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• This was a waste man. I know your probably busy...

  Thread: Psycho Cypher (10 Replies, 30,705 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  This was a waste man. I know your probably busy but next time find at least a minute to let a dude know whats up.

• We entice the finger.. We're some ..'bird...

  Thread: Psycho Cypher (10 Replies, 30,705 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  We entice the finger..
  We're some ..'bird snatchers'..
  ..calling weak-thugs get drawn-in-to smooth vocals..
  OR (ven) ya'll get beat up by a couple of saloon locals ^
  When scotty keys up and...

• 5 guide and hide inside my corpse Listen this is...

  Thread: Psycho Cypher (10 Replies, 30,705 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  5 guide and hide inside my corpse
  Listen this is intricate rap versus ignorant chat..
  
  (You finish 2nd bar? - 1st bar ends on corpse)

• It's all good but don't get all your lines done....

  Thread: Psycho Cypher (10 Replies, 30,705 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  It's all good but don't get all your lines done. Because of the unique format we're choosing I think it's still nesesary to cypher it out.

• 5 hijacked my mind and hide inside MY corpse!

  Thread: Psycho Cypher (10 Replies, 30,705 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  5 hijacked my mind and hide inside MY corpse!

• Very well written my man, I'm impressed with...

  Thread: Just wanted to see what you guys thought. (1 Replies, 2,413 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Very well written my man, I'm impressed with this. So much emotion but also so much technical discipline in this piece.
  Props. I **** with this.

• This was sweet man I really like this when read...

  Thread: Honesty (55 Replies, 14,368 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  This was sweet man I really like this when read it aloud. Subtle emotion, but alot of it.. that's hard to do.

• Ps this has got to be the longest thread ever!

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Ps this has got to be the longest thread ever!

• when you say "black and white" it's as dull as...

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  when you say "black and white" it's as dull as the grey part.
  you'd "take on a bird" that could bend back the cage bars.
  
  Chris is still a beast.

• we like our sh*t fame resistant! ven and I write...

  Thread: Psycho Cypher (10 Replies, 30,705 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  we like our sh*t fame resistant!
  ven and I write scripts sedated in
  vacant prisons..
  ..brainwaves in
  matrix prisms..
  we levitate in deep space and meditate to
  sacred visions!
  ..and face 8...

• Aha it does sound funny, I grew up next to an...

  Thread: Obsidian Rock (6 Replies, 1,819 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Aha it does sound funny, I grew up next to an Indian reserv.
  Thanks for the read..

• Wow well thankyou Rickey I do appreciate it. I...

  Thread: Obsidian Rock (6 Replies, 1,819 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Wow well thankyou Rickey I do appreciate it. I appreciate your talents as well by the way..

• Thank you very much Amaryn your feedback is very...

  Thread: Obsidian Rock (6 Replies, 1,819 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Thank you very much Amaryn your feedback is very much appreciated. And I'm glad you were able to understand my piece, it is very much so about 'positive turns'.
  And Rickey; nice piece man.. though...

• Obsidian Rock

  Thread: Obsidian Rock (6 Replies, 1,819 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I never signed-off on the town that I'm livin in.
  Every night lost is an ounce of me giving in.
  Often I'm in thought of the Indian who told me I would die but then promised in the end i would...

• I never signed-off on the town that I'm livin in....

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I never signed-off on the town that I'm livin in.
  Every night lost is an ounce of me giving in.
  Often I'm in thought of the Indian who told me I would die but then promised in the end i would...

• I'm too much, Duce couldnt try this hard.. ...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I'm too much, Duce couldnt try this hard..
  School sluts snickered over brews when i use-to wana buy the bar.
  Now im down to loot from a higher star.
  I can make pratt students groove out-of-tune...

• It's all text Ricky, for the most part. There is...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  It's all text Ricky, for the most part. There is a sub forum for audio's but its not often used

• You don't need anything it's a web site just like...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  You don't need anything it's a web site just like this one only its specifically for hip hop, text cees etc. check it out first if u want

• Yea this is hot Rickey ^ Create an account and...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Yea this is hot Rickey ^
  Create an account and drop it as an open mic piece..
  http://www.lyricalassault.co.uk/forum/default.asp
  They'll appreciate that here ^

• Well done vouve well done. Great rythm to that...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Well done vouve well done. Great rythm to that drop.
  As for mine, of course it's true.. 100% of what written above is based off my last stint in valley street.

• All the stars have taken the light From the...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  All the stars have taken the light
  From the moonlit shadowless night.
  All the people have fallen asleep,
  None have stayed awake like me,
  
  To wreep the light from those lit stars,
  Just enough...

• Unfinished - Guy asks if I'd like to talk of...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Unfinished -
  
  Guy asks if I'd like to talk of Valley tales..
  ..high max prison but they call it a county jail.
  Hate conversation so I blow off the convict.
  Found me copping bacon just to...

• I maybe give back but I don't live rap.. I...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I maybe give back but I don't live rap..
  I separate my day-to-day state from my script pad..
  Lay the way like a mint map..
  Light up 'the bay' like the day and hold frame like a ships mast. ...

• Always wanted to slow read this at a poetry jam...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Always wanted to slow read this at a poetry jam or something
  
  sparse cries far and wide
  Forge the silence of foreign pride.
  More defy mortifying skies
  In appraising glance to therefore...

• Nah. You are a no one. By tens I jack the...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Nah. You are a no one.
  By tens I jack the census.
  And double in worth the moment I cap a sentence.
  Licentious - and down to settle a score; rap for vengeance.
  Befriend sententious men to fend...

• I love this piece, great rhyme scheme.. very hard...

  Thread: No Heart Of Stone (18 Replies, 2,922 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I love this piece, great rhyme scheme.. very hard to pull off without over using it but you worked it out. Impressive.

• Unfinished - Guy asks if I'd like to talk of...

  Thread: Transcend (6 Replies, 3,861 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Unfinished -
  
  Guy asks if I'd like to talk of Valley tales..
  ..high max prison but they call it a county jail.
  Hate conversation so I blow off the convict.
  Found me copping bacon just to...

• Hillsborough county HOC (valley street jail)

  Thread: Hillsborough county HOC (valley street jail) (0 Replies, 1,717 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Unfinished -
  
  Guy asks if I'd like to talk of Valley tales..
  ..high max prison but they call it a county jail.
  Hate conversation so I blow off the convict.
  Found me copping bacon just to...

• Great piece you got here.

  Thread: Mistakes we knew we were making (13 Replies, 2,626 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Great piece you got here.

• - "Let the river flow, Like water and the...

  Thread: furious for years (9 Replies, 3,800 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  - "Let the river flow,
  Like water and the duck’s back now
  It’s too late
  To fight this tidal wave
  That’s my hate and you, betrayed
  From all the crazy **** I say
  I can’t take it back
  It’s too...

• I maybe give back but I don't live rap.. I...

  Thread: Transcend (6 Replies, 3,861 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I maybe give back but I don't live rap..
  I separate my day-to-day state from my script pad..
  Lay the way like a mint map..
  Light up 'the bay' like the day and hold frame like a ships mast. ...

• Nah. You are a no one. By tens I jack the...

  Thread: Transcend (6 Replies, 3,861 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Nah. You are a no one.
  By tens I jack the census.
  And double in worth the moment I cap a sentence.
  Licentious - and down to settle a score; rap for vengeance.
  Befriend sententious men to fend...

• Aha thanx

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Aha thanx

• Please do buddy. and I've... been away for a...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Please do buddy.
  and I've... been away for a while. I hadn't forgot about ya'll I just simply couldn't get to a pc. Il definitely be more active this month.

• Haha Doug you know me so well. I know that here...

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Haha Doug you know me so well. I know that here on this forum resides my kind of people. Ill share my stuff first with you guys over anyone. And much appreciated feedback brother I can always count...

• Transcend

  Thread: Transcend (23 Replies, 7,988 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I'd hang ten on the lands end; ..to transcend.
  Free-fall through stakes of great space and plant hemp.
  Deface a mans benz, in total sobriety.
  To 'transcend' - I'd toss up my soul to society. ...

• Transcend

  Thread: Transcend (6 Replies, 3,861 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I'd hang ten on the lands end; ..to transcend.
  Free-fall through stakes of great space and plant hemp.
  Deface a mans benz, in total sobriety.
  To 'transcend' - I'd toss up my soul to society. ...

• Oh well yes it is mostly clips though I mean i...

  Thread: Happy Birthday Janis Joplin (5 Replies, 9,566 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Oh well yes it is mostly clips though I mean i don't think they delve into as much of how the life in port arthur, tx shaped her entire life so extremely; perhaps in some sense being the underlying...

• Oh you know I have Doug;) great movie. That scene...

  Thread: Happy Birthday Janis Joplin (5 Replies, 9,566 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Oh you know I have Doug;) great movie. That scene was quite funny, tho I was disappointed with the historical accuracy. I've managed to dig up an old interview with janis at that reunion.. it's realy...

• I know it's out of place guys but I want it to be...

  Thread: Happy Birthday Janis Joplin (5 Replies, 9,566 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  I know it's out of place guys but I want it to be read I would like to do her justice

• Happy Birthday Janis Joplin

  Thread: Happy Birthday Janis Joplin (5 Replies, 9,566 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Happy birthday Janis Joplin, a Pearl who died sparkling. The great woman would have been exactly 70 years old today, but the legend is timeless. Janis was undoubtedly the link between the likes of...

• "Fam left to transcend" Ill get at you

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  "Fam left to transcend"
  Ill get at you

• Bro I love this piece. Simple yes, but very deep;...

  Thread: I am a **** Up. (2 Replies, 2,206 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Bro I love this piece. Simple yes, but very deep; and cuts to the core. It represents a feeling that I think everyone has in their life but the coolness about it is that most people are either afraid...

• Nah. You are a no one. By tens I jack the...

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Nah.
  You are a no one.
  By tens I jack the census.
  And double in worth the moment I cap a sentence.
  Licentious - and down to settle a score to rap for vengeance.
  Befriend sententious men to...

• You've lost a lot.. All this talk is cheap grade...

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  You've lost a lot..
  All this talk is cheap grade to me - the stock is not.
  Green hay's stalk'll rot.
  And what will come of fall when the rosin is frosted off.
  The roses that you bought died...

• "ey yo, wait though .."Bra off"? ..you arent...

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  "ey yo, wait though .."Bra off"? ..you arent wrong;
  I got wenches emptying cups coz the bar's hot."
  
  That is the sickest line I've seen in a while

• His message says I'm indirect. I will interject...

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  His message says I'm indirect.
  I will interject in effect a hot groove.
  Anything in his text's especially not true.
  If I'm 'indirect' it's to heavily mock vouve.
  I should take a leather leash...

• Vouve your style is very played and very much...

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Vouve your style is very played and very much unimpressive. I'm down to respect a fellow writer but only ones who treat 'battle rap' with genuine respect.
  So in other words; you are very awful.

• Ha best I can do in refrence to being impeached

  Thread: Important Announcement- rap review moderating team. (5 Replies, 2,946 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Ha best I can do in refrence to being impeached

• Why compare molos skillfull ways and skndeep's....

  Thread: Come get slaughtered! (603 Replies, 337,224 Views) by smoothtung

  
  

  Why compare molos skillfull ways and skndeep's.
  The vacant pair saw my triple ace through ripped sleeve.
  I roam the coast; Chris is only safe on six seas.
  I'll shark him scrape the surface til it...