like I'ma...

• but yeah, RIA will be a decent place to keep...

  Thread: join me on rapisalive.com (5 Replies, 2,628 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  but yeah, RIA will be a decent place to keep things goin for now, at least until we find a more suitable home.

• tmbrad@live.co.uk

  Thread: Rap Emails (5 Replies, 2,599 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  tmbrad@live.co.uk

• set up the RIP IT rap battle in the group...

  Thread: keep it goin mods... (10 Replies, 2,979 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  set up the RIP IT rap battle in the group discussions so if y'all don't wanna do the serious stuff on rapisalive you can just post on the group page and keep what we had here goin there. if you join...

• thunder stealer... lol

  Thread: join me on rapisalive.com (5 Replies, 2,628 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  thunder stealer... lol

• I know that maybe you only do these short poems...

  Thread: Seriously Random (2 Replies, 1,352 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  I know that maybe you only do these short poems out of boredom, but if you want to improve try to focus on creating imagery with your words. Use metaphors and word plays, similes and references. Also...

• it takes'kills to murder with words and avoid...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  it takes'kills to murder with words and avoid takin the 'rap'
  to maintain the game while hurtin the nerd ur facin' is one u lack.

• syllable count like miserable clowns - you never...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  syllable count like miserable clowns - you never see enough... sad prankster
  huntin you down like diligent hounds to frame heads like deviant gangsters
  b!tch like an '@ss' lover, cuz when it comes...

• calling out SBU

  Thread: calling out SBU (0 Replies, 2,122 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  14 lines/7 bars per post. 4 posts each taking it in turns. edits can be made to your post within 24 hours of droppin it. after all 8 posts are up votes can be cast by other members. here's my first...

• I see clearly, seems like you need 2 real'eyes...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  I see clearly, seems like you need 2 real'eyes
  opened wide while force feed'in others lines
  nothin nice, bite'in bits like rhymin sharks
  and if you miss, don't expect us to widen marks
  these...

• damn n!gga... you on fire lately

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  damn n!gga... you on fire lately

• iight, thanks man. most of the time I quick key...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  iight, thanks man. most of the time I quick key without thinkin too much which is why I flip between dope and wack so often. gonna start tryin to spend time on my verses tho. kinda difficult when I...

• man this is a rap battle, the need for soul is...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  man this is a rap battle, the need for soul is much less
  the only place for heart's the floor when I rip from chests
  you f*cked my mom? so what, every n!ggas had a go on the wh*re lots
  like a...

• aha, yeah man - damn scat dyk

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  aha, yeah man - damn scat dyk

• you couldn't drop me, let alone dangle I'll take...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  you couldn't drop me, let alone dangle
  I'll take my wok and choke with pan-handles
  man-handle, but not the way that you do
  obvious this fagg*t from the south has got a screw loose
  chew shoes as I...

• man SBU... I can't match that... damn

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  man SBU... I can't match that... damn

• she leaves me choked up like a rope tied around...

  Thread: Valentine! (2 Replies, 2,606 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  she leaves me choked up like a rope tied around my neck
  and when she pulls I snap back cuz she's my reality check

• quick key from the heart - feedback appreciated

  Thread: quick key from the heart - feedback appreciated (0 Replies, 2,817 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  when you drop into this ocean you can be fooled fam
  cuz the splash is always louder to those who hear it first hand
  like damn, I seen n!ggas turn eyes blind to this verse game
  as they lose sight...

• the sh!t U-sain, bolts sprayed in sprinter's...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  the sh!t U-sain, bolts sprayed in sprinter's times
  but this game's no race, 'quick-ill's don't win-no-rhymes
  you 'wood wind'a battles but splinter like halved-'flutes'
  I snipe, careful aim......

• this 'cracker' better hush his lips quick before...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  this 'cracker' better hush his lips quick before he feels the 'crunch'
  cuz right now he's actin like his mom in my room - panties in a bunch.
  your word-play's basic, base sh!t, face it... you'll...

• this no 'biggie'? I wouldn't say that mate, it's...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  this no 'biggie'? I wouldn't say that mate, it's a 'notorious'ly sh!t nugget
  and you're miss piggy? I guess that makes sense... how you're such a b!tchy muppet
  if I'm 'livin a lie', you love it...

• n!gga, in that other thread you let your...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  n!gga, in that other thread you let your religious side out
  and seein as you're also here battlin, you KNOW I'm gonna 'rip' on that now!
  Jesus ain't comin back n!gga, and if he has he's already...

• they say talk is brain food, so now we're all...

  Thread: Topic Rapping (10 Replies, 4,670 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  they say talk is brain food, so now we're all 'eating' text-symbols
  so if you want it healthy... let's talk fruit and vegetables:
  
  apples are pomaceous-fruits that grow-on-small deciduous trees,...

• ... I know you're not trying to diss me lots, but...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  ... I know you're not trying to diss me lots, but you p!ss me off
  with these writs you got... recipes cooked up, but never served hot
  
  west bwoy likes to 'mouth off' at guys around him with a...

• yeah your writs are careless... and I couldn't...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  yeah your writs are careless... and I couldn't care-less...
  this be a-patchy seamstress versus Apache - fearless.
  'raw'? yeah - like this bacon sizzles cees
  if you catch salmonella... that's just...

• I'ma diss-this-member then dis-member this bender...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  I'ma diss-this-member then dis-member this bender out of pity
  arms, legs, head, the rest spread out evenly 'in-ten-cities'.
  slice your eyes into 3.142 pieces, make 'pi'... 20/20 de-vision
  that 3rd...

• no worries man, like I said... just my opinion....

  Thread: feed is cool.. but not askin. this is where im at shaadows place in the shade. kno it (3 Replies, 2,410 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  no worries man, like I said... just my opinion. not pretending to be a 'teacher' aha...

• someone? n*gga, you forgot sometwo - who? this...

  Thread: Battle mood. Anyone ? (43 Replies, 15,952 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  someone? n*gga, you forgot sometwo -
  who? this motherf*cker about to slaughter you.
  on the news... headline: Nostik-go-hard
  found stabbed dead with a thousand glass shards
  yeah, you'll bring...

• dope rhymes man, I'll edit with more feedback...

  Thread: feed is cool.. but not askin. this is where im at shaadows place in the shade. kno it (3 Replies, 2,410 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  dope rhymes man, I'll edit with more feedback later. first impression's good though.
  
  EDIT: yeah man it's dope. I thought the flow was fairly consistent, lost it once or twice but that might just...

• dope man... that "youth-in-asia" line was a...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  dope man... that "youth-in-asia" line was a bodybag right there... but here goes:
  
  I rope you along with dope lines... it's rope-a-dope.
  and if my poison's got a 'moon-shine'... it's cuz I'm drunk...

• got another link? youtube's banned in China.

  Thread: Feedback on my raise the bar cypher entry? (2 Replies, 2,579 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  got another link? youtube's banned in China.

• y'all say "I rock glocks n UZIs", like you think...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  y'all say "I rock glocks n UZIs", like you think those guns can shoot me -
  truth be, y'all loony for sure, see - pull the trigger, go ahead... you'll still be losing
  and I'll still be here writing,...

• a lot of Talib Kweli lately, currently "Never...

  Thread: What song are you currently listening to ? (49 Replies, 9,071 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  a lot of Talib Kweli lately, currently "Never Been In Love" fom The Beautiful Struggle.

• this guys f*cked both ways, spit-roasted - he...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  this guys f*cked both ways, spit-roasted - he really hates to give...
  acusing me of STDs when it's him that has the HIV.
  but he didn't get that sh*t from any penile penetration,
  his mama just...

• yeah I'm 'sick', much iller than you n!gga nice...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  yeah I'm 'sick', much iller than you n!gga
  nice you noticed, for that I'll kill ya quicker
  keep apostrophies for when I'm droppin Gs
  while your hypocracies tell me your hoppin cees
  straight rape...

• this a battle, you're rhymes don't diss for sh*t,...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  this a battle, you're rhymes don't diss for sh*t,
  all you're hassled with is drugs and guns, you miss wit.
  your writs are bad habits, you really need to quit
  like a crack addict, but... you...

• shame you can't write, should feel contrite...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  shame you can't write, should feel contrite
  don't bite, it's low when aim's to get real high
  it hurts bro, "your" writes plague on my sight
  on my site like you sh*t in the limelight
  I understand...

• she predicates me like a true mis- it's...

  Thread: never gone (6 Replies, 3,110 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  she predicates me like a true mis- it's understood that for the good she stands always.
  I'm suffixed like ation by the rope she holds me up by, try as I might... I'm tied by old ways.
  broken...

• I never read a written with so many expletives...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  I never read a written with so many expletives packed,
  like this guy needs to realize his verse is completely wack.
  take some of that 'young money' and buy a thesaurus
  cuz your lack of 'vocab' got...

• your verses were 'rich' 'prior', but b*tch now...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  your verses were 'rich' 'prior',
  but b*tch now you're years expired.
  this 'sick' 'pig's' rising up
  like 'aw-well', you got some tough luck.
  if this guy's a wu tang fan
  well I'm GZA, best...

• Poll: I'ma snipe this b*tch in the kneecaps, out of...

  Thread: Freestyle rap battle (5 Replies, 31,192 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  I'ma snipe this b*tch in the kneecaps, out of spite watch him bleed while I recap
  All the reasons Zak should not be here...
  
  I'ma grab the chair that he folds like, smash him so hard that he folds...

• And Del, shaadow has said it was his bad,...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  And Del, shaadow has said it was his bad, mistake, it happens. now why don't you man up and admit to taking that line from 8 mile, and this WALL-E sh*t sounds hella familiar too, another one of Em's...

• This b*tches sh*t ain't Stella, it's one-legged,...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  This b*tches sh*t ain't Stella, it's one-legged, needs support,
  Only time he ever got a W was when he went to court to file for divorce.
  See, SBU's schemes lack flavor, be tastin' like Mimolette...

• What you guys think about these 10 lines I posted...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  What you guys think about these 10 lines I posted in a battle on another site?
  Guy I'm against is called Miracle:
  
  This pretender's a 'leper' lending his d*ck out to homos.
  He needs 'divine...

• wanna battle someone else starting here:

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  wanna battle someone else starting here:

• First verse is stronger than the second I think,...

  Thread: New Script ; Check it out and please give feedback if you want (2 Replies, 1,455 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  First verse is stronger than the second I think, but I like it a lot. Feels real, flows nice. Would be cool if you could slip in a few more multis. Could you check my untitled one? Feedback on that...

• yeah that's better man. i knew my lines weren't...

  Thread: have to write 33 - 40 lines and diss 12 'cees (3 Replies, 1,268 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  yeah that's better man. i knew my lines weren't good enough, just hoped they'd spark something in you.

• How about something like - I make the...

  Thread: have to write 33 - 40 lines and diss 12 'cees (3 Replies, 1,268 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  How about something like -
  
  I make the 'alphabet' sweat, never knows how I'ma use it
  I rip it apart to put rhymes together, almost like I abuse it

• alright, you got it. I think I put up a decent...

  Thread: Rip It (Battle) *Available to join* (410 Replies, 75,393 Views) by CheesyBacon

  
  

  alright, you got it. I think I put up a decent fight though. respect man.
  
  if you got time check out my untitled thread, proud of that one.