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• Relaxation

  Thread: Relaxation (1 Replies, 2,838 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  im chilin with whose cool to me
  we tightknit with a tight grip
  such a unity
  too powerful, we under scrutiny
  with the ladies
  we be smoother than a foogies beat
  soon to be graduates
  tellin...

• Wrong Ones

  Thread: Wrong Ones (1 Replies, 2,371 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  As i search for a stepping stone
  Since that one night, i deserve to go to bed alone
  Its not that, i cant get someone thats new
  I just peep girls at the club
  They aint somewhat like you
  I need...

• Recipe Instrumental

  Thread: Recipe Instrumental (2 Replies, 2,474 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  I dont think you understand, the heart it takes
  trynna make it, go all the way
  so far its been all mistakes
  our lives take part in a place,
  with no fairy tales,
  almost every bail, wasnt even...

• Some Feedback Would be Nice PLEASE

  Thread: Some Feedback Would be Nice PLEASE (0 Replies, 2,415 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  we get around the chi like, the L does
  reckless teens like us, hated by the el-ders
  we can give a **** how yall felt, cuz...we just livin life
  you dont like it?
  too many live in town, come and...

• this was pretty good. but its hard for me to read...

  Thread: Catchin Feelings (3 Replies, 2,550 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  this was pretty good. but its hard for me to read it in the right flow because i dont know how you were trying to say it. but decent lines, the last 5 lines were very nice. good ending.

• haha i wasnt even trying to be funny at all. but...

  Thread: The Sweetest Sound (5 Replies, 3,514 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  haha i wasnt even trying to be funny at all. but thanks

• I remember the days.

  Thread: I remember the days. (0 Replies, 2,574 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  Verse 1:
  I respect those who respect me
  Forget those who forget me
  Cherish those who been there through the progressing
  The life has been so raw like red meat
  Pride is all you got, so scrap to...

• what do you mean lol?

  Thread: The Sweetest Sound (5 Replies, 3,514 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  what do you mean lol?

• The Sweetest Sound

  Thread: The Sweetest Sound (5 Replies, 3,514 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  These past weeks i been wanting to let you know
  A cycle of your emotional problems
  I thought it was menstrual
  'Cause of the lack of anything sexual, but
  I already accepted the fact that this aint...

• i wasnt taken any shots at other emcees, just to...

  Thread: Im a 13 year old rapper. so i need some feedback please, im serious with this stuff. (2 Replies, 2,909 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  i wasnt taken any shots at other emcees, just to let you know. and i appreciate it though, for letting me know what you think. at only 14 years old, what i can rap about from my own life is kind of...

• thanx for the feedback guys, yea i've been making...

  Thread: im 13 years old, but im serious with my lyrics. so please give feedback if you read (5 Replies, 1,943 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  thanx for the feedback guys, yea i've been making a lot more verses recently in my free time, sometimes to some beats i found on youtube...and i've taken some of the recommendations from you guys and...

• damn this verse is hot! you definitely killed it...

  Thread: Here's a drop i've been working on. (1 Replies, 1,714 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  damn this verse is hot! you definitely killed it with the multiple syllable rhyming. the content of the verse was really good and smart, and i like how you rhymed at the beginning of your lines and...

• Im a 13 year old rapper. so i need some feedback please, im serious with this stuff.

  Thread: Im a 13 year old rapper. so i need some feedback please, im serious with this stuff. (2 Replies, 2,909 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  With my other verses i've posted, i've only gotten like a couple comments/feedback from all the people that have read them. so if you are a member of this site, please comment on the bottom and tell...

• oh alright. and thanx man. yea im just getting...

  Thread: im 13 years old, but im serious with my lyrics. so please give feedback if you read (5 Replies, 1,943 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  oh alright. and thanx man. yea im just getting started with writing lyrics, so no i dont take offense at all. thanx for the feedback, im definitely gonna work on the stuff you recommended

• man if this is rusty, then the stuff u write when...

  Thread: fianlly Back! 1st song i wrote in months! 10mins! (3 Replies, 1,794 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  man if this is rusty, then the stuff u write when your not must be pretty dope lol. for real, this is good, and i've listened to the song in the morning a lot, so i can kinda picture these lyrics...

• im 13 years old, but im serious with my lyrics. so please give feedback if you read

  Thread: im 13 years old, but im serious with my lyrics. so please give feedback if you read (5 Replies, 1,943 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  this is food for thought, as an observer of the game for a while
  im ashamed at the change, we need a trial
  hip-hop is gone, lets save it before its faded way too long
  songs on the radio, filled...

• i kind of get what you mean. thanx for the...

  Thread: Hip-hop verse (6 Replies, 2,715 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  i kind of get what you mean. thanx for the recommendation. thats what i want from the people who read these lyrics, i just want their feedback and want some tips from them. i appreciate it, man.

• yea i'll definitely look into that group since u...

  Thread: Hip-hop verse (6 Replies, 2,715 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  yea i'll definitely look into that group since u recommend it. and i STRONGLY recommend u listening to j.cole, hes my fav artist, and is the most underrated one in my opinion.

• a verse from a 13 year old

  Thread: a verse from a 13 year old (0 Replies, 1,180 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  some of the audience says i gotta dumb it down
  i guess this is why i got love for the underground
  life struggles hit you like jabs, you just got to fight it
  theres a key to success for us all, you...

• thanks man! and yes im just 13, i used to be into...

  Thread: Hip-hop verse (6 Replies, 2,715 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  thanks man! and yes im just 13, i used to be into the lame lil wayne type of music. but i've gotten into true hip hop like j.cole, nas, kendrick lamar, lupe fiasco, etc. but i just never really tried...

• Rap verse...please give feedback if you read it!

  Thread: Rap verse...please give feedback if you read it! (0 Replies, 1,477 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  you gotta play the game to change it
  lure in the ones that once hated
  attack every track, til im jaded
  overcome every obstacle im facin'
  i hope everything will sink in,
  that im saying
  time to...

• Hip-hop verse

  Thread: Hip-hop verse (6 Replies, 2,715 Views) by gvr13

  
  

  im 13 years old, but im starting to get into hip hop. i want some feedback about my lyrics, but i want an honest opinion from who ever reads this...
  
  at this young age i've seen a lot of ****
  so...