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• I could just picture it clearly.

  Thread: Learning Curve (5 Replies, 8,354 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  I could just picture it clearly.

• +Love it!-

  Thread: Take This Cup Away (1 Replies, 1,758 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Love it!-

• + Sorry about the 'Jaundice' thing I said above....

  Thread: Dalston Night Tale (7 Replies, 7,204 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  Sorry about the 'Jaundice' thing I said above.
  I don't know if it is something westish which might be judging from your user_name.
  Forgive me for misunderstanding anything.
  
  
  The young still...

• + Wow... I like this font... Poetry isn't me...

  Thread: Dalston Night Tale (7 Replies, 7,204 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  + Wow... I like this font...
  Poetry isn't me best subject but me still likes poems.
  Sorry if I'm too serious in any way (the nature of human beings)...
  :D
  So this is a tale for the night, eh?
  oK...

• +Oh come on, it's nothing really. Who doesn't...

  Thread: Autumn Breeze (3 Replies, 3,301 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Oh come on, it's nothing really. Who doesn't like feedback?-

• +I see your structure: Verse 1 Chorus Verse 2...

  Thread: Autumn Breeze (3 Replies, 3,301 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +I see your structure:
  Verse 1
  Chorus
  Verse 2
  Chorus
  
  not bad but try putting an ending at the end... unless you have something up with endings.
  I actually like your lyrics as they aren't...

• +Again, these lyrics could be improved by a...

  Thread: Quicksand (1 Replies, 2,226 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Again, these lyrics could be improved by a ending that adds more emphasize to the song. The verses are cool and I know that you have used efficient time to work all these lyrics of yours. Try to...

• +LOL, another well done for these lyrics that I...

  Thread: Sins & Scars (1 Replies, 1,801 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +LOL, another well done for these lyrics that I consider great partly because of the realistic aspects. The ending could be a bit more... you know... more endingish instead of just the chorus as the...

• +Mike's doing well in this non-linear forum. His...

  Thread: Hands Of Time (2 Replies, 2,562 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Mike's doing well in this non-linear forum. His lyrics are consistently creative and meaningful.:)-

• +The title of the song isn't bad but I was...

  Thread: Bound By Doubt (2 Replies, 2,210 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +The title of the song isn't bad but I was thinking it would be better to take out the 'by' but never mind. It's good the way it is. It isn't bad. The lyrics are wonderful because it reminds me of my...

• + Is that humor? LOL Or are you serious?...

  Thread: Love Me Just A Little (5 Replies, 2,985 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  Is that humor? LOL
  
  Or are you serious? :erm: Oh...
  
  Of course, this non-linear forum is for those who like to make up lyrics and songs to post. Creativity is a key. The songs aren't published...

• + if you can't find songs in the all the...

  Thread: Problems trying to register + no response to contact us (9 Replies, 14,491 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  + if you can't find songs in the all the lyrics.com (not the forum), go to the forum and post a thread in the lyrics request and work something out...-

• +hi pq92k, i like how you relate what people...

  Thread: I Love You, I Hate You (3 Replies, 2,199 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +hi pq92k,
  i like how you relate what people come up with to other songs. Your suggestions are valued, but writers would appreciate the fact that their lyrics are original.
  You're funny on the...

• +I get that modern-era-in-a-modern-coffee-shop...

  Thread: Available (2 Replies, 1,887 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +I get that modern-era-in-a-modern-coffee-shop vibe plus a steamy vibe.
  
  LOL:D
  The one about the income kinda puts me off of the hook of the vibe into the vibe of money. :rolleyes:-

• + Yeah, but then what words could be used?...

  Thread: Muse (3 Replies, 1,740 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  
  Yeah, but then what words could be used?
  Finding rhyming words aren't super easy.
  It isn't really excessive.
  I would say it is balanced as it is.-

• + True...-

  Thread: Shouldn't Want You But I Do (female) (2 Replies, 1,091 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  
  True...-

• + That's for you to decide but I think they're...

  Thread: Love Me Just A Little (5 Replies, 2,985 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  
  That's for you to decide but I think they're creative and original enough.-

• +I like it but I would prefer the ending to be...

  Thread: Old Wound (2 Replies, 2,186 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +I like it but I would prefer the ending to be 'slightly' more dramatic than just the 'chorus'.
  Correct me if I'm mistaken with my point of view.;)-

• +LOL:D I get what Tania is saying. So...

  Thread: Problems trying to register + no response to contact us (9 Replies, 14,491 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +LOL:D
  I get what Tania is saying.
  
  So 'tstdmy' what do you want to do in this non-linear forum.-

• +@Tania I didn't get a 'are you a human game'....

  Thread: Problems trying to register + no response to contact us (9 Replies, 14,491 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +@Tania I didn't get a 'are you a human game'. When did you add it to the registration? I registered around the last day of 2014 or the first day of 2015. I didn't get any games.:confused:-

• +At the registration page before I registered,...

  Thread: Problems trying to register + no response to contact us (9 Replies, 14,491 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +At the registration page before I registered, there was just the username, password, email, a random question, a check box for agreeing to terms of use and privacy, a confirm password, and confirm...

• +I like the sound of the song and its content. I...

  Thread: I Love You, I Hate You (3 Replies, 2,199 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +I like the sound of the song and its content. I don't like the sound of 'quality' in the third verse second line. 'I Love you, I hate you. Mostly I love you.' ROFL there. I know it's just life....

• +Sounds awesome if you sing it fast.-

  Thread: Got It Bad (3 Replies, 2,942 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Sounds awesome if you sing it fast.-

• +Your addition has improved the song. Although...

  Thread: Sketches (1st song i ever wrote) (4 Replies, 2,702 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Your addition has improved the song. Although when you said "I won't barely see the skies" I kinda had to take a few seconds to figure out what you went. Maybe you could simplify that because I...

• +Thanks dm and Tania! :)-

  Thread: ATL Calendar (9 Replies, 14,115 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Thanks dm and Tania! :)-

• + Yeah, I actually saw that the calendar was...

  Thread: ATL Calendar (9 Replies, 14,115 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  
  Yeah, I actually saw that the calendar was fine and updated a few days ago. But the day before I checked the calendar was updated, the calendar ended in 2011 so I was curious (:confused:) over...

• +Thanks, Tania!-

  Thread: ATL Calendar (9 Replies, 14,115 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Thanks, Tania!-

• +Never mind if English is your first language or...

  Thread: Sketches (1st song i ever wrote) (4 Replies, 2,702 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Never mind if English is your first language or not.
  At least, have the heart to work with it.
  English was my third language actually.:)-

• +Hi, Luisa Okay, I like your title. I see that...

  Thread: Sketches (1st song i ever wrote) (4 Replies, 2,702 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Hi, Luisa
  Okay, I like your title.
  I see that you're new here. So welcome and congratulations for posting your first song to us.
  I am going to split my comment/feedback up into two parts.
  ...

• Sticky: +Days of yore technical problems of none the...

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Days of yore
  technical problems of none
  the call of humor-

• +I see that you have kept up with the 'awesome...

  Thread: Stained (3 Replies, 3,155 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +I see that you have kept up with the 'awesome title' and 'wide vocabulary' aspect in your third lyric.
  
  Maybe you should consider revising the "Nothing left but skeletons, stripped clean of...

• +Never mind. I just happened to visit the...

  Thread: ATL Calendar (9 Replies, 14,115 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Never mind. I just happened to visit the calendar again and I see that its been extended.
  Thanks anyway!:)-

• +sure-

  Thread: ATL Calendar (9 Replies, 14,115 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +sure-

• Sticky: +doorway to nowhere a gigantic loss of time...

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +doorway to nowhere
  a gigantic loss of time
  foolish and stupid-

• ATL Calendar

  Thread: ATL Calendar (9 Replies, 14,115 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Hey guys,
  :confused:
  I just happened to click the calendar which directed me to www.allthelyrics.com/forum/calendar.php
  :confused:
  Then I was confused why it ended at 2011 and didn't continue to...

• + K. I didn't see that at first. :D ...

  Thread: Deafening (3 Replies, 2,590 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +
  
  K.
  I didn't see that at first. :D
  
  
  Awesome, I get it now!
  
  As I said, -

• +Again, awesome title. I actually laughed...

  Thread: Deafening (3 Replies, 2,590 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Again, awesome title.
  
  I actually laughed aloud when I saw this:
  
  Your lyrics are creative
  but it kinda doesn't make sense.
  
  'It keeps out silence that you shout.'?
  
  By the way: Second...

• +Good job with your first!:)-

  Thread: Cognition (4 Replies, 1,743 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Good job with your first!:)-

• Sticky: +Entrophy, Gradual decline into our disorder...-

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Entrophy,
  Gradual decline into
  our disorder...-

• +why ever not??:rofl_fun:-

  Thread: please rate my song (3 Replies, 3,651 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +why ever not??:rofl_fun:-

• Sticky: +To another world we all go... all natural all...

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +To another world
  we all go... all natural
  all adventurous-

• +What Me Thinks of 'Cognition'-

  Thread: Cognition (4 Replies, 1,743 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +What me thinks:
  First off is that I'm impressed with your vocabulary and how you use those words.
  Secondly, I like how you use repetition.
  Also I like the few rhymes in the verses.
  Nice Title....

• +Hi Jordan Baker! I think that you have dived...

  Thread: please rate my song (3 Replies, 3,651 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Hi Jordan Baker!
  
  I think that you have dived deep into your emotions.
  I also like the rhyming words that you put into your song.
  
  Out of a ten-scale, I'm gonna give you a nine.
  
  Why?
  
  Cos'...

• +It's good. Just want to ask: What inspired...

  Thread: All Roads Lead To You (3 Replies, 2,536 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +It's good.
  
  Just want to ask:
  
  What inspired you to make this song?-

• +Greetings, Dash! Welcome to this non-linear...

  Thread: DASH in the house!!!! (1 Replies, 4,047 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Greetings, Dash!
  
  Welcome to this non-linear house forum!
  
  Happy New Year!-

• Sticky: +the hearts of lions hesitates before victims...

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +the hearts of lions
  hesitates before victims
  considerately-

• Sticky: +Our stares away... ...in the hateful thoughts...

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +Our stares away...
  ...in the hateful thoughts of men,
  the weakness of souls-

• Sticky: +In dangerous dreams? We can't be that serious,...

  Thread: Haiku (1,025 Replies, 327,068 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +In dangerous dreams?
  We can't be that serious,
  Only if we care...-

• +very......touching Nothing to say really....

  Thread: Dear Friend (1/1/15) (5 Replies, 3,590 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +very......touching
  
  Nothing to say really. (Except what I have already said).
  Expect comments from others.-

• +I see....-

  Thread: Prison Cell (12/29/14) (8 Replies, 3,804 Views) by +Technist Barrier-

  
  

  +I see....-