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• I definitely like the fire element of this. I...

  Thread: Flame (8/13/14) (8 Replies, 4,112 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I definitely like the fire element of this. I especially like the shift from wanting the person to realizing that you only wanted the embrace.

• Something like that. It's about the hypocrisy...

  Thread: Amen Omen (2 Replies, 2,173 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Something like that. It's about the hypocrisy found in all religions, but mainly in Christianity because it is what I see the most. I was working on a new riff, and these lyrics really fit the mood.

• Thank you. Yeah, I wrote this in honor of my...

  Thread: Small Salute (3 Replies, 2,471 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Thank you. Yeah, I wrote this in honor of my father. He died when I was young. This song means very much to me. I poured a lot of feeling into it, and the words seemed to write themselves.

• Small Salute

  Thread: Small Salute (3 Replies, 2,471 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Here is a song that I wrote in honor of my dad.
  
  
  Verse:
  The Giving Tree
  You gave to me
  Taught me what it means
  To give up everything
  
  I was a child

• Amen Omen

  Thread: Amen Omen (2 Replies, 2,173 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Here's a start to a song I'm writing:
  
  Verse 1:
  They line you up from your pews
  Wash down that hollow vow with bread and juice
  That sacred cow that burned for you
  Up on that cross, he died for...

• Little Things

  Thread: Little Things (0 Replies, 2,086 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Hey, ATL. It's been quite a while. But, here's my latest work. Now I play guitar with my music. Much has changed over the last five years. I've included the chords with the lyrics, so maybe you all...

• Changed and made into an actual song.

  Thread: Another start for a lyric (3 Replies, 1,912 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Changed and made into an actual song.

• Hmm... two years have passed. I believe it's time...

  Thread: Contemplations Vo. 4 (4 Replies, 4,203 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Hmm... two years have passed. I believe it's time for another volume.

• I've always loved your style. Also, I'm back lol.

  Thread: Moon Between the Mountains (12 Replies, 7,098 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I've always loved your style. Also, I'm back lol.

• Thanks! As far as A Brief Exchange, I actually...

  Thread: Twin Flames (3 Replies, 3,794 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Thanks! As far as A Brief Exchange, I actually wrote that a few hours ago while taking a walk. I made it ambiguous, but it is about a mosquito. Lol.

• Twin Flames

  Thread: Twin Flames (3 Replies, 3,794 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Just as two twin flames eternally burn
  You and I shine bright, while the cosmos turn.
  But we know not that the other exists
  Much less the way our energies persist.
  Blinded not by sight, but by...

• This is really good. I think I like most how you...

  Thread: My mind's eye (1 Replies, 1,284 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  This is really good. I think I like most how you separate yourself from the world in order to see it clearly for what it is becoming. Or maybe it is because you see what it is that you separate...

• A Brief Exchange

  Thread: A Brief Exchange (2 Replies, 3,731 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  It has been a very long time since I have posted anything. So much has happened since then. But here you go, ATL. Also, comments/critiques are very much welcome.
  
  How gentle her touch is as she...

• Insert Catchy Title Here

  Thread: Insert Catchy Title Here (3 Replies, 3,509 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  The darkness leaves, the light embraces me
  It's hard to see, its piercing entity
  It fills my soul with hope
  To deal with the fear I cope
  Envious as the light, it fades away
  
  Some other place,...

• I like this. It's been awhile since I have been...

  Thread: Not Asking (9 Replies, 2,154 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I like this. It's been awhile since I have been on ATL, and it's good to know that there are still great writers on here.

• I love the verses and the bridge. However, I'm...

  Thread: Breathless (7 Replies, 3,539 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I love the verses and the bridge. However, I'm not a fan of the word "punch" in this context. It doesn't seem quite strong enough. I enjoyed this.

• I'm back ATL!

  Thread: I'm back ATL! (0 Replies, 2,003 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  In a life full of nothing
  You learn with a wanting
  That the end is not the end
  In time you're outspoken
  And reflect on all you've chosen
  And realize it's all in the wind
  Upon close...

• Soon to be titled

  Thread: Soon to be titled (0 Replies, 1,265 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  My dreams ain't real but they say to follow 'em
  Pocket full of pills and I'm 'bout to swallow one
  Chase it with some liquor to make that sh*t kick quicker
  Then I'll kick it. 'Cause my mind is...

• Tripping Through Time

  Thread: Tripping Through Time (0 Replies, 1,218 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I am everyone, I am no one
  There is no beginning, there is no end
  None of this is real while none of this is fake
  This an eternity of hell
  
  Every possibility running through my mind
  All...

• Sticky: Haven't posted anything in a while. I'm going to...

  Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 369,174 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Haven't posted anything in a while. I'm going to have to get on that.

• End the F*cking War!

  Thread: End the F*cking War! (1 Replies, 1,612 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Today will mark a decade to the day we were attacked
  A feat that laid our dumbstruck country right onto its back
  And with the major leaders gone what are we fighting for
  I have no answers just...

• The last line of the chorus, I think, would pause...

  Thread: Realize (3 Replies, 1,804 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  The last line of the chorus, I think, would pause and then say "me. " I like this.

• Damn this is good.

  Thread: I See (5 Replies, 2,135 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Damn this is good.

• This is good. I like the word play. A couple of...

  Thread: Review it. (3 Replies, 1,639 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  This is good. I like the word play. A couple of grammar errors, ie "your" and "you're, " but it flows smoothly.

• I like this. I enjoyed the word play with the...

  Thread: who i am (1 Replies, 2,959 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I like this. I enjoyed the word play with the scratched cd.

• Sticky: It's crazy, I turned 19 on August, and I aspire...

  Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 369,174 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  It's crazy, I turned 19 on August, and I aspire to write like you shadow. That is AWESOME!

• This is good. I like it. The Dr. Pepper joke made...

  Thread: My Take On Heartbreak (1 Replies, 2,138 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  This is good. I like it. The Dr. Pepper joke made me chuckle.

• What? Lol

  Thread: The frog (2 Replies, 2,733 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  What? Lol

• Damn that was great. Nice flow and stinging...

  Thread: Juneyah vs. Sk'n Deep (Quarter Finals/Round 2) (34 Replies, 4,363 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Damn that was great. Nice flow and stinging blows. Fantastic.

• I like it. Generally, I wouldn't put a name in a...

  Thread: Untitled Love Song (1 Replies, 2,224 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I like it. Generally, I wouldn't put a name in a love song, unless it's her. This way it is universal, but since it is for someone, I'm assuming, it works.

• Thanks

  Thread: A Decade Since (3 Replies, 2,250 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Thanks

• A Hopeless Man's Hopefull Prayer

  Thread: A Hopeless Man's Hopefull Prayer (3 Replies, 4,231 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  With each passing day
  This hole in my chest grows bigger
  Am I wasting my life
  This grave grows, I am the digger
  One day I shall lie down
  And I'll leave this plane forever
  Perhaps this...

• Rap man...

  Thread: Cash vs. Space (ROUND 1) (32 Replies, 4,306 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Rap man...

• Edited

  Thread: A Decade Since (3 Replies, 2,250 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Edited

• I love this, but honestly, my favorite part is...

  Thread: Dying (9 Replies, 5,450 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I love this, but honestly, my favorite part is "inzomnbia" Hahaha!

• Sticky: I am a beautiful person. I have a ride on the...

  Thread: Lyrics Review off-topic discussions (835 Replies, 369,174 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I am a beautiful person. I have a ride on the Internet. The creator of the most important thing is that the information you need to be a good idea to have a lot of people who are not responsible for...

• It's so good to see you post something! I like...

  Thread: I Miss You (3 Replies, 2,397 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  It's so good to see you post something! I like how I recognize every name from your story. This almost brought a tear to my eye. (:^))

• This is pretty cool. It's as if music is speaking...

  Thread: Hey Lyricist (1 Replies, 2,897 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  This is pretty cool. It's as if music is speaking to the person writing it.

• Wow. I really like this. It went in a completely...

  Thread: She Don't Know (2 Replies, 1,852 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Wow. I really like this. It went in a completely different direction in the chorus then I thought it would.

• I like this. I do.

  Thread: I Am Free (6 Replies, 2,754 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I like this. I do.

• A Decade Since

  Thread: A Decade Since (3 Replies, 2,250 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I can't believe that it's been ten years
  Since I watched my faith in God disappear
  And as I watch the time grow near
  I'm ready to get the hell out of here
  And join you in a place where you...

• I'm not sure what this is about. It just came to...

  Thread: Untitled yet again :-) (6 Replies, 2,885 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I'm not sure what this is about. It just came to me.

• Untitled yet again :-)

  Thread: Untitled yet again :-) (6 Replies, 2,885 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Conflicting memories
  Waiting for the sun to rise
  Am I meant for this life forever
  It's too hard to open my eyes
  
  Constricting agony
  Drowning in my own lies
  Suffocating; without air
  I don't...

• I would love to do a collaboration with someone...

  Thread: review and let me have it you cruelly honest audience (7 Replies, 2,291 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I would love to do a collaboration with someone on this forum. It would be cool to have someone who writes different than I to write something together.

• I do enjoy seeing lyrics with a higher standard...

  Thread: New song by a brand new member (8 Replies, 2,842 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I do enjoy seeing lyrics with a higher standard vocabulary than some posts on this site. Keep up the good work.

• Sure.

  Thread: would anyone like to help me? (2 Replies, 3,697 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Sure.

• Post length varies, but good lyrics. My favorite...

  Thread: New song by a brand new member (8 Replies, 2,842 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Post length varies, but good lyrics. My favorite lines are Damnation a damned nation.

• This is really good and visual.

  Thread: new to the site and glad i found it (3 Replies, 1,815 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  This is really good and visual.

• Added and edited. More later. :)

  Thread: Another start for a lyric (3 Replies, 1,912 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  Added and edited. More later. :)

• I feel ya. I was gone for awhile also, but have...

  Thread: Goodbye (5 Replies, 3,199 Views) by Inskeepruler

  
  

  I feel ya. I was gone for awhile also, but have been inspired by recent events.