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Thread: Oz (idk) (3 Replies, 1,305 Views) by L.O.
didnt notice that thanks
Thread: Oz (idk) (3 Replies, 1,305 Views) by L.O.
Im with my dog walkin yellow bricks
With some braindead ***** a ***** and a heartless
Killed the lion and devoured his carcass
Wrote this in his blood tell me im not an artist
The best part is...
Thread: it happens (0 Replies, 1,006 Views) by L.O.
The Spitual is a ritual
Its spiritual
Seein is believin
This is visual
The actual
The factual
Its not x and o
Under these missles no
In a world were a murder is just a group of crows
Thread: freestyle madness anyone can join (4 Replies, 1,455 Views) by L.O.
U *****s rainbows like them ****in skittles
a rainbow appears after the lyrical storm so far ive just seen drizzles
showers and sprinkles on my ice cream
im a one man band ***** I in team
im...
Thread: Who's Writing? (4 Replies, 1,445 Views) by L.O.
same here i write songs dont finish them and start a new one i always say im gonna get back to them but i cant remember which ones are incomplete
Thread: Twisted Love (0 Replies, 1,254 Views) by L.O.
I hate u
I love u
I need u
Id do anything to please u
Ur my vulnerability
Thats how my enemies get to me
Ur my energy and my disability
Ur my reality and im glad to have u
Hug and kiss u...
Thread: IgnoRant Give some feedback (2 Replies, 1,244 Views) by L.O.
This **** is twisted
No its knot
Ain't ignorance when you don't no a lot
Replace the human race with robots
I'll kill a ****in hypocrit but before that
tell him that murderin' is wrong hope u...
Thread: Lord Why give feedbaack (0 Replies, 1,207 Views) by L.O.
Do the negus who invented hiphop know how to rap?
The second coming is that when biggie and tupac coming back?
We live in a world where autotune can make u millions
One day u a citizen next u a...
Thread: Untitled rap (4 Replies, 1,673 Views) by L.O.
soo u cant do it by urself then?
Thread: Written In Gold (4 Replies, 1,633 Views) by L.O.
Okay. I'll take that advice i wrote this really fast sometimes i just start freestyling thats where the first 3 or 4 bars came from and then i just wrote the rest. When i started writing raps it was...
Thread: cypher (Everybody needed-Join in) (40 Replies, 8,783 Views) by L.O.
The answers im givin are questionable
wonderin if a tomato should be a vegetable
for the last few days i've been on a kanye west flow
im havin trouble tryna let that go
speakin about kids if u...
Thread: cypher (Everybody needed-Join in) (40 Replies, 8,783 Views) by L.O.
im tryna get her in my bed
and out of them jeans
cant choose the right girl rebecca or christine
i guess we can discuss the subject while im laying in between
santa please rap some gifts and...
Thread: cypher (Everybody needed-Join in) (40 Replies, 8,783 Views) by L.O.
Listen they call me LO
The l for loud and the o for obnoxious
And im a theif
Stole the world and placed in my pocket
When i spit im sick i spit out blood
U heard of 40 days and 40 nights my...
Thread: Ft. God give feedback (0 Replies, 1,186 Views) by L.O.
Aye god u should come and spit a verse
It can be clean we aint gotta curse
U created adam and eve
So how hard can rappin be
U could kill the industry
And if u dissed me it would be the end of me...
Thread: Written In Gold need feedback (0 Replies, 1,481 Views) by L.O.
Gold all that glitters
Somethin that can turn a sweet girl bitter
Me im a rapper im 14 years old
Im lookin for more valuable things than gold
Knowlege, knowlege is power
Plant the seed in ur...
Thread: Written In Gold (4 Replies, 1,633 Views) by L.O.
feedback?
Thread: Written In Gold (4 Replies, 1,633 Views) by L.O.
Gold all that glitters
Somethin that can turn a sweet girl bitter
Me im a rapper im 14 years old
Im lookin for more valuable things than gold
Knowlege, knowlege is power
Plant the seed in ur...
Thread: LO and give some feedback (2 Replies, 1,363 Views) by L.O.
i know theres no subject i just wrote what came to mind usually when i write a song that is meaningless i recycle the good parts so i broke this song down and put some bars on other songs becuz they...
Thread: LO and give some feedback (2 Replies, 1,363 Views) by L.O.
Ur family tree i will eat the fruits
Then dig it up and cut the roots
Let me slice the pie
Give u a piece of my mind
Throw the clock in the trash
Sorry for wasting ur time
The pen is mightier...
Thread: N e 1 (0 Replies, 1,055 Views) by L.O.
Life can suck
when it gets hard
life is over
when life starts
prayer is not a shopping list
i'm in heaven with a shopping cart
heaven is not a shopping center?
i've been to sky-mart
they sell...
Thread: Untitled rap (4 Replies, 1,673 Views) by L.O.
for what?
Thread: Cigarettes (0 Replies, 1,083 Views) by L.O.
Ur life span is as long as that cigarette
I show u the details but u can never picture it
Every year u gettin older and older
Ur life and that cigarette gettin shorter and shorter
Im tryna save u...
Thread: you must cheat (5 Replies, 1,430 Views) by L.O.
alright thanks i've tried reading a dictionary but... half of those words are completely useless to me i want more wordplay but not like you gotta look up every word to understand what i'm trying to...
Thread: you must cheat (5 Replies, 1,430 Views) by L.O.
i'm 14 and i like to write raps but some of these words like assertive i have heard but never used do u like read dictionaries or somethin i need to expand my vocabulary
Thread: Ms.Take (0 Replies, 1,076 Views) by L.O.
Hello gorgeous u lookin fly
Just how many years have passed by
U the one i let get away
Oh yeah that was yesterday
Thought u was with me but u just wanted that fendi
Aslong as u pretty u thought...
Thread: Untitled rap (4 Replies, 1,673 Views) by L.O.
Uh love life i commited suicide
Social life died in a drive by
And im randy L to
Whats ur name comment appelle tu
My life buried alive
Double life nobody lives twice
I started writin poems...
Thread: The Project (2 Replies, 1,054 Views) by L.O.
whhich is why its called the project
Thread: The Project (2 Replies, 1,054 Views) by L.O.
Lie to the girl lie my nose off
Turn her on so i can take her clothes off
The things a man do for sex
Sign a contract dont read the fine print the contex
Cumin in a vagina instead of a kleenex...
Thread: Home Sweet Home what do u think? btw its incomplete (0 Replies, 1,780 Views) by L.O.
Home sweet home
Im from the ghetto
Rose from the concrete
Im just a petal
A flower in a meadow
Im the man of steel like the metal
Maybe im superhuman
Maybe im a bit rusty and need improvin
A...
Thread: Prices of Happiness (could use feedback thanks) (0 Replies, 925 Views) by L.O.
If im not writin songs
Im prolly writin checks
If i aint havin problems
Im probably havin sex
My life is a routine
Yet i dont know what comes next
They say L yo songs in my head how i get em...
Thread: Feedback on my rap (2 Replies, 1,238 Views) by L.O.
somethings missing cant put my finger on it but maybe i'm imagining things
Thread: Randy's Modern Life ( dis to lil b cuz im sick of him) (0 Replies, 1,148 Views) by L.O.
I said he bad
He lil b wack
They just say im mad
I dont hate i instigate
U candy cane *****s cant rap
Stick to ya elf **** feliz navidad
One bar could kill ur career
Im the beast sheddin skin...