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Thread: Please comment! Thanks (1 Replies, 2,898 Views) by SarahMostul
Why care?
Ten years from now it won't matter at all
Life is never what you thought it would be
And you can't see me now
This is what's happening:
I'm almost as far in as you
Lying awake at...
Thread: Go the F*** Away (3 Replies, 2,887 Views) by SarahMostul
haha not at all! thanks for pointing that out!
Thread: That Tuesday Night (1 Replies, 1,027 Views) by SarahMostul
I thought the first part was good:)...tho the second is definitely my favorite
I can't wait to read it finished!
Thread: Miles apart (2 Replies, 1,665 Views) by SarahMostul
suuuuper cute!! I'm in a long distance relationship and this is exactly how I feel!
Thread: Inner workings of a nice guy. READ AND COMMENT PLEASE. (3 Replies, 1,131 Views) by SarahMostul
i liked this song a lot, especially the last two verses. I haven't read your other songs either..i'll be looking for them!
Thread: Are these lyrics okay, and what should the title be? (4 Replies, 1,080 Views) by SarahMostul
great lyrics!
you could probably use a line from your song as a title like "out of hell"
Thread: Go the F*** Away (3 Replies, 2,887 Views) by SarahMostul
Just leave me alone
I'm exausted
I'm sick to death
And I never want to see you again
Or anyone else
Everyone is pushing in at every angle
There's nothing to see!
There's nothing underneath!
Thread: friends hurting you (2 Replies, 4,561 Views) by SarahMostul
know any songs?
Thread: Yet another song. (5 Replies, 1,102 Views) by SarahMostul
I especially liked this verse
So cute!
You're song about taylor swift is a little scary but I like your songs
Thread: SAD POEM: Try, Fail, and Pretend You Don't Feel Their Disappointment (5 Replies, 4,185 Views) by SarahMostul
I agree it's hard to understand
but after rereading it several times I do like it
Thread: know any songs about stupid boys?? (2 Replies, 9,256 Views) by SarahMostul
who don't know the effects of the things they say? and they keep digging themselves deeper holes
Thread: the devils crime..looking for some critiquing (7 Replies, 1,629 Views) by SarahMostul
Wow this is really good
The third verse is amazing! (sad, but very strong=)
I'm not sure what to critique!
Thread: Dizzy (1 Replies, 1,156 Views) by SarahMostul
Needs some work
It's kind of a colby caillat style
What do you think?
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I went out with you today
I never suspected a thing
Thread: blue skies (2 Replies, 1,026 Views) by SarahMostul
Aww this is beautiful! I love the chorus! Keep on writing you're really good!
Thread: The Still-life (comment please!!) (2 Replies, 2,643 Views) by SarahMostul
During the night is when I write about you
It is then that I can see through your eyes
You look upon the world as if no one else is there
We are nothing to you but empty ossuaries, lying in the...
Thread: Most beautiful lyrics of all! (126 Replies, 156,882 Views) by SarahMostul
"Better Together" by Jack Johnson
There's no combination of words
I could put on the back of a postcard
No song that I could sing
But I can try for your heart
Our dreams, and they are made out...
Thread: My "Super" Lyrics (1 Replies, 976 Views) by SarahMostul
ha i like it
Thread: Peter (1 Replies, 1,586 Views) by SarahMostul
It's short..and my first original!
Let me know what you think!
"Peter"
(vs. 1)
Freshman year is gone
And I’m left wondering
What it would be like
Thread: Mother (1 Replies, 2,734 Views) by SarahMostul
This is my first poem
Let me know what you think!
"Mother"
Whatever I go through in life
Whatever sins and habits overtake me
Whatever I become
Please don’t let me be like her
Thread: Beautifully Hidden lyrics (4 Replies, 1,804 Views) by SarahMostul
beautiful
I especially liked the first verse
Thread: You belong with me by Taylor Swift (rewritten) (1 Replies, 2,363 Views) by SarahMostul
I love the song "You belong with me" by Taylor Swift!
I changed the lyrics up a bit to more of a long distance thing
My best friend and the guy I think I'm in love with lives really far away so I...