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• kick some a** man. Great vibe. I wouldn't mind...

  Thread: Blood Runs Cold (3 Replies, 2,103 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  kick some a** man. Great vibe. I wouldn't mind hearing this, is it on youtube or recorded some where for us to listen?

• Despite my ability to truly appreciate it as much...

  Thread: PlayTime (9 Replies, 1,861 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Despite my ability to truly appreciate it as much as some of the older members on here (no offense guys) but this is still a beautiful song for many to relate to. I'm only 26 and I still yearn for...

• dang man, you boil it down real quick. I love how...

  Thread: No Regrets (3 Replies, 1,394 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  dang man, you boil it down real quick. I love how you leave yourself vulernable but yet end it with a big change of mindset. Very good.

• if we kept them, our inspirations would be...

  Thread: "ashes in the rain" (3 Replies, 2,266 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  if we kept them, our inspirations would be positive and let's face it: sadness is out there, and people need to vent. And what's better then hearing a song that let's you know you aren't the only one...

• I really am enjoying the chorus. Very powerful...

  Thread: Fade Away (9 Replies, 3,303 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I really am enjoying the chorus. Very powerful lyrics. I love it!

• thank you. :) I'm glad you can envision music to...

  Thread: Damien Part 2 (2 Replies, 1,593 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  thank you. :) I'm glad you can envision music to it and even some imagery to this is beautiful. Glad you like it!

• Damien Part 2

  Thread: Damien Part 2 (2 Replies, 1,593 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  To be clear...I don't worship the devil, it's just a twisted song. Just wanna throw that out there lol. My band did a song about 4 years ago named Damien, this is just a follow up. Written in a...

• Beautifully written, leaves you very vulnerable,...

  Thread: HARDCORE/ROCK - 'Black & Blue Oceans' (would like honest reviewing) (4 Replies, 2,800 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Beautifully written, leaves you very vulnerable, which is courageous. I know these feelings unfortunately, but I know that it can only get better. On a writers note, it's excellent and it's always an...

• Stand-Still (WIP)

  Thread: Stand-Still (WIP) (0 Replies, 1,486 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Last song of the day, (sorry trying to make up for lost time, lol)
  
  This one is still a work in progress. Any advice, or thoughts on it would be greatly appreciated!
  
  Stand-Still
  
  I find myself...

• To Be Home

  Thread: To Be Home (0 Replies, 1,038 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  A little more uplifting song then the last. Written when I got my new job and things really started to turn around for me. So naturally it's a little 'happier' lol.
  
  
  So lost, for so long
  Thought...

• Bleed Out

  Thread: Bleed Out (0 Replies, 1,292 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Been awhile since I've been on here, so I figured I'd check out some of the new (and old) faces on here. Loving what I'm seeing. So here's some of my own stuff. Feel free to comment on it! :)
  ...

• This is definitely my kind of writing. Do you...

  Thread: I Quit (2 Replies, 2,092 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  This is definitely my kind of writing. Do you have music to this? If so, may we hear?!
  
  EDIT: Shameless ad...given your style of writing, you may enjoy my stuff. Check it out if you have time. :)

• Dark poetry...excellent description of this. I...

  Thread: The Devils Right Hand (5 Replies, 4,705 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Dark poetry...excellent description of this. I agree completely...and it's beautiful. Looking forward to more.

• Good stuff, it flows rather nicely. I'd love to...

  Thread: Same Pain (8 Replies, 2,754 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Good stuff, it flows rather nicely. I'd love to check out a youtube channel or something if you have one with music and what not. This is the first one of your songs I've checked out...good first...

• That's EXACTLY what I was thinking. Not a bad...

  Thread: Escape the Truth (7 Replies, 3,164 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  That's EXACTLY what I was thinking. Not a bad band to relate it to either, in my opinion. Take it as a compliment John! lol

• I absolutely love this man. this is the VERY...

  Thread: Valley of Broken Dreams (4 Replies, 1,696 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I absolutely love this man. this is the VERY FIRST song I've read in my travels back on this site and as usual John, you've never let me down. Great work!

• Thanks man. And yea, it's just a song. I seem to...

  Thread: Nothing Left (1 Replies, 1,200 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Thanks man. And yea, it's just a song. I seem to be able to 'tap into' moods from past experiences and come out with weird sense of inspiration from them. but all is well. And yea, As I Lay Dying is...

• Nothing Left

  Thread: Nothing Left (1 Replies, 1,200 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I lay awake and contemplate
  The very life I wish to take
  
  I wish not to hear the words you speak
  Though I know they could save me
  Just remember the life I leave
  And all that I tried to be
  ...

• thanks alot. I actually recorded it using my...

  Thread: Scars (5 Replies, 1,913 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  thanks alot. I actually recorded it using my phone lol.
  
  EDIT: not to excuse the singing or anything lol.

• so this is the first time I actually tried...

  Thread: Scars (5 Replies, 1,913 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  so this is the first time I actually tried singing, so please don't judge that too harshly, but here's the music to it. Hope it's worth listening once, lol.
  
  ...

• Although I originally wrote it just as a poem,...

  Thread: Always & Forever (4 Replies, 2,041 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Although I originally wrote it just as a poem, I'd love to hear anyone's take on it in song form. If you hear some music in your head feel free to do something with this. I honestly never really put...

• thanks so much! I appreciate the kind words :)

  Thread: Pragmatic Thoughts (4 Replies, 1,380 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  thanks so much! I appreciate the kind words :)

• Always & Forever

  Thread: Always & Forever (4 Replies, 2,041 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Another poem with some quick music behind it. I apologize for this not being in the poetry section, I just feel like it wouldn't get as much attention.
  
  
  
  As love is lost, a new love is found ...

• Pragmatic Thoughts

  Thread: Pragmatic Thoughts (4 Replies, 1,380 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  This isn't really a typical song seeing as there is no definite chorus. It's really a poem with just an arpeggio behind it. Still, I hope you enjoy. It's rather old so I'm sure it's somewhat, 'eh'....

• Wow...just wow. Very, very good. this is...

  Thread: Innocence Lost (4 Replies, 1,747 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Wow...just wow. Very, very good. this is incredible. And so true, too.

• thanks. it's actually an acoustic/rock song,...

  Thread: Scars (5 Replies, 1,913 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  thanks. it's actually an acoustic/rock song, believe it or not. It could easily be transferred to an electric though with no problem, but I like the sound of an acoustic guitar in Drop C. Has a nice...

• I feel like I've said this many times on here,...

  Thread: My Wasted Heart (5 Replies, 1,961 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I feel like I've said this many times on here, but it still applies to this piece of work. Whatever your muse, don't ever let that go. this is beautiful and amazing.

• favorite lines: "With broken hearts and twisted...

  Thread: Mistakes we knew we were making (13 Replies, 2,498 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  favorite lines: "With broken hearts and twisted minds,
  searching for truth in a pile of lies. "
  
  hands. down. Great song :)

• Scars

  Thread: Scars (5 Replies, 1,913 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Just a song about something I will never do again. A dark song about a permanent reminder.
  
  
  
  Scars
  
  When the world
  Seems to fall away
  And these walls
  Start to close in on me

• Cradle to Grave

  Thread: Cradle to Grave (1 Replies, 1,401 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  First off, it's been good to read some awesome new posts on here! Secondly, this is just a start of a song, but I hope you can provide some feedback anyway. My friend and I are trying to do a 'duel'...

• I like! Nothing like an ominous song to make me...

  Thread: Pumpkinhead (36 Replies, 12,289 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I like! Nothing like an ominous song to make me happy, lol. Great job, I'd love to hear music to this if you have it somewhere?

• Very nice. The only thing I'd fix (and this is...

  Thread: Calling Your Name (10 Replies, 1,402 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Very nice. The only thing I'd fix (and this is just strictly a personal thing and a pet peeve of mine, lol) is how it's structured. It seems the phrases are clumped together so it makes it hard for...

• The Truth

  Thread: The Truth (1 Replies, 1,957 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  So it seems like forever since I've been on here. Looks like I got a lot of good stuff to look through :) In the meanwhile, I hope you can enjoy the newest song I wrote. First one in while....

• I like these lyrics. Whatever your muse, keep it....

  Thread: Nobody Can Compete (2 Replies, 1,452 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I like these lyrics. Whatever your muse, keep it. :)

• this. is. epic. I really like the whole idea of...

  Thread: Wild West Jess (36 Replies, 8,115 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  this. is. epic. I really like the whole idea of this man. Great job on this!

• this. is. epic. I really like the whole idea of...

  Thread: Wild West Jess (36 Replies, 10,877 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  this. is. epic. I really like the whole idea of this man. Great job on this!

• *another shameless bump*

  Thread: Tribute to Our Nightmares (3 Replies, 2,118 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  *another shameless bump*

• Who You Are (W.I.P.)

  Thread: Who You Are (W.I.P.) (1 Replies, 1,438 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  This is something I'm working on and I'd like to know if it's off to a decent start. It's pretty obvious what this is about so I won't get into it. Any advice or things that might be worded better,...

• I was gonna ask about that, but thought I might...

  Thread: 37 (4 Replies, 1,878 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I was gonna ask about that, but thought I might sound silly if I was wrong. Either way, great stuff.

• so much emotion in your lyrics. i love it. i can...

  Thread: 37 (4 Replies, 1,878 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  so much emotion in your lyrics. i love it. i can hear a beat in my head to this. I'm feeling like a choppy, yet melodic metal riff. I don't know why, but I'm hearing some like "As I Lay Dying" kinda...

• A heart of gold so heavy It slows me to a crawl...

  Thread: So Blind (2 Replies, 2,308 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  A heart of gold so heavy
  It slows me to a crawl
  I reach out to help them up
  But I stumble and they fall
  
  those are my favorite lines right there. Simple and poetic but strong and revealing at...

• Those are my favorite lead ins as well. It flows...

  Thread: Fall On Me (8 Replies, 13,204 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Those are my favorite lead ins as well. It flows with the music pretty good, too. I'm glad you can read it and see a much deeper meaning in it than just words on paper. thanks dude

• Lol, thanks alot man. Glad you can find and...

  Thread: World's Collide (5 Replies, 2,019 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Lol, thanks alot man. Glad you can find and relate to this. It's a good feeling in life, isn't it?

• brilliant.

  Thread: Let me in your naked soul (8 Replies, 3,813 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  brilliant.

• I can't not like this. I love monkeys and this is...

  Thread: Funky Monkey (2 Replies, 1,568 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  I can't not like this. I love monkeys and this is just a fun song lol. :)

• wow. just. wow. This is right up my alley! Dark,...

  Thread: Your Bullet (1 Replies, 1,471 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  wow. just. wow. This is right up my alley! Dark, desperate and deep. I love it. I especially love the opening lines,
  
  My voice is a thing so hollow
  Too drunk to argue....
  Too tired to care.... ...

• this is really painfully intense...and sad, but...

  Thread: Run (20 Replies, 4,775 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  this is really painfully intense...and sad, but still beautifully written. hopefully writing this has helped you vent in some way. :)

• Yea I was debating about how to word that line. I...

  Thread: So I Will (3 Replies, 1,583 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Yea I was debating about how to word that line. I went with "our waves crash down" because I implied it as the waves are OUR problems that we have in the relationship. but I definitely was going back...

• So I Will

  Thread: So I Will (3 Replies, 1,583 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  Just a different look at life...a nice break from my usual depressing and self lacerating lyrics lol. Enjoy?
  
  So I Will
  
  They said to turn; said to run
  But still I chose to stay
  They said to...

• thanks Teshka I'm glad you enjoy reading what I...

  Thread: Break Me Open (Good-bye) (4 Replies, 2,107 Views) by The Obscured

  
  

  thanks Teshka I'm glad you enjoy reading what I post. Means alot. But you are right when you say it's like the news crew showing too much death and people not always wanting to be confronted with it...